Oh noes! Ouch, poor Tom the Thug almost falling past just hornying after Libby and now... Can't wait for more.
So steamy still.

Author's Response: 'Tom the Thug almost falling past just hornying after Libby' omg LOL that was so well said xD thanksies girlie

The program logged me out so I lost my review. Too tired and frustrated to write right now. Please don't abandon this fic. I don't want any more unhappy peoople.

Write to me soon? Please? And talk about some nice stuff? Everyone in my house hs been screaming at eachother since the moment I got home, probably before that. I want something nice. And quite.

Author's Response: I promise, after I'm done complaining about various things I'll tell you something nice !!! if I can come up with anything oO get some sleep girl, looks like you need it, and do it somewhere you can't hear your family!

This was good. You've totally seen Step Up haven't you? Seen the second one? Bad plot good dancing. It evens out. Particularly w/ a fast forward button.

Ok, so we know a bit more about Bill. But seriously, have you ever seen what these guys have to wear? I don't think hiding Jr is possible. But I'll pretend for the story (MY STORY) sake.

GAWD! SUCH A BAD DAY!!! Nothing constructive to say at the moment.

sorry.

Author's Response: I LOVE step up, amazing dancing, the girl plays in take the lead as well HOT HOT HAWT !!! jr is small...like really really tiny !!! being a 'girl' (or at least not wearing the pants in any relationship) Bill really dosn't need a big one ! and one could say that 'Libby' just had really healthy hair growth down there. bad week love, bad week !

That was a really powerful chapter from beginning to end. This update was well worth the wait!

Author's Response: thank you so much, it means a lot to me to hear you say that! hope the next update will be worth the wait as well, because there will be one heck of a wait if my teachers keep this up xD

Hey Luce ^^

A bit later then I thought I would review but I'm not to late though ^^
Hope school isn't to hard on you, can be a bitch, not? ^^

I'm going to started at the beginning ^^ You can say that I totally enjoyed this chapter all though the ending was sad but it couldn't be avoided ^^

“So?”
“What?”
“…did you fuck?”
haha, very subtle Miles, the beginning just creaked me up :-p
That girl is just priceless =D
“And sometimes Libby, the music is not what comes out of the sound system, it’s what you make while dancing.”
Jeah I get it =D Bill didn't see the point luckily he has Tom to enlighten him ^^
"Tom had no idea, no freakin’ idea, that garbage containers could be this strong. At least the one he was fighting at the moment seemed world champion in the ‘I’m a garbage can, stay away from me or I’ll eat you alive’ competition. "
haha, Tom and the garbage can :-p Tom = o and garbage can = 1
And the garbage finished him off :-p
“He started it!” Tom pointed his thumb at the big, green piece of metal and slumped tiredly against it."
haha, poor Tom getting pick on. I can imagine him looking like a five year old pouting because he didn't get his way =D
“All right. But are you sure you’re willing to give me anything I want, girl?”
Should I wonder what Tom want :-p Don't ever bet like that :-p anything can be anything, hihi trust me XD
"And she was funny, sweet, nice…he wasn’t falling in love, was he?"
Tom you are damned. You are so falling but well what if he finds out she is not really a she, how will he think about that then.
“What? So I should give up ballet and become a DJ?” Libby placed her hands on her hips, jutting one out. "
When Bill does that, I feel like that haha (I didn't say that)
Tom Tom hihi, you think she/he is hot :-p you want to ...^^
" It sent her spinning towards him and he caught her, dipping her down immediately. She looked perfectly debauched with her hair wild around her and those pouted lips opened slightly."
There was the hot, steaming dancing I was waiting for ^^ I could almost feel the sexual tension steam off them!
"With one of his hands grasping hers, he put the other around her waist, swaying her to the music. And then his lips met her skin. "
It wouldn't be Tom if he didn't take advantage of the situation =D
"As Tom brought her in again, dipping her down with his hands roaming the small of her back, their lips met. She tasted wonderful, her lips plush against his."
I could just feel the dance getting wilder and then...
"Pulling her into his own body as he smoothed his hand down her thigh, gripping it and lifting it up, he could feel every subtle curve of her intoxicating body…every single curve."
He finds out, It was bound to happen and I actually though how Bill was going to keep it hidden if there going to dance like that, it required, absolute body contact and if it's heated like that, well Bill's a boy and he reacts like a boy. I feel for him, poor guy.
Tom wasn't being very nice either all though I understand that he must be quite shocked. So his reaction was expected, I'm so wondering what going to happen now!
"He stumbled towards the door, barely hearing her sobbed ‘don’t tell’ before he was running down the hallway."
*cries* poor Bill. I so didn't say that coming! Well not right now anyway, so you surprised me ^^

Can't wait to read the next chapter, girl this was awesome. First it was funny, great humor (but you know that I appreciate your humor already^^) and that steamy dancing followed by some drama.
Your chapter our never boring,
so all I can say is you did great ones again and that you updated as soon as live lets you^^ I'll be waiting as patiently as possible!

*Hugs*

Author's Response: school is hard...really hard !!! but I'll tell about that in the next chap ,) love writing miss adelaine as well, she seems like the kind of woman who's slightly...crazy xD lol, I have a thing about writing about the objects in the story as some sorts of characters, so the big green garbage container is a mean character yes. lol the picture of Tom pouting like a five year old awww that is so cute !!! Tom is definitively falling ,) lol you're dirty today girl (says the girl who writes twincest smut) lolz. so happy you liked the dancing, it was important for me to make that as good as possible !!! *hugs you and won't let go* baby, I'll update real soon, but life isn't giving me much opportunities! love ya kris <3 yours luce

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You dedicated the whole story to me!!!!!! I feel so special! To ME!!!!
*starry eyed day dreamy*

I'm so happy right now I can' even begin to say!

Though I suppose I should start w/ an apology! I didn't even find this story until I skimmed through the list of all the ones you've written looking for it.

I feel kinda terrible.

Well, I would if I wasn't so happy anyway. I'm a dancer and I go to art school! And this was dedicated to ME!!!

*Still grinning from ear to ear!*

OK, thoughts...

LOVE IT! I'd give you dance words but I can't really spell. If you want I'll try any way though.

OK, so Bill's pretending to be a girl and taking dance classes here. Why? they have boy dancers.

One thing you should know about girl balletrina's, they do point, boys don't for whatever reason, if Bill's a girl he's in point shoes. I'm not sure if there's a huge difference in the anatomy of guys and girls feet but... actally I forget where I'm going w/ this.

Tom.... Tom, Tom, Tom...

So his dad's rich, he's being punished for something and has to work here to "build character" (Calving and Hobbs much? I love that comic, don't you dare tell me you don't read it. It's by Bill Waterson, go, NOW! Read!)

What happened in Havana? How did Tomi screw up? Aaaa! I want to know! Tom's such a pervert!

OK, I was thinking btw, what is it w/ guys obsessions w/ girl's breasts? I don't get it. Maybe you can explain, though as a girl I'd understand if you were as baffled as me. I find them to be a total annoyance personally (especially as a dancer).

When Bill has to do leaps and jumps, doesn't his skirt fly up a bit? Revealing him? Tights are not exatly what I would call sufficient cover.

OK, it's like 12 at night were I am so I'm gonna read the next two chapters tomorrow ok?

Probably anyway.

I go back to school soon btw. It sucks. But you're already there huh? You ok? Surviving alright?

Honestly I was freaking out a little bit before I found this and realized you were indeed writing something new. I was afraid you'd been smothered my a Mt. Everest size pile of home work.

Ok, update soon (I know I have two more chapters to read, but still, three would be nice).

;)

Love ya for the dedication, and because you're you!

-Your Queen

Author's Response: you're totally forgiven for not finding it love, I supposed I should have told you about it ,) okay your questions (where do they all come from , you have a very buzy mind you know!) Bill wants to be a ballerina and not a danceur because...well seriously who wants to be a danseur ??? okay sorry, no offence to all the male ballet dancers all over the place, but those painted on thights ??? and the nose in the sky attitude ??? who dosn'e want to be a graceful swan instread of those things. And anyways, Bill, being sort of small and fragile would never really be able to do the more dificult lifts. And since not being into girls he would never really get the proper feelings when dancing. And one more thing, as Bill is as feminine as he is, being a male ballet dancer wearing makeup and tight clothes, he would have been severely mocked. So all in all, being a ballet dancer pays off in so much more ways, he's prettier than most of the girls and better than them. As for the shoes...girl, don't make it so dificult for me xD in my fic Bill had small feet ! lol ,p ironically enough, calvin and hobbs is in norvegian called Tomy and the Tiger ,) great comic, I agree! not going to tell what happened in cuba, that's for the next chap ,) breasts are nice (not when riding either though) but they're nice to watch and they represent everything feminine. They're curves, they're soft, they're a big part of being a mother and so on, so basically they're what makes women women and men men, I bet guys have this subconsious need to state that they're men and like women and woman only by letting on how much they like breasts, the ultimate female thing. oO have no idea where all that shit came from!!! and then you go and be difficult again xD in my fic, Bill jr. is...so small he doesn't show. that may sound horrible, but seriously, I'm pretty sure little Bill jr isn't the one doing the work when/if Bill hooks up with someone SORRY dirty dirty mind !!! bad lucy ,) not surviving school over here, but I've aleady told you that. not so much Mt. Everest as the entire Himalaya! love ya Queen, will write to you tomorrow !!! yours luce

I bet you the bugs loved it though... ;)
Fresh blood for the taking...


I don't like dance movies...

But I like your story...
(Yeah, well DUH!!!!! I always do... They are the best....)

I've been very curious how Tom would find out... And now I know, He he he...

Why did Tom come back to Germany or where ever this takes place... Did you mention that in the first chapter??? I don't remember and am too lazy to reread it...

Loved the Dance... it felt like music to me!
(Too bad I wasn't listening to salsa at the time... That would've been appropriate) ( Listening to DM if you were wondering...)

Smilingly hoping you will post soon... :)

Thank You


Anders

Author's Response: will post asap although there is this really stupid thing getting in the way...namely school :'( God, I LOVE dance movies, but then again...I'm a hopless romantic girl with no perspective of real life, I'm doomed to like them ,) Never mentioned why Tom came back, just said it was becasue he screwed up, and never mentioned where it all takes place either, it's really not important and I suck at remembering the names of places, this way I can't make any mistakes according to language or rules in different countries or anything ,p hugs <3 luce

:O
*le gasp*
This was such a good chapter!
Update soon, cause now that i read this chapter i have nothing else to read.
:3

Author's Response: 'le gasp' lol that made me smile ,) thank you so much, will updates as soon as I can !!!

hey girl, here I am again ^^

Jeah, I did but a really long time ago and I actually had to give it up because I wanted to go horseback riding, what I still do now :D
Great that you do that to ^^

Anyway about chapter two now ^^

"Where Tom had learned to dance, Cuba, sexuality was as much a part of the dance as the actual moves. Dancing was erotic, and that was that."
I actually love to see people dance like that because it is so sensual :-p seems like they just float on the music, you know what I mean ^^
"By the end of it, she was sweating and panting, just like Tom liked her."
I bet he would, sorry couldn't resisted :-p
“Andreas broke his leg!” Miles came to a halt at that, just within hearing range of Tom.
“Oh shit, this really is the apocalypse!”
Jeah, that sure is going to help. Really I find Miles hilarious and not so subtle if you ask me. And Tom responds,"nope, just hot!" I can actually see him say that :-p

"He had begun doubting, and that was the worst thing a ballerina could do."
Yeah it is, you must be pretty dedicated to hold on to it. If I had continued with ballet I would have to practice 3 times a week and it only goos up when you get older ;-) But poor Bill/Libby she is really stressed out. She need the fire back for dancing and the music. ;-) You now what I mean? wonder if he can go on with it if it makes him feel empty.

"“Because you’re…you’re here for community service, not dancing.” The truth was that Bill had an entirely different reason not to dance salsa with Tom. Namely the fact that Bill was a boy and Tom didn’t know this."
Good reason, what if he notice it? Tom is seducing Bill by lurking him to dance, I love that (A)
Poor Bill though, not an great situation to be in.
Tom really has that dangerous attitude going on, doesn't he. ^^

“Bet I could do it just as well.” Tom’s voice made Bill halt his movements. Oh, so that was what the guy wanted to prove then, that he was better than Andreas."
Tom got him now doesn't he. And of course Tom had to take advantage of that. Poor Bill is confused, Tom is just irresistible :-p

I loved the talk between them. Shows that Tom is interested in her(well him)Not only for a fuck^^
"He felt the tremble that shook her body just before he kissed her cheek, lingering with his lips."
He sure is dangerous, love it ^^

So now I wanted to give you one on chapter 3 to :-p that I already have read, couldn't wait^^
So the review should be on the site by tonight can be longer because I’m studying at the moment :-p

*Big Hug* and continue this as fast as you can, I’ll be waiting ^^

Author's Response: I LOVE latin dances !!! so sensual indeed ! lol, love writning Miles, she's really something ,) lol your mixing the he and the she all over the place xD am I confusing you love ? and yeha, I can imagine ballet being really though for the phsyke as well. oh God, I LOVE dangerously seductive Tomi, billa is so lucky !!! mah, love writing Tom like this as well. *hugs you back* hope you'll like what comes next, much love <3 luce

Eh sweetheart of mine!!
i wanna tell something.
there is nothing common between these cheap labels movies and my favorite writers' inspiration.
your story is fucking AMAZING.
a new addiction for me.
i read the update in the office and in the dance scene i was forgetting to breath.
i was lost in it.
i imagined them dancing , cause you always made me to do it
in the most beautiful way i have ever felt before.
oh i just shouted "shit" when tom realized the truth.
i am so anxious about what ll happen next.

p.s hun, make me a favor.dont let us wait a long:)
dont take me wrong darling , take your time i ll be here and i ll be waiting for anges (bite nails)

yoursssss
chris

Author's Response: oh chris, little love of mine <3 you always say the nicest things you know, and it always ALWAYS makes my heart warm up and my insides tingle !!! I really got the feel of that dance scene when writing it and it means so much to me that you liked it as well THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU baby, you meant the world to me !!! love ya <3 yours luce