Date: 02/01/08 07:29 am Title: A pain in the ass
I'm itching to know what will happen to bill on the party. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Uw, I wont keep ypu itching too long...
Date: 02/01/08 06:47 am Title: A pain in the ass
AKKK!! MORE! I NEED MORE!!!
Author's Response: Oh no, I seem to have caused an addiction!! *shouts* can we get help heere??
Date: 02/01/08 05:19 am Title: A pain in the ass
Yaaay this made my daaay :D
Author's Response: Aw, I loved that comment :D
Date: 02/01/08 04:47 am Title: A pain in the ass
yay! this is so goooooooood! please more
Author's Response: Be patient, I'm a very busy lil lady, lol... Thanku so much for readin :D
Date: 02/01/08 03:20 am Title: A pain in the ass
Hva skete der lige der? Hvorfor vil Tom pludselig have ham med? Okay jeg er virkelig nysgerrig nu...
Kan godt huske når ens forældre prøvede at få en til at være social med mennesker man ikke kunne lide. Irriterende! Hmm... Er da glad for at der ikke kommer til at gå lige så lang tid før den bliver opdateret igen... Du forstår virkelig at lave en "cliff-hanger"!
Author's Response: Hehe, er da glad for at jeg kan holde jer interessede, hehe.. For at være helt helt ærlig, så er jeg faktisk allerede næsten færdig med næste del, men den venter jeg lige lidt med, fordi jeg gerne vil godt i gang med den næste igen også... Så skal I nemlig ikke venteså længe som I gjorde denne gang... =)
Date: 02/01/08 03:19 am Title: A pain in the ass
You never disappoint me, the chapters are just getting better and better! Can´t wait to read the next one! Great work!
Author's Response: Thankyou so much, uh, I'm all afraid of disappointing you now *blushing* lol
Date: 02/01/08 03:13 am Title: Drunken Nights
yeah, but it's likelier that she does... anyways, don't keep us waiting for as long as you did with this chapter, that's mean :(
Author's Response: Aww I'm so sorry for keeping you waiting - I don't have much time for writing right now, but I'll do my best...
Date: 02/01/08 03:04 am Title: A pain in the ass
yeah, some bitch to keep him busy... does she have long black hair and warm brown eyes and the same address as him?
Author's Response: Lol, she miiight? But then again, she might not.. :P
Date: 01/29/08 08:51 am Title: "Je veux mourir"
It's really good!!
More!! :D
Author's Response: I'm working on it, but my school is really takin all my time atm, so sorry! I'll update as soon as I can <3
Date: 01/26/08 05:39 pm Title: "Je veux mourir"
I feel so depressed for Bill. I am so angry with Tom right now. I wish Bill could or would say something so hurtful that it drives Tom up-the-wall insane. Maybe you can make it so that Bill's stops going to school altogether? I so would.
Make Tomi get Bill's ipod back. pweease T,T I feel so bad for him.
I love your story. and I really apologize that I haven't commented on the other previous chapters, but I only JUST came across your story and I wanted to see if it were worth commenting. I realized by the third that it's a DEFINITE good story but couldn't get myself to stop and review.
I'm sorry. But I will from here on out.
Take Care and happy Writing!
~Ria
Author's Response: Aww thankyou so much :D
Date: 01/20/08 05:31 am Title: "Je veux mourir"
Hey !
you made a little mistake when you wanted to translate "bite me ,Tom ." ==> "Mords moi" and not "mordez moi" mordez it's a form of respect ,for people older ,old people ,not for your brother =) (I'm french )
really love your fiction !
The story is very special ,it's a real pleasure !
I'm so sad for Bill ... are you going to torture him a lot later ?
Tom lie ?
I can't wait for the next !
Author's Response: Lol, thankyou for correcting me, I don't know a word of french so it's good that you do, lol... Yeah I'm gonna torture him good, you'll wait to see how <3 thankyou for reading..
Date: 01/18/08 04:00 pm Title: "Je veux mourir"
hihi =P
i loved it and can't wait for more XD
Author's Response: Thanku for reading <3
Date: 01/18/08 10:52 am Title: "Je veux mourir"
aww..poor Bill
Tom is really being nasty...I want him to be nice.. ;)
and does he relaly not remember? hm..this is intersting, I want more :)
Author's Response: Your right, it is actually interesting.. Og cant wait se see what happens :D ....oh wait, I'm the one thats writing it? Lol, anyway thanku so much for reading <3
Date: 01/18/08 10:30 am Title: "Je veux mourir"
Argh!!!! I'm going mental!!! I want to know if Tom remembers the night with Bill??!! And you are not helping me!!! Argh!!!!
But anyway love it!!
Please continue soon...?
Author's Response: Lol sorry, yeah, I'll try to write soon - keep reading <3
Date: 01/18/08 08:27 am Title: "Je veux mourir"
I enjoyed doing things we weren’t supposed to do under your covers… WTF ok now Tom is either being really really mean or just plain stupid poooooooor Bill
please keep up the good work of updating cus I need more really really do !!!
Author's Response: Well maybe he's being both mean and stupid? Lol.. Thanku for reading <3
Date: 01/18/08 02:45 am Title: "Je veux mourir"
I hate those stupid guys in school! T_T ! And Tom is such a wierdo ! I love this story very much :) Great work hun!
Author's Response: Thanku so much - keep reading, I'll try too update soon =)
Date: 01/17/08 11:29 pm Title: "Je veux mourir"
Argh! Prøver du bevidst at tage livet af mig her? Du kan da ikke bare slutte kapitlet sådan?
Du skriver faktisk vildt godt!
Det stykke hvor Bill blev mobbet foran skolen fik mig til at blive helt sørgmodig indeni. Det fremkaldte et billede af en grå regnvejrsdag og en masse navnløse ansigter der grinede indeni mig. Du ramte den helt rigtige nerve der.
Jeg synes at de historier de skriver herinde er en del bedre end "Unser Traum". Kiggede den igennem på et tidspunkt fordi min søster er helt vild med den. Ikke for at kritisere den, men det virker som om den mere er skrevet til piger i 14-16 års alderen. Har jeg ret?
Author's Response: Ja, det her inde er en hel del anderledes end Unser Traum. UT's målgruppe er præcis som du siger 12 - 16 årige, hvilket også er størstedelen af vores læsere. Det jeg skriver herinde giver mig bedre muligheder for at udtrykke mig på en mere artistisk måde i forhold til Unser Traum, da dette herinde både er på engelsk og twincest, hvilket jeg elsker! Mette, som jeg skriver Unser Traum sammen med, hader twincest og har en anden og mere direkte og enkel skrivestil end mig, da jeg er mere den beskrivende og følelsesmæssige type... Så 1000 tak for din kommentar, er stolt af at jeg kan finde ud af at skrive flere forskellige typer historier - bliv endelig ved med at læse <3
Date: 01/17/08 08:16 pm Title: "Je veux mourir"
Ooh.. Just found this tonight, and am looking forward to the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: Thanku for reading and for the review =D
Date: 01/17/08 05:43 pm Title: Forbidden Feelings
*CRIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*
Author's Response: Sorry if I confused you Jinxy *pads jinxchan on the head*
Date: 01/17/08 05:36 pm Title: Forbidden Feelings
*CRIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*
Author's Response: Aww no don't cry...