Date: 12/12/08 10:09 am Title: 1 :: He promised
greeeeat! Really good, so please more :D
*ading this to faves*
Date: 12/10/08 11:53 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
i want u to continue. it is really good, and i really want to know why tom broke his promise.
Author's Response: thank you so much. I posted chap 4 but it keeps getting rejected =/
Date: 12/10/08 10:54 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
your story is really interesting! it would be a shame if you discontinued it >.<
perhaps in future chapters you could add more insight into what toms feeling? You don't have to, its still good in Bills POV :]
Author's Response: yeah from chap 4 onwards I'll be writing in Normal pov. I just wanted you to get familiar with Bill's feelings first
Date: 12/10/08 10:44 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
Please continue.....
I usually avoid first person fics like crazy, but this is actually well written. Looking forward to reading more of it. I wish this site had some kind of alert system to let you know about updates.....
Author's Response: aww how sweet... thanks for your kind words hun... I'll post chap 4 soon (it's ready)
Date: 12/10/08 10:42 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
i really like ur story. i cant wait for the next chapter. : )
Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing my story hun =]
Date: 12/10/08 10:40 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
Please continue.....
I usually avoid first person fics like crazy, but this is actually well written. Looking forward to reading more of it. I wish this site had some kind of alert system to let you know about updates.....
Date: 12/10/08 08:33 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
Aw! I dunno who I should be more upset about! Dx
Tom for being a butt and never keeping in touch,
Or bill for yelling at tom for never keeping in touch. xD
Great Update!!!
More soon please!
Author's Response: thank you so much :}rnrnwho knows maybe Tom did keep in touch :P:Prnyou just have to keep on reading and discover what really happened
Date: 12/10/08 08:05 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
I think you should continue the story I really like the plot idea for it and if you are getting writers block it could help to have a co-author writing with you :)
Author's Response: thanks =]
Date: 12/10/08 05:50 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
I want you....
to give up.....
ON GIVING UP!!!!!!!!
I am in love with this story now. ^__^
I can't wait for more. =]
Author's Response: awww thank you so much... thanks for supporting me and my story =]
Date: 12/10/08 05:35 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
It's a liiiittle... er... boring, It needs more drama, but it's okay :D keep going
Author's Response: more drama soon. I just needed to introduce you to Bill's feelings first
Date: 12/10/08 04:49 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
do continue please, this story has a lot of potential in it. I'm very curious bout the next chapter.
Author's Response: next chap coming soon dont worry...
Date: 12/10/08 03:30 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
Ofcourse continue! x3! I love it! ;)
Author's Response: thanks =]
Date: 12/10/08 02:10 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
Please, keep going...I like when is Bill the tought one for a change...
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing hun ^_^
Date: 12/10/08 02:03 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
I love this story and was so excited to see an update. I would hate for you not to continue it so...PLEASE CONTINUE!!! Lovely job on this chapter, by the way.
Author's Response: I'll do my best to continue... I need some ideas though so if you can help... I'll be more than glad =]
Date: 12/10/08 01:47 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
MORE!!!
Im so in love with your story! It so good!! One of the best ever!!!
More soon?
Author's Response: Ja I'll try my best to post another chapter as quickly as possible ^_^ thanks for your kind words
Date: 12/10/08 01:43 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
MORE! MORE! MORE!
Author's Response: more soon =]
Date: 12/10/08 01:28 pm Title: 3 :: Bill is that you?
Oh wow, poor Bill, really. But it wasn't Tom's fault, he was so young. Bless their hearts. :( Why on earth was Bill left there?
Author's Response: ja i think I should make this clear. Bill was left there because the law says that if there are two children, then each parent takes a child (unless one of the parents is unwilling to take care of the child or is not capable of doing so) ... thanks for reading and reviewinf
Date: 09/14/08 03:42 pm Title: 2 :: you look like him
MORE LIKE NOW!!! I NEED MORE NOW!!!!! Shit i´m screaming!
I fell sorry for Bill :'(
My english is very bad so i´m sorry for the bad review
Author's Response: awww thank you so much for your support :).. I'm working on a new chapter so dont worry I'll post more soon :)
Date: 08/14/08 06:22 am Title: 2 :: you look like him
more more more more!! I want more!! this is the best FanFics!!
Author's Response: aww thank you so much for your kind words.. more to come very very soon ^_^
Date: 08/14/08 04:53 am Title: 2 :: you look like him
you should definitely carry on :D:D
update soon ok ??
Author's Response: aww thanks for you review.. more to come very very soon I promise :)