Date: 09/14/08 12:34 pm Title: Chapter five
Oh Miles. Occasionally, us girls rock!
The ending was absolutely worth the wait, don't you worry. I'm so happy for them, and all in all, so well said the "not what but who you are"-part. Thank you Lucy, again.
Author's Response: lol, yeah we do ,D oh, so happy you liked that part, trying to get some life wisdom in here xD lol, but glad it worked! thank you so much, this meant a lot to me !
Date: 09/14/08 11:56 am Title: Chapter five
OMG AMAZING i absolutly loved it the ending was amazing lolz
Author's Response: thanksies, you're amazing for reviewing !!!
Date: 09/14/08 11:11 am Title: Chapter five
Awww, the perfect ending! *.*
Lot of love for Miles *riot*
And, of course, for Bill and Tom ^^
Really a good story!
Author's Response: hihi ,) thank you so much, lol 'lots of love for Miles' yeah, she deserves it ,p *hugs*
Date: 09/14/08 11:08 am Title: Chapter five
holy craaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap! *claps hands* so good!!!!
and im very VERY shocked too.
for the first time...
u DIDNT wrote...the WHOLE THING
omg!!!!
ur not 100% perv anymore!!! xD
*shakes u* WHERE IS MY LUCYYYY?!?!?!?!
(sorry for that) xP
goddamn it i loved the story ^^
AND FUCK I HATE YOU!!!
I was already horny today!!!! and then u write this chap..!!!!!
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH
I FUCKING HATE YOU T_T
*sobs*
now I need to rape my boyfriend and that's ur fault. lool
geez...cant take that almost-sex-scene off my head
arghhhh!!! why are u so mean?! ToT
*pouts* bad Luce
Author's Response: oh my god *quietly sneaks off to hide* darling princess of mine...beauty...don't go all crazy now! just...take deep calming breaths and don't you dare reach for that bazooka! and don't you worry, I am 100% perv, I'm just saving the good stuff for a one shot I've got coming, you'll like it...I hope...totally just sex and stuff!
oh, and by the way WHER IS MY ANDIIIIIIII ?!?!?! seriously girl, you've like VANISHED in thin air and I MISS you. I want my princess back NOW !!!
and one more thing, I am sure your boyfriend will be most pleased!
Date: 09/14/08 11:05 am Title: Chapter five
oh god, that was so perfect, i dont even know what to say right now. except that im really sad its over. i really loved this story, it was amazing and i wish this was an actual movie, but then again im pretty sure reading this is better than watching it would be. though it would be nice as well. again, this story was amazing and this last chapter perfect. it flowed so amazingly and i felt the tension between them the entire time. it was hot and romantica and PERFECT.
Author's Response: THANK YOU ! God girl, I'm sad to see this over too! lol, think if we sent the K twins the manuscrip they'd consider it ? ,) that would be one porn I wouldn't want to miss xD
Date: 09/14/08 09:48 am Title: Chapter five
Why is it that you always end these wonderful stories so early??? T____T
Author's Response: because I have no time to make them worthy of more chapters ,) thanksies
Date: 09/14/08 09:37 am Title: Chapter five
AWWWWWWWWWWE!!! That was very sweet!! Can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
Author's Response: uhm...done ,) thanksies though, amkes me happy !
Date: 09/14/08 09:16 am Title: Chapter five
the end
omg
this story
one of the first AU stories that Ive ever read
and loved
sooo much
and now its over
I had just been checking on your other stories, reading reviews to your latest, the paranormal one that im sure I will love more and more with each chapter ( yeah and I claimed not to like paranormal...Im really stupid :p) and when I clicked on the "recent" stories again you had updated this. I was soo happy!
and I love it, the sexual tension is finally resolved...and all the bitterness is gone. I thin the future is brught for the two love birds
Author's Response: hi em, missed you !!! God, this last week has been crazy, but I do have another chapter for the paranormal one ready and I'll post it later tonight ! really anxious about it, so I hope you'll like it ! hihi so happy you liked one of your first AU stories. I haven't written a lot of them, but I find myself enjoying it more and more lately. Does not mean I'm gonna turn down that dark path of one sided writing though xD so happy you review me darling, even though I write in genres you 'don't like' ,p lol hugs <3 yours luce
Date: 09/08/08 08:59 pm Title: Chapter four
Great chapter! :)
I'm very happy you updated.
Try and update soon?
Thanks! :3
Author's Response: lol, thanksies, it's updated now <3 love
Date: 09/06/08 12:53 pm Title: Chapter four
Hey luce
If I could I would curse those teachers for you. How can they give you so much homework already. *hugs*
But I'm really glad that you do find time to updated this because this chapter was awesome and intense, you know from the beginning till the end ;-) It was very reveling, all the question that I asked myself were as good as answered by this ;-)
Well lets start from the beginning ^^
"He gasped for air as the tears coated his face and made his hair stick to his skin."
Oooh, poor Bill. I'm glad you explained why Bill wanted to be a ballerina and not just a danseur. I was wonder why actually ;-) I guess there is a different between the two ^^
I was wondering about Gordon to, why he didn't know that Bill was a boy. (I'm keeping it with Bill since Libby is made up :-p or else I'll confuse myself or something ^^)
"The police had forgotten to mention the kid’s sex. "
Well, that was convenient. But what short of guy is Gordon that he didn't even stay long enough to know what gender his kid is or before the accident didn't even see how his kid was doing.
"In the past years he had proved to be a loving dad and Bill loved him although it had taken some time to forgive him for his mistake in the past, leaving Bill's mother alone."
Well, if Bill can forgive him, that I guess I can to.^^ you can't keep holding anyone responsible for the past if the are willing to make up for it. But I don't think Bill can hide it for him forever though. Wonder how he will react then.
Gordon is really sweet when Bill was so sad, the way he said what Bill needed to hear.
"Oh no, don’t even go there. Tom was so not in love! An innocent bush was suddenly molested by Tom’s wave of nausea. "
Oooh poor Tom is all confused. And Tom definitely has a crush, can't deny it :-p He's still thinking about Bill's little ass and how it will feel ... ( no there are no dirty thought here *cough* No really there are not... fine I lied :-p maybe a bit (A) can't helped it though haha)
Kind off feel sorry for the bush to :-p
"“I stole the car, okay? I only said Tom did it 'cause the cops already thought he was the one driving. Yeah, that was me, as well. But Tom, you know, he’s a cool guy, he could take the fall.”"
O_o I don't like Georg, it was actually his fault so he should do community service. I want to punch him like he just think that he can be forgiven just like that.
Thank god Tom did it for me =D
"Why did his mind constantly turn back to the phrase ‘in love’?"
Because you are Tom :-p
"“And that mother fucking bastard, he survived. The fucking drunk driver who killed my mother survived. And do you know what he did? He did a year of community service.” Bill raised his hand again. “My mother died, Tom. She was killed, killed by people like you!”
Only a year, O_o that's like nothing. I really get why Bill is so angry, it was just about what could have happened. There just lucky that it ended better. All though I think Georg is more to blame because you should never but never drive while your drunk. Tom shouldn't have gone with him and should have stopped him. A mistake that ended bad. I loosed a friend like that you know, so I know how Bill must feel like. But it's in the past and you can't chance that, I hope that Bill will forgive him for his mistake in time. Maybe while he listens to Tom I bet he feels guilty about it.
I wonder what's going to happen next ^^ I'm curious. So I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter.
And I'm excited to read your new story as well, I'll be looking forward to read it ;-)
much love
Author's Response: hey girlie <3 sometimes I wish I actually could curse my teachers. It'd be so nice to just be able to go up there and wave my fingers abit, muttering some dark spell and then BAM no more homework xD but yeah, school can be a bitch, love my aducation though! I sort of think that Gordon is the kinda guy that needed some time to grow up, realize what was important in this world. And when he did, he saw that that thing was family. Lucky for him, Bill forgave him. lol xD yeah, poor bush ,p I needed a badguy in this and Georg seemed to match the description for this, feel kinda bad for making him this crappy though oO oh my God, I'm so sorry about your friend, that must have hurt a lot. I do hope that Bill will be able to forgive Tom. thank you so much for this kris! much love <3 yours luce
Date: 09/06/08 12:30 pm Title: Chapter four
Another brilliant chapter from Firelucy! YAY!!! :)
Drinking and driving doesn't mix! Once again, it is rather unusual to read a story were Simone is missing!
I did wonder how Gordon didn't know about Bill/Libby! Got that answered...
Hilarious... The bush... Poor bush
And I will refrain from making any kind of political comments here... ;)
Poor George... Not the punches, he deserved those (he really comes of as a creap), but his hair... Bill/Libby not liking it...
As always, I anticipate your next chapter with great excitement! :)
It doesn't matter how long it will take you to write it, as long as you don't quit writing it and leave us hanging here...
Many thanks!
Anders
Author's Response: oh, anders thank you so much !!! it's wierd killing off simone oO gotta tell you that! LOL I so did not see the bush Bush thingy there xD good one from my unconsiousness then ,) oh and if you wanna discuss my likings to Geo's hair you should talk to steinsgrrl, she holds the answers ,p I will try to write the next chapter as soon as possible, promise ! much love <3 lucy
Date: 09/05/08 11:01 pm Title: Chapter four
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol, thanks !
Date: 09/05/08 11:11 am Title: Chapter four
wheres the gud..huh...i only c bad in this past chapter
it hurts...burns even
well done ;)
Author's Response: aw, sorry ,) but there'll be good, I promise !
Date: 09/04/08 02:15 pm Title: Chapter four
omg omg omg
*takes a deep breath*
So thats why Gordon didnt know
and thats how Bills mom died
and thats how Tom looooves him
but now Bill hates him
*sobs*
Lucy...I love you
Author's Response: aw baby *pets you* sweety, I love you too !!! hugs <3 luce
Date: 09/04/08 02:43 am Title: Chapter four
oh, poor bill. and poor tom. Keep up the great work, i can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: thanksies, I'll try !
Date: 09/04/08 02:34 am Title: Chapter Three
I love all those movies. But I like your spin better. and you characters are hotter. :)
Author's Response: aw thank you, that made me smile so bad xD
Date: 09/04/08 01:54 am Title: Chapter One
hot!
Author's Response: lol
Date: 09/03/08 03:50 pm Title: Chapter One
*Poor Bill *hugs him for comfort*
*Hell, he loved his boy parts.
-> I think I might like his boy parts too (did I really just said that?) :$
*Owh :O His father doens't even know he's a boy?!
*Gordon is so sweet and caring for Bill, aww :)
*“Nothing that ever happens would make your mother think less of you, Libby. Nothing that ever happens would make me or her love you any less.” Gordon pulled Bill in for a hug, holding him like any father would hold their young daughters when the little angels cried. Bill was Gordon’s sweet, little daughter…for now.
-> That paragraph...it almost made me cry. Waw!
*Poor, poor bush. XD wahaha, lol.
I think Tom is pretty upset, he's even throwing up.
But on the other hand, who wouldn't be upset after finding out something like that?
*Lol, learn to read:P
*What the fuck! This is bad! SOOOO bad!!!
*'I want you' -> Oelaah :P
*This is so sad, poor Bill.
I loved this chapter!
I forgive you for updating late ;)
I just started with school again September 1st, so I won't have much time to read ^^
But I'll try to review every chapter, I promise :)
Author's Response: oh my god, thank you so much for this xD lol, I think it's a fact; everyone loves Bill's boy parts (especially Tom, but we're not supposed to know that) I'm so happy you like Gordon, it was kinda wierd writing him like this because I kept thinking 'would he be this sweet if he knew Bill is a boy?' wierd oO and yeah, Tom's pretty upset, I would be too if I found out the girl I liked had a dick. poor you, school can be a bitch when it comes to time consumed in it ! hope you'll like what comes next! love <3 luce
Date: 09/03/08 04:27 am Title: Chapter four
Eh,
my talent babe is back!!!
how happy i feel now !! yess
To be honest my lil lady, today i am so busy but i login only to find the 4 cpt and to pleasure my eyes and mind with it.
So lucy, thanks for thinking of us and with all your hard work in your school give us the update of your new brilliant story.
So my thoughts are so many, but my words are so poor and meaningless to describe my feelings again.
you just make me useless in front of your stories, with no words but full of emotions for every single hero of it.
so my lady.
i needed so much this flashback about bill s decision to be a girl and how his own father didnt know about.
cause i havent get it clearly.
but i was sure that you ll satisfy me sooner or later:))
thanks too and for the explanation about toms foolishness cause of his drunk state.
yeah Now i am content and happy.
i love my babe's story and i ll waiting patiently for the next update.
love ya so much
Be well.
and thank u .
chris
p.s i am looking forward for the new story of yours. i tremble all over only thinking of it :)))
Author's Response: oh darling, thank you so much. I think I've told you over and over how grateful I am for your reviews, but I'm gonna tell you again, because girl, you make it wort it! listening to your thoughts and conserns for my stories is just wonderful and it means so much to me that you allow me to take part in your feelings !!! love you so much for it chris <3 luce ps. I'm looking forward to posting it, I hope it'll be good !
Date: 09/03/08 12:00 am Title: Chapter four
Oh noes, again! First, I love that Tom is willing to just go ahead and do what feels good, what feels right.
And my heart is breaking for Bill, for losing his mum, for not being able to trust Tom - I hope these sweeties get there eventually.
Oh, and much un-warm thought to your teachers x__X
Author's Response: I know, ususally I'm not much for drama and all of that, but I'm having a blast writing this xD thank you so much for reviewing me it means a lot !!! lol and my teachers will be recieving all the un-warm thoughs ,p