Date: 08/16/08 05:23 pm Title: So talk....
*gasp* DDDDDD: omg... poor Tomi!!!! DDDDDD"X and I wish that your chapters were like... in the 1000's for words ;__; because I hate short chapters... fishie needs long ones because she reads so fassssst...
Author's Response: *huggies for fishie!!* rnI had fun writting this chapter though, yeah but i just can't sit still that long...rnRAWR to me!!!
Date: 08/16/08 03:34 pm Title: So talk....
ahahh, I loved the chatting part : D
more soon ? ^^
Author's Response: Hee Hee thank you!!! rnI think Tom might talk soon *ponders*rnMore soon, on your request...rnXD
Date: 08/16/08 01:53 pm Title: I'm big and you're small
oooohhhhh continue
Author's Response: Hee Hee I deff. will, sorry it took so long to get this chapter out of the wound, and sorry now for the sucky banner I made... XD
Date: 08/14/08 02:25 pm Title: I'm big and you're small
*grabs the Tokio Hotel cup cake* om nom nom!
I really like this! Just can't wait until Tom finally speaks. XD Well, great job anyways! :D
Author's Response: *eats Cup cake with you*rnOoOoOo thank you!!!rn*winks*rnme either,rnI think I have it planned out though...rnXDrnrn
Date: 08/14/08 12:33 pm Title: I'm big and you're small
i find it interesting its gud!
Author's Response: Im glad!!rnI thought everyone was gonna be like, this is terrible!! stop writing!!rnthank you!!!rnXD
Date: 08/14/08 05:53 am Title: I'm big and you're small
*Thumbs up* : D
Great story!
More soon ? ^^
Author's Response: *hugs you*rnThank you!!!rnim extreamly gladd you like it!!!rnMore is deffinatly on the way!!rnXD
Date: 08/13/08 11:13 pm Title: I'm big and you're small
mmm cupcakes... so why won't Tomi talk to his soul mate Billi? hmph... quite dazzling, however.
I do like this, however, one thing: do you think you could keep it in just one point of view, instead of switching it so often? like keep it in 3rd POV so everyone knows what they're thinking. or just ONE persons POV. I dunno, it'd just be a lot easier, I think. but that's just my opinion.
continue writing, though!! I want an update soon!
Author's Response: Hee Hee, you'll find out I think in the next two chapters.... XDrnAbout the whole P.O.V. switch, its just like, I have to do so everyones, thoughts and feelings are shown, but I'll give it a try, and see if I like it.rnOf course, the naxt chapter won't be so confusing!! hopefully!! *keeps fingers crossed*rncheck in soon!!rn
Date: 08/13/08 11:06 pm Title: I'm big and you're small
I like the plot and everything and how you've written it ;__; but I still saw lots of grammatical/punctation errors... and I love my torgy (RetteLeana)D"X I really do... but ja ;__; just saw quite a few mistakes here and there. I tend to notice it a lot more when most people don't lol ^.^ But I still really liked this chapter =P *loves on you* and torgy D: fishie lubzes you toooz!!! *cuddle*
Author's Response: YAY!!! it's so weird usually i'm the one like "I love your story", and now it's you!! hee hee I love it. *loves you bakk* Retteleana its AWH-SUMM!! *hugs RetteLeana*
Date: 08/12/08 08:33 pm Title: He might have to pull out the big guns on this one...
Short but interesting! I think you could have played the begining out a bit more but it's a fair start ^^. btw, I think I said the title should be "Sheltered from the Storm" in the box ;P...
Just a thing I noticed, I don't think Bill's mum would be capable of actually driving him to school when she's high... plus wouldn't she be in a good mood since it's a high? But quite interested in where you're going to take this...
Author's Response: Sheltered by the Storm fits way better, and you'll find out why in later chapters...rnBill's mom has been doing drugs for years(in fact bill was born a heroine addict), so shes learned how to drived while high, because she's pretty much always high, and has things to do. Bill annoys the shit out of her, she practacly hates him, and thinks he's a burdon, so if she was alone, or with someone else she would be in a good mood. I'm really glad that your intrested!!! hee hee XD
Date: 08/12/08 03:24 pm Title: He might have to pull out the big guns on this one...
Interesting!! Go on!!
Author's Response: I shall, thank you!!! hee hee XD
Date: 08/12/08 02:13 pm Title: He might have to pull out the big guns on this one...
seems interesting. I wanna read it. hopefully they'll become friends quickly. that'd be so aweomse. Gustav and Georg are a grade and two above, right? what grade are they in.. hm...
haha sorry, rambling.
anyway, update soon!!!
Author's Response: WOOT!!! Umm... Bill and Tom are in Tenth I think(im horrible at making up my mind) XD No I like the rambling!! It makes me all tingly!! georg and gustav are in Grade twelve, and best friends(and mean), but you'll find out more of that next chappie!! Coming soon(to a theatre near you-hee hee had to add that)!!XD
Date: 08/12/08 01:58 pm Title: He might have to pull out the big guns on this one...
:DDDD *loves on you* XDDDD I love this!!! And I feel so speshhhuullll!!!! ._. but... D: it was kinda short and does Bill's Mutti hit himmmm???? ;__; and you should ask Veestone to make you a banner ;) she's uberly awesome at that. ^^ I lubzes you wifey!!!!! *cuddle*
Author's Response: The next chappie is so much longer!!! *blushes and loves you back*, CoughCoughICantTellYouCoughCough *wink*, Ezmye is making my banner (I practically forced her) hee hee!! I Lurvie you too!!! *kisses* XD
Date: 08/12/08 01:35 pm Title: He might have to pull out the big guns on this one...
hehe i like it already ^^=
Author's Response: YAY!!!, Aww thank you, *eyes tear up* you don't know how much it means to me!!!
Date: 08/12/08 01:19 pm Title: He might have to pull out the big guns on this one...
I think thos story is gonna be great! more soon ? :)
Author's Response: Oh thnx!! *hugs you tightly* yep more on the way shortly!! So check by tomarrow!!! XD
Date: 08/12/08 01:18 pm Title: He might have to pull out the big guns on this one...
I really like it already, so you better update soon, ok?
Author's Response: *claps and jumps up and down like a fool* Of course!! Check by tomarrow, I've already finished the second chappie, I just have to get it bata'd!!! Oh miene Gott, It'll be updated for you!!