Date: 03/20/13 12:13 am Title: Chapter 1
i loved it but you have a lot of typos and mistakes in the character. want me to beta it :)?
Date: 03/02/11 11:51 am Title: Chapter 1
That. Was. Gorgeous! So beautiful with the uncertainties, and I loved seeing through the eyes of him.
The last line made me giggle, it was awesome. Soemtimes the others in your life see things before you do *giggle* Gorgeous tale!
Author's Response:
thank you^^ wow i've been away from this site for a LOOOOONG time! i've been away for like a year and then i come back to find al these lovely reviews! makes me feel guilty that i haven't responded earlier! sorry, but thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 12/10/08 01:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Haha!
OMG!!! I Love it!!! xDDD
Ha the sister part was brilliant! xD
Great story! :]
Author's Response: hehe =P thnx (A) i'm really glad u liked it =D *hugs*
Date: 10/16/08 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1
the only errors I see look to be typos (dropped letters where the result is still a word) and I had to read the fic about six times to get past the sqee and tech musshies to see the durn things.
isn't going to stop me from reading it again though :)
Author's Response: awww *big eyes* ur sooo amazing!!!! i loved ur review (A) thnx for telling me u liked it and thnx for telling me about the errors, but i don't think i have time to fix them atm. maybe i'll read through all of my fics and fix them up, but thnx for telling me what to look for ;) *hugs*
Date: 08/18/08 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
it was great... i am with my jaw open... amazing!!! jejeje thxs
xoxo
Author's Response: wow! i don't think i've ever made anyone's jaw drop yet... i'm flattered (A) and i'm REALLY happy u reviewed and let me know!! i love reviews (A) -x-o-x-o-x-
Date: 08/15/08 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't know about the second person person thing, this is the only one that I've read and it is really good in my opinion. You write beautifully, I hope you do more!
Author's Response: even though it's your first time reading second person, i'm really happy you liked it =) i'm also extremely flattered that you think i write "beautifully" and i'll surely write more =) *hugs*
Date: 08/13/08 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha LOVED IT!!
Author's Response: thanks =D i'm glad u liked it and i'm really happy u reviewed! *hugs*
Date: 08/12/08 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW. Just...WOW. I LOVE IT! Um...anything you did wrong...uh...can't think of much...maybe you should have paid attention to it, though isn't a question, but that's it. It was just....so damn sweet! I never thought a simple kiss could make my toes curl like that! The 2nd person was just brilliant, as well. Put the whole thing into a new perspective. Anyway, that's about as much as I can say besides YAY!
Author's Response: omg *goes all big eyed* i think this is the longes and most awsomest review i've every received! =0 thank you thank you thank you!! *hugs u* i'm REALLY glad you liked it and thank you! you're the first to correct me of anything =D
Date: 08/12/08 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
one of my favorite writers online tends to use this technique. and it just gave me warm butterflies i my stomach,
on of my favorite techniques and a lovely story, dosn't get much better than that.
love!
Author's Response: aww ^_^ i'm glad u liked it =D i couldn't remember the name of hte writer that influenced me to write in 2nd person, but if i did i would have credited her! it might very well be that writer u like so much ;p (i asked her premission first to use her trademark technique though!!) thnx SO much for reviewing!! *hug*
Date: 08/12/08 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1
omg haha wowz the end was funny i loved it
Author's Response: hihi x) thnx! =D really glad u liked it (= the end was meant to be funny (; thnx for reviewing!! *hugs*
Date: 08/12/08 06:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it :D only one word to describe it - awesome!
Author's Response: wow! thnx!!! *hugs* and thnx for reviewing!
Date: 08/12/08 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE the fiction :D
Author's Response: hihi (A) i know... or well.. i knew u liked the start of it =P glad u like the rest too =D thnx for reviewing hun ^_^
Date: 08/12/08 06:38 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG
OOOMG *flails*
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOEV
Author's Response: wow.. thank u (A) *blush* i'm glade u liked it so much and i'm REALLY glad that u reviewd and let me know =) thnx! *hugs*
Date: 08/12/08 05:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Eeee! You have NO idea exactly how much I LOVE THIS FIC! *bounces in crazy circles* Thank you thank you thank you so much! This was amazing, and your second person writing is awesome! Thank you again! *massive super hugs*
Author's Response: *blush* thnx (A) i'm really glad u liked it hun ^_^ *tries to get arms out of hte tight hold to hug u back*