Date: 11/15/08 07:08 pm Title: Eskimo kisses.
damn. now bill wont be able to kill tom's dad the way he had planned...oh well. *EEEEK!!* i love you so much!!!
(and I love your giggles) =D
Author's Response: *blushes* I know, Bill was origanally gonna kill that bastard, but I found something better. heehee, Jeezzz you make me so happy!! *raises fist* TRUIMPH!!!
Date: 11/15/08 06:59 pm Title: Eskimo kisses.
yay!!
Update:DD
More soon? *puppy dog eyes*
Author's Response: *giggles* Of course Maddie anything for you!! *pets you*
Date: 11/15/08 06:53 pm Title: Eskimo kisses.
omg jorg dead wow
u have to countine this like now bitte
Author's Response: I know. I hated him amywayz. The bastard. HeeHee, I will... and then You'll know WHY he's dead. MUHAHAHAHA!!!
Date: 11/15/08 06:16 pm Title: Eskimo kisses.
oh my god.... that was amazing
damn, you know how to write a good story hun!!!!!!! UPDATE IT!!!!!!
Author's Response: *Giggles and claps like crazy* You know how to make me SO happyyyy!!!! I will I promiseee!!!!! Thank you!! <3rn
Date: 11/09/08 04:07 pm Title: See you've got one too.
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!
that was THE BEST EVER
and i have happy tears :'D
Author's Response: I love happy TEARS!! OMG OMG OMG!! You are AMAZING!! =-D
Date: 11/08/08 11:17 pm Title: See you've got one too.
yes! ( not to pick... but re-read it and touch it up a bit >.> cuz i know you care about your work and it has some wobbles. ) i love how you pulled in the title to tie it in like you had earlier mentioned.
Author's Response: I know, my english sucks. I tried to fix it up as best of my abilities, but I guess I missed some!! But thank you SO much!!
Date: 11/08/08 10:57 pm Title: Graceful?
tantalizing tid bit... so excited to get to the "meat" of the story... pun intended. and i know i stated it before but your visualization is great.
Author's Response: HeeHee, thank you!! I love your reviews, they make my soul melt!
Date: 11/08/08 07:15 pm Title: See you've got one too.
O.O .....OMG.... That was amazing. Now I'm going to be a mess for work. Hahah. Oh, well. It was worth it. =DDD
Author's Response: HeeHee, I love when I have that effect on people!! YESSSS!!!
Date: 11/08/08 04:29 pm Title: See you've got one too.
d:)LOVE IT SOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I LOVE YOUUUUUU!!!! =-D
Date: 11/08/08 04:01 pm Title: See you've got one too.
Aaaw! =D
Author's Response: HeeHee, cuteness!! <3
Date: 11/08/08 03:41 pm Title: See you've got one too.
I love... you rock and ur story rocks!
Author's Response: No hun-eh!! You rock!! <3
Date: 11/08/08 02:29 pm Title: See you've got one too.
WOOOOOOTTT! :)
ahaah bill really makes me laugh!!!
you have distracted me from doing homework...AND IT WAS WORTH IT! :)
lmoa
ilu
Author's Response: heehee thank you!! I love you too hun-eh!!!! homework bad. we should make a club!!rn
Date: 11/08/08 02:00 pm Title: See you've got one too.
Ohh Hot =D Lovee itt
Bill cute ^.^..little horny but thats okay
Amazing chapter!
Author's Response: HeeHee, thank you!! I thought Bill should be really cute when horny, i think that just makes him more amazing. Just what I came up with in my head. <3
Date: 11/08/08 01:35 pm Title: See you've got one too.
omg
HOTT!!!!
=D
loooved it!
amazing chapter
=D
Author's Response: HeeHee! thank you so much!! I'm glad you loved it!!! <3 <3 <3 x]
Date: 11/08/08 01:21 pm Title: Graceful?
i just read the whole thing today.
I love it!
=D
omg this is too cute!
it sucks how they're parents treat them.
i love how Tom is opening up to Bill.
this is so good.
update soon!
I'll continue to review!
=D
Author's Response: YAY!!! You little magical reader you!! heehee, I do too!! I will I promise! YEEEEEESSS!!! <3
Date: 11/08/08 07:58 am Title: See you've got one too.
Omg, I love you! XD
Thank you so much for writing & posting this story. :D
Keep up the good work. ^^
Author's Response: HeeHee, I love you too! *giggles* thank you so so so much for making my day, after I just had a review make me cry!! thank you SO much! x]
Date: 11/08/08 03:36 am Title: See you've got one too.
There's a lot of grammer that could be fixed, and words rearanged so that the story reads better. You mentioned that you had a beta, but you need a better one.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry :( I'm not american, I'm German, and my english sucks. I didn't ask Lottie to beta this chapter because she happens to be one of my readers, and she was excited. I didn't want to ruin the surprise. I'm so so so sorry.
Date: 11/07/08 11:49 pm Title: See you've got one too.
this chapter was awesome!! your really good at sex scenes!!! cant wait to read more, love it!! -)
Author's Response: YOU ARE MY 100th REVIEWER!!!!! I love you!! thank you so much!!! x]
Date: 11/07/08 10:54 pm Title: See you've got one too.
yup we all care... well i guess i can't speak for everyone. but i care a lot more than you think about this story ;) it rocks my world :) they are so hot ;) hehe i wouldn't let anybody take it away too MOUWAHAHAHA :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! AWEYYYYYYYYYYY!!! that's adorable! Yay!! *claps* heehee <3
Date: 11/07/08 09:43 pm Title: See you've got one too.
Hallo! ^^ nice job, even though it went a tiny*moves fingers together* bit fast, it was still hot and awesome! :D
Author's Response: Hallo!!!! Thank you My love!! *pouts* awwweeeyyyy.... well at least I did SOMETHING right!!! <3