Date: 08/11/08 02:20 pm Title: Chapter One
Hmm...Lıbby? Interestıng XD I thınk ıts adorable that you refer to thıs as your baby. I know how that feels, I always get lıke that wıth my new storıes, but at least you fınısh one story before you start another (except for The Kaulıtz Resıdence and I have been waıtıng for an update forEVER on that one, gırl!!).
Anyway back on topıc! I really lıke thıs startıng :) It remınds me of Step Up haha. And Tom, please PLEASE salsa naked wıth me. Oh lord that remınds me, my frıends and I were learnıng the tango together and we kept sayıng how ıt was a total foreplay dance XD I guess the salsa can be lıke that too ;) Cant waıt for an update!
Author's Response: it's my little baby ,) they all are! *hides* I know the Kaulitz Residence was up for an update ages ago, but I really havn't been feeling the story lately, I just need the boost of inspiration, maybe I'll get it when school starts (not that we have that many strippers in our school, just one and she's a year older than me) lol and yeah, I took ideas from every dance movie I could find (I have a thing for them) so you'll probably recognize a lot, and OMG you lucky bastard, you're learning the tabgo ??? I was gonna learn to salsa, but the class got canceled :'( but anyways, THANK YOU <3 much love
Date: 08/11/08 02:16 pm Title: Chapter One
omg haha wowz that was funny i wonder how he goin 2 feel bout libby when he finds out she is a he lolz haha i loved it please update soon
Author's Response: wonder how that would be like if it happened to me you know, finding out suddenly that my best friend was a boy oO scary! thanksies <3
Date: 08/11/08 02:11 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh my! I actually squealed of happiness when I saw that you're writing a new story! And it was awesome! Lovely plot, I can't help myself from feeling that this will turn out to something soooo good!
I think I've said that I love you so many times by now, but I can't stop myself. I LOVE both you and this story. Great first chapter, I can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: LOVE YOU, TOO !!! God, thank you so much for this! I really hope it will turn out good, thanksies girl, a thousand times ! luce
Date: 08/11/08 01:41 pm Title: Chapter One
I am hook, line and sinker, on this one! :)
It is really funny...
I like your humour... "Mopping floors, Tom though, well what do you know? He would never had seen that one coming.
" I'm definitely into that kind of dry humour... Smiles
And I must say I like Tom's attitude...
Snarky bitch in the office!!!!
Oh, how Tom are going to be surprised... ;D
All those small tidbits of information you leave, makes the story so much more alive!
Like: The info on why Miles is called Miles... Probably not necessary to the story, but very nice to know anyway. :)
Thank You!!!
Two small nitpickings... When Miles first address Bill, she calls him Bill but later on Libby... Second: The windows were in studio four, but Tom compares the floor in studio seven with studio five...
I don't usually nitpick, but the story's you write are getting so much better, they deserve to be correct...
'builds a small cave of pillows and blankets and hides in it, scarred of the mighty Firelucy's wrath'...
I'm probably in a nitpicking mood... Sorry! :(
I like the fact that Tom has been to Cuba... Never read that before... And it is rather unexpected to.
Looking forward to the next chapter with great joy! :D
Anders
Author's Response: lol, I'm making Tom sarcastic ,) and loving it! I fixed the 'Bill instead of Libby' thing, I didn't realize how hard it was to ceep track on names before I tried this oO the other comment I think is supposed to be like that, to get the sense that he didn't only work in studio four and seven. *mighty Firelucy merely smiles and forgives nitpicking* it's what makes my writing better and I appreasiate it ! God, I had to halt for a second when I wrote the part about Tom having been to Cuba...that is just...*drools* hope you'll like the way this story turns out ! much love <3 luce
Date: 08/11/08 01:34 pm Title: Chapter One
alright? it was AWESOME!!!! xD
jeez.. this remembers me of a certain hentai movie I saw. lol
its reallt GREAT!
gaaaaaaaahhhh i cant wait for the new chapteeeeeeeeeeeeeeers!!!!
fast fast fast
me is dying hereeeeeeeeee
good luck with this one hun.
sounds like a big story to me! :D
*hugs*
Author's Response: looooooooool ,) really hoped you'd like this one, seems like your kind of fic (although there is a lack of vampires) second chap is done and I'll post soon. By the way, here's my review to 'signed in' (the site deleted it as it was uploading, so yeah) main points : GREAT !!! and OMG to the crazy maid xD David using diers oO EKA EKA !!! LOL at Tom toushing Bill's jumbie and ROTFLMAO at Bill punching Tom xD oh my God,m that story is so cute and CRAZY (wonder why ,p) omg are we gonna see the tape ??? the famous macarena tape OO seriously ??? YAY ! okay, so that's me reviewing and responding ,) love ya princess, hugs <3
Date: 08/11/08 01:08 pm Title: Chapter One
Your new baby is way better than all right!!! IT'S FANTASTIC!!!!
I think you should deffinetly continue!!! And if you do ( wich I really hope you do ) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! *puppy eyes*
PS. sorry for my bad English but I'm from Finland so... sorry.
Author's Response: thanks man ,) cool username by the way ! I have the next chapter ready to go and I really hope you will like it ! no errors in your english, I have more than you do ,p
Date: 08/11/08 01:03 pm Title: Chapter One
Seems like you're going to give us another good story ^^
It's really interesting. A bit like the film Step Up, but not identical.
I'm already looking forward to when Tom'll find out about Libby being... well, Bill XD
Author's Response: yeah, it's ispirated by movies like step up, take the lead, save the last dance, and dirty dan cing 2 and so on ,) lol really happy you like this girl, can't wait to see if you'll like the rest of it ! much love <3 luce
Date: 08/11/08 01:03 pm Title: Chapter One
I'm loving this! I like how you only gave a hint of info concerning Bill and Tom. It keeps everything mysterious!
Author's Response: oh, thank you so much, that really meant a lot to me! hugs, luce
Date: 08/11/08 12:50 pm Title: Chapter One
I already love it, but was there a tiny mistake?
“Bill.” Miles patted his shoulder warmly and Bill prepared for her dramatic nature. Miles’ dream was to become an actor.
“Yes, Miles?”
...
It was a good thing Bill had learned self-control, or else he would have sputtered out laughing at that moment. There he was, tights and little black dress and everything. A bra filled with minimal amounts of toilet paper, long black hair in a cute pony tale, makeup decorated eyes, even a layer of strawberry lip-gloss. It really was a good thing that Miles knew nothing of what hid underneath the skirt of that dress.
Or was it meant like that? Just to point that out :D
Author's Response: yeah, that one I've fixed, it's harder than I though ceeping track of all these names for Bill oO thanks
Date: 08/11/08 12:44 pm Title: Chapter One
Ballet and Bill? Oh damn. That is something I can't get off my head now! xD Funny thing is though, that even Bill's BEST FRIEND hasn't noticed that he is, in fact, a guy. Nor as anyone else. I mean, as a thought, it's easy but when you REALLY think about it, you'd realize it, even though he is quite feminine and does one hell of a job to cover up his "boy-parts". Yeah, BOY PARTS, how do THOSE fit in all those dancing clothes? XP And as he's tall, he must have had his growth-spurt, meaning that he must have a guy's voice O_o
Gosh, I complaining and I didn't mean to. I meant to just wonder things ;P And I DO want to read more. This caught my interest. Haven't read about dancing Bill yet ^^
Author's Response: http://lh5.ggpht.com/_ CdFmUuyVgR4/SAzGn9ZJ-gI/AAAAAAAAf5A/-LNjOChPOLY/Costumes,+gowns, +suits+April+18,+2008+302.jpg that is something like the outfits he's wearing and with rather tight hotpants it shouldn't be a problem ,) as for the voice, Bill can have a really femenine voice when he wants to, I mean just listen to his laugh oO thank you so much for reviewing, hope you'll like the next chapters as well !
Date: 08/11/08 12:39 pm Title: Chapter One
Awesome!
Author's Response: thanks ,)
Date: 08/11/08 12:35 pm Title: Chapter One
oh my god.
and they don't know Bill's a guy! I'm so into this. :)))
Author's Response: lol, thanks girl ,)
Date: 08/11/08 12:33 pm Title: Chapter One
*read it twice*
*-*
I love it!
I especially liked this part:
“I’m a teenage girl. A seventeen year old hormonal bundle.” Miles sounded like a mother explaining the ‘birds and the bees’ theory. “I know a guy when I see one!”
It was a good thing Bill had learned self-control, or else he would have sputtered out laughing at that moment. There he was, tights and little black dress and everything. A bra filled with minimal amounts of toilet paper, long black hair in a cute pony tale, makeup decorated eyes, even a layer of strawberry lip-gloss. It really was a good thing that Miles knew nothing of what hid underneath the skirt of that dress.
*heehee!*
Oh God! Another wonderful story from you! *-*
I'm in love once again... *melts*
Author's Response: aw, so happy that you liked it Paris, and that you found a favorite part, that's just so cute ! hope you'll like it as it developes ,) love <3 luce
Date: 08/11/08 12:11 pm Title: Chapter One
wow.. interesting)
Author's Response: lol, thanks !
Date: 08/11/08 11:58 am Title: Chapter One
I'm enjoying this so far.
Pweas post the next chappy soon.
Author's Response: thanksies darling, I'll post asap
Date: 08/11/08 11:56 am Title: Chapter One
WOW
you have a nice summary there.
OMGANZ ballerina!bill is like one of my fantasies! i'm so excited!
Author's Response: you like my summary? oh my god, that is so nice of you, no one has told me that before ! thank you so much for this, hope you'll like the next chap as well <3
Date: 08/11/08 11:43 am Title: Chapter One
This sound sooo interesting!!
I love that last bit. Dancing salsa naked. Hmm ... nice though
Author's Response: guh, believe me, I had to lower the temperature in the room when writing about Tom a s a naked salsa dancer OO thanks ,)