*Wahaha, Miles is so funny :P
*Bill/Libby is in looooove :) always thinking about him...
*Libby merely pulled down a small switch on the side of the container. The lid flew up.
-> hihi , Tom must feel a little stupid now :P
*That dancing was pretty hot!
*Holy scheisse! Nein! He discovered that she is a he :O

Great chapter!!

Author's Response: oh thank you so much girl, I LOVE it when people do like that, gives me the opportunity to sort of follow through the story, it just gives me so much as a writer !!!

omg, I'd only read the first chapter, and I am SO glad that I saw this update!!! It was awesome 'cause I got to read chapters 2 AND 3 ;)

I think you're moving the story at a good pace. Fast enough to keep me interested but smoothly enough to keep it realistic. I don't know how you do it, but you have a talent for making things so...sexy D: *blush*

The long dancing scene was just so hot. Gaahhh, why did Tom have to feel Bill's little Bill? Well, I guess he had to find out sooner or later =/ I'll be waiting for the next chapter! ;D

Author's Response: okay seriously, I'm going to review your review xD that's how good it was. thank you so much for the comment about pace, it's always nice to hear if I'm doing well with that because I feel that sometimes I move to fast and people don't really have the time to catch up with my whacked mind oO as for making things sexy, have you read your own fics ??? cus girl, if that aint sexy then I doin't know what is !!! oh and 'little Bill' awww that is so cute xD thank you so much darling, lots of love <3 luce

OH MY GOD
I love dancing movies too =)
and you asked me a few questions, as response to some of my reviews, the answers: i usually dont like AU fics, but yours I adore...and there might be a few oother ones out there, but less than the fingers on my right hand. Paranormal...hm...I noticed you have a fic about vampires, and thats really not my thing...but I might give it a chance sokmedya if I feel in the mood for it. Other than that...I have never read a paranormal fic that I liked so I guess you are gonna have to write the best one ever and prove me wrong:P

So back to this fic... scheisse...that was so hot, when they were dancing, and Bill/Libby was just letting her self be the music like that...and then of course as I suspected the situation got too hard ( heh^^) and the truth was revelaed. Now I feel so bad for him/her...but I also have a feeling ist not gonna be easy for Tom just let him/her go...he's starting to L-O-V-E him/her ^^ ( im gonna have difficulties with this holye Bill/Libby thing, I gotta decide on what gender I shall use when I refer to him/her...)

It feels soo good to be back in the world of your ffs again Luce...I have missed it a lot =)

hugs and kisses

Author's Response: when you say you have never read a paranormal ic before, you're not counting 'Out with the old in with the new' by Bereb right? because you must have read that one...if you haven't, I'm sorry, but I'm gonna have to force you to do so...but you HAVE read that fic right...RIGHT OO ??? lol, glad to have you back here as well em, hope you'll give my next fic a try although it is paranormal, but won't blame you if you don't, love ya girl !!! <3 luce

Uh oh...
Poor Billa T_T
I hope Tom won't do anything stupid.
I really liked this chapter.

Author's Response: thank you, that is so nice to hear !

wow. this chapter was amazing. and yeah i see what youre saying about how this story is a lot different from those movies...a lot better. lol i feel really bad for bill now though. that must be really mortifying and i would feel so shitty after that. i mean damn that has got to suck a lot. update this soon!!!

Author's Response: oh thank you so much !!! that is so sweet of you to say ! loves <3 luce

Hey girl ;-)

This is my first review for you, second is coming up as soon as I can :-p

Anyway I just adore this story. You always seem to catch my interest with every new story you write. I just love those movies so I sure I will enjoy this so much.
You know you can have a good storyline but that wouldn't do you any good if you don't know how to present the character and write the story and tension to keep someone reading. But you can do all that :D Your words keep my captivated along with the way your characters are written. I don't know how you do it ^^ So love you for that ^^

Anyway about your story ^^
Bill is putting his live on hold to be a ballerina. It must be even harder for him because he hides the fact that he's a boy. You know I did ballet a long time a go but it was all to much to keep doing, you must be really dedicated to hold on to it ;-)
Anyway :-p I'll highlight some sentences of they story that stood out ;-) and tell you what I think ^^

"It loomed over him as if saying ‘I’m bigger than you, so don’t you mess with me’. "
Yeah, you don't want to mess with that building, haha. you know I love these sentences in between, really appreciate the humor, keeps things interesting, well that's what I think ;-)
“Whatever.” Tom took the items and glanced down at the list. Great. ‘One hundred and one chores to make him a better person’."
Here is it again =D love Tom , he is so sarcastic :-p

"“I’m a teenage girl. A seventeen year old hormonal bundle.” Miles sounded like a mother explaining the ‘birds and the bees’ theory. “I know a guy when I see one!”"
uhuh, except the one standing next to you :-p that girl is really something :-p She would totally embarrass you, love her already =D
"A little flat chested maybe, but Tom was sure that slim body would look wickedly hot writhing underneath him."
Tsss Tom can't think of anything else, haha, he should know :-p
"Floors, he decided, were a very stupid invention. Light, however, he would be thankful for, but of course, the room was only lit with a faint glow."
Yeah floors, who need them, so useless haha. He so made me think of someone I know. ^^

"And then he had screwed up."
Wonder what he did actually. But good that he did or else he wouldn't have met Bill ^^

I can dance salsa a bit, it's fun to do but I wish I could dance it like in the movies =D
I predicted some hot scenes if Tom is going to teach Bill how to dance salsa =D
"What he really wanted to do, Tom thought as he picked up the horrid mop, was to teach Libby how to dance salsa naked. "
Jeah bet he would. Wonder how he is going to react if he finds out that there are no breast under here shirt^^

So up to the second chapter ^^

*hugs*

Author's Response: *blushes* thank you for the praising words kris, you know they mean a lot to me !!! you did ballet ??? I've always heard that it's good as a side sport for people who does horsebackriding (like myself) but I don't really have the body for it xD I'm glad you like my sarcastic Tomi, he's so much fun to write. LOL love my Miles as well ,) first original character I've ever written I thing oO about Tom's screw up, that one will be explained, I'm happy you noticed it because it's a pretty big point to the story ,) lol the hot salsa scenes will come girl xD you read my mind ! *hugs you back* see ya soon love <3

oh holy scheisse LOL
Bill/Libby is gonna have a *coughs* hard time covering up that she is a boy if Tom keeps this up, and how the hell is he gonna react if and when he finds out the dreaded truth ^^ Lucy, I have missed reading you fics...forgive me for ignopring them, I am never going to make that mistake ever again!

Author's Response: lol, thanks em ,) I hpe you will like my future ones as well ! do you like paranormal ? not in alternative universe though. and yeah, that's gonna be fun to write (cus seriously, what's the fun if he doesn't find out right ,p) I've missed you em, not the same without you !!!

I shouldn't have read this tonight, I'm to tired to give you a good review now!

I see some angst in the future for the boys...(maybe)
Sorry about Simone, but it's definitely original, never read that before...

Tom is getting hotter and hotter by the chapter...

The story is interesting, I'm REALLY curious about the Cuba thing! Why Cuba?

Anyway and as always...
Thank you! :)

Author's Response: aw, poor sleepy you ,) yes, some angst ahead, although not enough for it to be a warning. oh and yes, sorry bout klilling off simone oO lol, Cuba because that's where you find the hottest salsa dancers !!! and the best salsa !!! thanksies ,)

Yes,
i am here again in the reviewers'position, searched what words i can use to describe my feelings and my mood after reading the second cpt.
Know luce, i think that every new try of you write something new is much much much better from the previous.
you always know that i was, am, & ll be your fan, but its simply the truth.
The last three stories of you for my opinion are featured stories.

i just adored "in the attic", i just loved so much "eyes betray the soul", i am simply attracted and hooked from the "warwick school of arts"

i love our beloved pair and the way you and only you can make them adorable dance, play, talk and felt their hearts bits of their attraction.

i am sorry that i havent more beautiful works to give to you and your work the horour that deserve.

Have fun in your journey hun.
we re here and wait to breath in your inspirations again.
watch our Luce:))
much love
yours
chris

Author's Response: hey chris <3 I'm back again. you know, you can make me blush like no other !!! because believe me, I'm blushing ! I really love the fact that you think my writing is getting better. I really thing getting a beta did a lot and I think my plots are getting better and more original as I get some of them out of my system. I also try to spend more time with the individual stories now a days and I think it's paying off. so it's really nice to hear that someone else notices the difference as well !!! thank you <3 I had fun on my journey although it consisted of camping out at a horse even and work from six in the morning until ten in the evening ,p next chap will be up soon love, hugs and kisses <3 luce

*Okay, this is going to be funny, Tom's attitude; lol xD Great !
*That Miles girl really is something, hihi :P Big mouthed, little bit like me :D
* Libby? That's Bill's girls name or what? :)
*Tom thinks Bill is hot! :P
*Tom is teaching 'Libby' how to dance salsa, lovely!

Nice chapter! :)

Author's Response: lol ,) thanksies *love writing Tom like that! *I think I based Miles upon one of my friends oO lol *yeah Bill = Libby cus Libby backwards is ybBIL ,p *bill IS hot xD *love salsa! *hugs* <3 luce