Date: 09/03/10 08:52 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
i love it keep going plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Date: 10/03/09 05:20 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
continue!
Date: 05/11/09 09:11 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
Im a first timer and i must say that this story is amazing.
Date: 03/22/09 04:27 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
I really like this story! Its funny yet sad at the same time! Please up-date soon!
Date: 02/28/09 08:58 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
When are you going to post the next chapter? Can't wait to read more
Author's Response: uhm.. im working on the next chapter... any ideas? im kind of out of ideas atm =[
Date: 12/29/08 07:42 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
my my this one is soo great! plz keep it up!
Date: 12/18/08 12:22 am Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
i love it....
Date: 12/17/08 07:59 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
Oh my...
Date: 12/17/08 07:50 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
ok so i dont really know how to write a review but please please please continue with this story!!!
Date: 12/17/08 04:08 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
I want more :)
I like this story! I relly do you write like a Gud!!!
Date: 12/17/08 02:36 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
All I have to say is wow... this is sweet
Date: 12/17/08 02:04 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
advice: make the intamite scence with more detail discrb it more do the same with kisses and how they might feel also it hurts when some one fucks u raw like tom did to bill in this chapter
i love it the plot is awsome and i like how u wrote it from bill's point of view
Date: 12/17/08 01:34 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
Yum! Interested to see what all is going to happen between Simone and Bill.
Date: 12/17/08 01:27 pm Title: 6 :: deeper and intimate
i think that bill should be as mean as he wants to be to simone.
what she did was messed up, but i adore tom
Date: 12/15/08 07:14 pm Title: 5 :: 1095 letters
omg...twincest....i love u.....=]
Author's Response: lawl thankx =]
Date: 12/15/08 06:58 pm Title: 5 :: 1095 letters
I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON
Author's Response: I will I promise ^_^
Date: 12/15/08 06:41 pm Title: 5 :: 1095 letters
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!! PLSSSSSS DO NOT STOP! i really like the storyline you are so creative!
Author's Response: Thanks for your support :)
Date: 12/15/08 06:35 pm Title: 5 :: 1095 letters
Awww... Is all I can say
Date: 12/15/08 06:26 pm Title: 5 :: 1095 letters
carry on please!
love it!
:D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 12/15/08 05:53 pm Title: 5 :: 1095 letters
OH!
*tear*
SO SO SO SO
SO SO SO SO
SO SO SO SO
SO SO SO SO
SO SO SO SO
Sad!!!!
But really good, update soon, pretty pretty pretty pretty PLEASE!!!?!?!?!
Author's Response: I will update soon I promise thanks for reviewing