Date: 09/05/08 03:24 pm Title: Day Seven.
OMG!!!o_O
Author's Response: Is that a good ''OMG''?? x
Date: 09/05/08 03:15 pm Title: Day Six.
nevermind!!! agghhh
Author's Response: Huh? Reviewed the wrong chapter maybe lol?? x
Date: 09/05/08 01:17 pm Title: Day Seven.
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww. they are falling in love. the are falling in love. *does tupid little dance* oh yeah they are falling in love. aw this story is so cute. although it kind of sucks because ive kind of scene the movie before so i kind of kmnow what happens. but i would rahter read your story than watch the movie anyday.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much, that's so sweet of you to say! I love you now, haha! x
Date: 09/05/08 09:49 am Title: Day Seven.
Me like =]
Author's Response: Thank you! x
Date: 09/05/08 12:16 am Title: Day Seven.
aww...the ending of this chapter is soo sweet~~~ i hope that in the end both of them get want they want. :o well i can't wait for more~~ :DDD
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try update soon, darlin! x
Date: 09/04/08 06:46 pm Title: Day Seven.
wait a minute. that last sentence am i confused and did bill say he didnt want tom to be the last thing he saw or was it meant the other way around? anyways i like this chapter, i like how they are both acting really comfortable around eachother and have dropped the fake personas. im kind of sad we're already on day 7 and almost day 8. because i know whats going to happen on day ten. i really hope it doesnt though but im pretty posivtive its inevitable. update soon please. i cant wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Um, I dunno whether I wrote it wrong or you read it wrong lol, I'll go double check. Yep, I'm sad that it's coming to an end too, I love writing this story so much. What do you think will happen on day 10? Let me know in a mail or something? I'll try update soon! x
Date: 09/04/08 06:00 pm Title: Day Seven.
Awww! Cute!!
Update soon!
I really like this I do!
Author's Response: Yep, it's rather cute lol, I'll try update soon darlin! x
Date: 09/04/08 05:51 pm Title: Day Seven.
Yes, very much!
Its adorable.
Author's Response: Lol, thanks! x
Date: 09/04/08 04:54 pm Title: Day Seven.
awwwh that was really sweet.
i agree with you ths is the best chapter yet=D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! x
Date: 09/04/08 04:51 pm Title: Day Seven.
*squeaks*
I love you Vee!! ^^
Author's Response: *does a Tom squeal* Love you too Bekah!! x
Date: 09/04/08 04:48 pm Title: Day Seven.
I really hope that they stay together... XD
Author's Response: Who knows? x
Date: 09/04/08 04:42 pm Title: Day Seven.
*insert exaggerated squeal-ish "aw" here*
LOL. sorry. working on major lack of sleep and deprivation from good reading material (aka, text books - you know how boring those are?) - and this update just about made my day today. :D Too bad they didn't to have their little fun on the beach... hahaa, typical Bill "That's fucking cold!" ^_^ haha.
And of course, stupid asshole of a brother Nate. He needs to get out of there. But yeah, yeah... stories need the antagonist (literary terms working their way into reviews? eek.) ... anyways... Can both of them just forget about their silly little bets and jobs or whatever? I wish. I know they won't, but a girl can dream. :D
Anyways, uh... yeah... *momentary brain fart* ... great chapter!! I loved this one, too. Less of the fake little flakey Bill and more of his... true self? Yeah, sure; his true self, that works. :D I like when they forget about their jobs and why they're together, when they just let their feelings overpower them... that's what I love. :) It makes me smile. And sometimes I melt in the sweetness. Ohh, wow, this review is getting a little long for me. I'm rambling, I know. I'm sorry. That's what my brain does on lack of sleep. ^.^
Point of review: excellent chapter! Thanks for the update. Loved it. :)
Author's Response: Wow, you took my ''Longest Review Yet'' virginity LOL! Thanks so much, and I agree, Bill is much nicer when he's not in Paradox mode. Thanks again, I'll try update soon! x
Date: 09/04/08 04:25 pm Title: Day Seven.
awww. the ending to this chapter was too cute!
nate's a bastard. i don't like him, lol. nor his dad.
i love this, as you know. already waiting for the update :)
xx
Author's Response: Yes, Nate is very much an asshole, as his father. Tom totally took after his mother! I'll try update soon darlin, x
Date: 09/02/08 04:35 pm Title: Day Six.
Good chapter!
I lurved it :3
I also lurve how you update a lot.
It makes me happy :D
Author's Response: Awh great, thank you! I'll try update soon but I just started college today so I'll see how I get along with coursework and stuff! x
Date: 09/01/08 08:47 pm Title: Day Six.
Hey that was a great ending to a good story. Post more.
Author's Response: It's not the end yet! x
Date: 09/01/08 06:14 pm Title: Day Six.
Ah, no, Bill! Admit it!! :D
Yay an update!! (lovely distraction from school work, too) I'm still loving it, though I'm almost dreading the point when they both have to admit to the lies and reasons of why they're even together. I'm feeling a hint of tears and anger, both probably unavoidable, but I just hope there's happiness by the end of it all... *wishful thinking* Because, face it, they belong together. :)
As for your naughty scene - not too shabby, lol. A little rushed, though that could've been me hastily reading it because I was afraid of parents entering the room without knocking and busting me for reading that... but yeah, okay, the rushed bit of it was probably on my part. ^_^ So good job with that scene. :D && Great chapter
Author's Response: Yeah, of course there will be tears! Rushed? You might be right though lol, because it was my first try at it, I just have to get better lol. I'll try update soon, x
Date: 09/01/08 04:24 pm Title: Day Six.
aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww. billy bot is falling for tom. and tomi is falling for billa. tee hee. good job so far. this storty is amazing.
Author's Response: Yep, they are slowly but surely falling for one another, thanks! x
Date: 09/01/08 04:24 pm Title: Day Six.
Aww! Vee that was just too perfect and cute at times! I am in love with this story, its really good and I'm dying to know what's gonna happen next, I hope there's a happy ending!!
And the sex scene was...yum ;) Perfect for a first attempt!
Lookin forward to more!
Author's Response: Awh, thanks so much! Well, it was my first try, hopefully I'll get better lol, I'll try update soon, x
Date: 09/01/08 03:57 pm Title: Day Six.
uh naughty scene.
i think it was good=DD
and poor bill hes falling in love awwh=DD
Author's Response: Thanks! Yep, he is! x
Date: 09/01/08 03:46 pm Title: Day Six.
AWWWWWW !!!! love love love !!!!
i luuurved the surprise.
it was gooooooooood :D
i can see what you mean about the funny looks on myspace.
eeek.
*waits impatiently for next installment*
Author's Response: Awh great! Yeah, see lol? I'll try update soon darlin! x