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Reviewer: lililu7777777 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/08 08:27 pm Title: A fight you were asking to lose...

tom spoke!!!! ^-^
yyyyyyyyaaaaaaayyyyyyyyy!!! XD
total awesomeness :D
please update soon

Author's Response: *gasp* he did? *looks around*Hee Hee just kidding, I was like, He has Got to slip up, because Bill has some freaky deaky powers over people(ME!!!) sometimes!!! hee hee, thank you!! muhahahahahahahahaha~*sticks out tounge*Maybe...

Reviewer: xxchainbillupxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/08 08:20 pm Title: A fight you were asking to lose...

ah i really like this story. and ahhhhh tom spoke!!! =D update soon

Author's Response: Hee Hee,Im extremly glad!!! I know, I was like, let's let him slip up a bit, I mean it is bill, and he does have some freaky deaky magical powers over people(ME!!!) I will hun-eh! =-D

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/08/08 08:01 pm Title: A fight you were asking to lose...

Hah that bit made me laugh out loud. My room mate thinks I'm crazy now but this chapter was cute! I can't wait for them to develop more!

Author's Response: Where Bill fell on his ass? That was my favorite part, hee hee, oh well, he was bound to think you were crazy sometime(just kidding, I love ya) thank you, me either, I can't believe my puny mind came up with that, but oh well... =-D

Reviewer: ShatteredToPieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/08 07:56 pm Title: A fight you were asking to lose...

:D I loved it yet again! If I knew how to add favorites, I would add this XD

Author's Response: YAY!!! Not to sound greedy, but do you want me to tell you how??? Hee hee for you not for me , hun-eh, Thank you SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO much!!

Reviewer: ShatteredToPieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/08 02:21 am Title: Sheltered by the Storm

:D*jumps up and down* I feel happy now^^ and special! Anywaaaaayy I liked this chapter alot to^^ very very good!

Author's Response: *jumps up and down with you!!!*rnI'm glad!!!rnthank you!!!

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 10:39 pm Title: Sheltered by the Storm

YAY! this chapter was beautiful and so sad. I love how it ended and hope for more soom!

Author's Response: Woot Woot!!!rn*tear* rnthank you!!!rnXXDDD

Reviewer: XelleXX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 10:02 pm Title: Sheltered by the Storm

AWEE!
This is SOO adorable! I LOVE it!

Author's Response: Hee heernThank you!!rnI love people who review like you!!rn^_^

Reviewer: Dahlia-Starr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 03:01 am Title: Sheltered by the Storm

Awww love it XD I wish I had a place like that..it sounds so pretty!
I cant wait for more! Tom and Bill are too cute =P

Author's Response: *smiles like a fool*rnThank you!!!rnI know right, me too!rnMore's comming your way!!rnXXDDD

Reviewer: Alina Van Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 04:43 pm Title: Sheltered by the Storm

Very good play on the name. Lovely. :D

Author's Response: Thank you, rnI felt that I had to get that in there somewhere, becuase people were saying they didn't get the name...rnHee heern^_^

Reviewer: laughingatyourface Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 02:21 pm Title: Sheltered by the Storm

They will catch a cold O_o

Lol, random xD

Author's Response: <_>rnI noticed that to,rnBut I think I'll have them have really good immune systems.rnHee heernRandomness is my thing!!rnXXXDDD

Reviewer: K WitchWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 01:59 pm Title: Sheltered by the Storm

more soon please!! and nice depiction of the forest / trees/ swing/ lake. i can really grasp a visual. sweet.

Author's Response: Hee Hee!!!rnThank you, rnthat's their place of shelter, rnI had to do it justice.rnLike cotton candy!!

Reviewer: Mikaima Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 01:42 pm Title: He might have to pull out the big guns on this one...

I like this story so much!!
it's so cute :)
more soon ? ^^

Author's Response: Thnx!!rn*smiles and giggles*rnYou always make me have butterflies!!rnyes, more is comming as soon as I can!!rnXXDDD

Reviewer: elingoddamnit Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 01:14 pm Title: Sheltered by the Storm

Well, know you have explained why it's Sheltered BY the storm, and I like it, I like the idea of it and I like this story.. just really much. Can't wait to see what happens next :D

Author's Response: Hee Hee, yes I have!! rnThank you!!!rn*jumps up and down*rnYou make me wanna like write till my fingers fall off!!rn^_^

Author's Response: Hee Hee, yes I have!! rnThank you!!!rn*jumps up and down*rnYou make me wanna like write till my fingers fall off!!rn^_^

Reviewer: Twinsational Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/08 07:25 pm Title: So talk....

sandwiches are gooooood, specially if they're made from identical, hot twin boys. *drools*

ah, they talk to each other and they don't know it yet. aww... hahah

update soon, bitte!

Author's Response: That's what I think to...rn*drools with you*rnI know, I don't know why I added it, i just thought it fit.rnI will,rnThank you!!rn^_^

Author's Response: That's what I think to...rn*drools with you*rnI know, I don't know why I added it, i just thought it fit.rnI will,rnThank you!!rn^_^

Reviewer: elingoddamnit Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/08 03:09 pm Title: So talk....

Aw, poor Tom *sobs and chews on the cupcake* A-are they going to meet soon? o_o

Author's Response: I know right!!rn*dries elins tear*rnwhat do you mean, elin?rnXD

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/17/08 01:14 am Title: So talk....

AWww definately a good start! I do hope you update regularly! Because I think I'm falling in love with your characters.

Author's Response: *wipes eyes*rnTHANK YOU!!!rnI try to, but sometimes I get a little stuckrn*blushes*rn*hugs you*rnYou're so sweet,rncan I keep you as a pet??rnXXDD

Reviewer: ShatteredToPieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/08 10:55 pm Title: So talk....

^^ nice job so far, its very interesting. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Awww,rnthanks!!!rnthe next chapter is coming very soon...rnhee heern^_^

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/08 09:29 pm Title: So talk....

really good!!
i want more...NOW!!!
please(a)

Author's Response: AWW*hugs you*rnthank you!!!rnmore will be coming tomarrow!^_^rnHee hee,rnXXDD

Reviewer: theyaylady Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/08 08:02 pm Title: So talk....

Interesting.. interesting... MORE PLEAAASE

Author's Response: hee heernthank you, rnI aim to please.rnMore will be coming your way soon!!rnXXDD

Reviewer: Charlotte2308 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/16/08 06:06 pm Title: So talk....

That's so sad ... *sniffle*
I like this story, can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Hee HeernI'm glad you like it!!rnXDrnThis next chapter is coming soon, pro, in the next two days...rn^_^

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