Woooooo that was HOT. Really well written, everything was described in so much detail i could see it all so vividly. That bit with the mirror or camera or whatever, that was seriously hot! :O I love Bill/jost so much and there are really few fics on this site that aren't non-con, so i LOVED this. I loved how careful David was the whole time and sweet. I kind of wish since it was his first time they hadnt done it that way.. like they could have done it in the bed first and then move on to The Room later. I know it's the whole thing that theyre there in the room, but like how Bill was wanting to reach out and hold Jost but he couldn't.. and i felt bad for him that he couldn't feel that closeness. :( Anyway, the last sentence was just perfect "they were going to have some mind-blowing sex" - oh they definitely will!

"You mean you don't want me on that," he pointed at the bench, "naked, legs spread and at your mercy?" – if he doesn’t I’ll take him there! *grins*

"You okay?" David asked as they walked into The Room; it had gained capital letters in Bill's head. – that’s ok I gave it air quotes as I read it so capitol letters works too. *grins and winks*

"I'm going to push you back," David told him, voice suddenly much lower than Bill was used to hearing and he felt his cock twitch in response, "and then I'm going to lift your legs into the stirrups. You'll be completely open to me, and trust me, I'll be looking." – yeah stirrups *grins*

"Everywhere," David promised him, "all over that lily white skin, from those pert little nipples, down over that flat stomach and your slowly hardening cock, past your heavy balls, right to that sweet little hole that is going to be all mine." – I’m not sure if that was just butterflies or complete shudders, either way ngh!!!

"Oh, Bill," David said, voice heavy with desire, "you should see this sliding into you; it looks incredible." - *fans face* ok all flustered now!

"You have no idea how erotic you are when you let yourself go," David told him, placing the toy on the little table, but never letting his gaze go. - *pants* ok I’m gone…You make David say the most incredible things.

lovely it was lovely!

Wow, omg girl, wow. I never thought I would like Jost/Bill, but, this was just phenominal. Very hot. Bill is such a beautiful submissive in this one. *Phew* I think I need a shower.

omg, Jobilly at last! Thank you, thank you, thank you!