Date: 08/15/08 08:22 pm Title: The Golden Rule
I feel so bad for Tom, being trapped by Kevin like that! D:
I love flirty Bill though, who doesn't even care about Kevin or the rule! ;D
Great chapter! ^-^
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm kinda liking flirty Bill myself. :D
Date: 08/15/08 08:19 pm Title: The Golden Rule
Gah! That Kevin guy sounds like a paranoid, obsessive, possesive dick-head to be perfectly honest.
I can't believe he doesn't see what he is doing to Tom. Sorry I do tend to get a bit carried away.
Well pattylake that was AWESOME I can't wait for more. i loved it. I just wanted to give Toma hug all teh way through that. Andreas did bug me though trying to prevent Bill and Tom, huh cheek lol.
Keep Writing this.
Broken-Glass
xx
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. And I will definitely keep writing. You can get carried away as much as you want. Thanks!
Date: 08/15/08 08:12 pm Title: The Golden Rule
Awww Tomi is so cute!
Trying to make sure Bill does not get hurt!
Author's Response: He's just a big ol huggie bear isn't he. He deserves cuddles. :D
Date: 08/15/08 12:39 pm Title: Watermelon Gum
Aw I feel so bad for Tom. I liked this chapter a lot because it expands on the kind of relationship Tom and Kevin have.
Author's Response: That was what I was trying to go for, glad you liked it. :D I appreciate the review so much!
Date: 08/15/08 12:37 pm Title: Watermelon Gum
Ohhhh. CONTINUE! I'm not gonna lie this is one of the best high school fics out there the drama and set up is amazing!^^
Author's Response: Aww *blush* thanks for the compliment. I'll keep trying my best to please. :D
Date: 08/15/08 08:50 am Title: Watermelon Gum
Poor Tomi! *tries to hug him*
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It will be up tonight. :D Thanks for taking the time to talk to me, I appreciate it!
Date: 08/15/08 06:53 am Title: The Introduction
I hate that Kevin guy.
*Throws rocks at Kevin*
I loved the chapter though! ;D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :) You cracked me up with the rocks, LOL. Thanks again for reading and reviewing, it means a lot. :D
Date: 08/15/08 04:56 am Title: Watermelon Gum
jojojo Kevin is really annoying MUAJAJA but I like him o_O omg I like this Tom too! He's really really sweet! My golden boy!!
Author's Response: I love Golden Boy Tom too. :D You like Kevin?? *gasp* Kidding. Thank you for reading, I really appreciate it!
Date: 08/15/08 04:38 am Title: The Introduction
xD amazing xDDD and really funny, I'm going to read it for sure x)!!
Author's Response: Great! Thank you, I appreciate it so much. :D
Date: 08/15/08 03:04 am Title: Watermelon Gum
awww poor tomi. i just want to hug him!! i cant wait for the next chapter! this is a really good story! keep up the good work :]
Author's Response: I shall try my very best. :D Thank you for reading it and taking the time to review!
Date: 08/14/08 11:54 pm Title: Watermelon Gum
Wow. This story is really different, and I reeeally like it already! This chapter isn't boring at all =) Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing it! I hope to not disappoint with the chapter that I post tonight. :)
Date: 08/14/08 11:17 pm Title: Watermelon Gum
no no it wasnt boring at all. Infact I think you just gave us something interesting. When you vey first spoke of Kevin I thought I'd hate him but in this chapter I realized there's nothing to hate. I'm annoyed sure but most people can relate. Everyone, at some poit, has had an obssesion. Also I really like you switching poit of views. This is already starting off great. It's even better since this s your first story. =] Update really soon please!
Author's Response: I can't decide if I hate Kevin or not...pretty sure I do though. LOL. I'm glad you like the switching points of view, I can't figure out how else to do it justice. I'll add the next chapter tonight. :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/14/08 11:00 pm Title: Watermelon Gum
you have not disappointed me in anyway the storie keeps getting better and better..can wait to see what happens in the next chapter
Author's Response: Yay! No disappointment yet. :D I will update again tonight.
Date: 08/14/08 10:09 pm Title: Watermelon Gum
This chapter was GREAT! I loved it! the banner looks awesome btw!
Author's Response: Aww thanks for the banner love. That blasted thing was hard. Gah! I need a how to book on that stuff. Thank you for the review! :D
Date: 08/14/08 09:49 pm Title: Watermelon Gum
it wasnt boring more like informative i guess i filler chapter. i hope you update the next chapter soon. and i hope bill will be in it as well as tom. and of course bill and tom together. lol
Author's Response: I will certainly include them both for you. :D Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 08/14/08 06:04 pm Title: The Introduction
This is so interesting! please continue! i'm going to put this on my favorites :]
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for putting me on your favorites. :D I shall try my best to stay there.
Date: 08/14/08 03:38 pm Title: The Introduction
Sucks?! DD: No way!
I love the plot and the characters
already =D
Author's Response: Thank you! This writing stuff isn't as easy as it looks and character development is hard. :( But I so appreciate it! :D
Date: 08/14/08 08:22 am Title: The Introduction
very nice start, poor tommi needs some help:(:( sure hope bill wont listen to andy:)
Author's Response: My Bill isn't very good at listening. :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/14/08 06:17 am Title: The Introduction
You can't tell! This is great! :D
It's really original, I love it so far^^
Update soon! *Blows Pattylake a kiss*
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much. I will update later today after I edit the next chapter. I really appreciate the kindness. :)
Date: 08/14/08 12:25 am Title: The Introduction
Dang this sounds really good. It was a great beginning too.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and especially taking the time to review it. :D