Date: 09/17/08 09:34 pm Title: Day Ten.
Wahhh, D:
Author's Response: I know, x
Date: 09/17/08 08:35 pm Title: Day Ten.
Oh, and I had such hope, too... Stupid Nate!! Even stupider Rachel!! Gawww! I just want to crack both of your skulls together!!
Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, Rachel started it all! x
Date: 09/17/08 08:19 pm Title: Day Ten.
i love the movie!!! and u have done the adaptation so well!! jst waiting for my happy ending!!
Author's Response: LOL! Let's hope that you dont gotta wait too long! x
Date: 09/17/08 06:53 pm Title: Day Ten.
Oh, gosh. This chapter totally got me. *snifflesobs* I'm so sad now! They're both wrong, but in some ways, they both tried to make it right. Bill tried not to do the article (though, maybe not hard enough), and Tom wanted to show everyone just how much he really loved Bill at the party. Nate is such an asshole. *growls*
Don't keep me waiting long. Or...else...and stuff. *shifty eyes*
Author's Response: LOL! Yeah I hate Nate too! I'll not to keep you waiting darlin! x
Date: 09/17/08 05:33 pm Title: Day Ten.
=O HOw sad! =] update real soon? please!
Author's Response: I'll try my best! x
Date: 09/17/08 05:06 pm Title: Day Ten.
poor bill.
Author's Response: And poor Tom! x
Date: 09/17/08 04:54 pm Title: Day Ten.
>:o
that nate.
i hate him.
so much
iuswadasjk
Author's Response: I think everybody hates Nate now lol, x
Date: 09/17/08 04:26 pm Title: Day Ten.
*dies*
Climax... ugh, you trying to literally kill me? 'Cause I have feeling it's going to work out that way. Me, dead, from heartbreak of their heartbreak. :'( Poor Bill... and poor Tom.... they've both been screwed over with their stupid bets and jobs... and hell, erase it all!! Forget the past and move on, obviously not everything that happened in those 10 days was pretending. A lot of it was real... has either one of them realized that?
Ahh, I get way too worked up in stories, honestly. They play with my mind. I zone out and end up thinking about all these different stories whenever my mind decides to forget about the class taking place around me or wherever I am. Kinda sucks... I should take a vow to never read a story until it's finished. Otherwise my emotions get way too messed up with these fics. Well, okay, so I don't get that worked up over the stories, but still... I get more involved than I should. :P And in the long run I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing... I know it's a bad thing when I zone out during class and end up mentally writing a whole scene of a chapter for one of my stories... that always sucks... I end up missing a lot... ^.^ Oh well.... haven't been doing much of that this school year... yet
So, uh, yeah.. rambling done; back to the chapter! Lol, um, yeah. Great chapter... just a few places where you ended up skipping a word by accident (nothing major.. it's pretty obvious what word should be there). I do that all the time... and my mind always ends up mentally placing it in when I proofread, which is, I guess, the reason for beta readers, but I don't use those... -.-
Anywaysssss, this climax - ack!! I have my fingers crossed that you're gonna be a nice little author and give us a happy ending. :D *slips you a tray of bribery cookies* That's what you're gonna do, right? *eager grin* :DD
Okay, this totally pwns my past reviews in length. Probably not in "quality" but whatever... I'm in a really rambling mood right now, sorry. And now I'm gonna leave and try to get to the bottom of a little rumor floating around this worldwide web about Bill and a possible girlfriend... ? ... *grits teeth* ...
Author's Response: LOL! Awh, you have no idea how much this review made me giggle. You and your ramabling mind LOL! I loved it! Thanks so much, I guess I missed out those words, so sorry lol. Wait...Bill has a gf??!! Oh and, I'll try to give you a happy ending! x
Date: 09/17/08 04:10 pm Title: Day Ten.
ugh, that last scene was so sad in the movie....and it was like...8374868747487686 times sadder here. i have to say i think what tom did was worse than what bill did. i dont know why they both pretty bad, but at least bill tried to not do the article. i dont know its just sad and i knew this was coming but i was still hoping up until this point that it wouldnt unfold like this. i am really anxious for the next chapter and im going to have to admit that i really hope it differs from the movie. because in my opinion that would just ruin an amazing story. anyways update soon. i can't wait!
Author's Response: I'll try not to keep you waiting too long! Thank you for reviewing! x
Date: 09/17/08 03:51 pm Title: Day Ten.
omgggg, i'm sad now! ...even though i know it will be a happy ending!
that was amazingly written, and the way you used the same last line as the same last line from the film... again... worked perfectly.
i feel sorry for Bill :(
and Tom, too :(
I can't wait for them to kiss and make up, now ;)
xx
Author's Response: Yeah I felt that those lines were best to use. I feel sorry them too, they are perfect for one another! And again, thank you for reviewing! I'll try update soon! x
Date: 09/17/08 03:51 pm Title: Day Ten.
*sniffles*
Author's Response: *hands tissue* x
Date: 09/14/08 01:01 am Title: Day Nine.
OMG! Day Ten is, like, tomorrow! xD Well, not really, but you get my point. I thought that the girl Tom hit was going to be Rachel, but the boss being hit made me smile. :D! I have the feeling that Nate asked Rachel to the party, and that she confessed to him about Bill. Yay for my theories! Is that even close?
Author's Response: LOL! Well, it's not quite that, but its VERY close! x
Date: 09/12/08 02:53 am Title: How To Bump Start Your Career.
yeah that's very mmm interesting...xDDDD I'm lucky xD there are more chapters jijiji
Author's Response: LOL! Hope you enjoy them all! x
Date: 09/12/08 12:52 am Title: Day Nine.
Ahhhhhhhhsnickerdoodle!!
I'm so ready for day ten! Sooooo ready... and thank you so much for this update. It's exactly what I needed to take my stressed mind off school for a little while. :D (Yes, 3rd week of school and I'm already suffering stressed-almost-to-tears mode. ugh)
And I loved it. They're so sweet together.. they belong together.. obviously.. I just hope you let them be together. That's why I refuse bets, you know? They always turn out nasty.. So is it a bad thing that I'd rather Tom forfeit the family business for Bill? Even though I know he won't. Aghh... Bill's gonna be so hurt, it sucks. He's backed out, or at least attempted to back out, of his half of the... I don't know what to call it... the evil things that linked them together in the first place? Sure. That's what I'll call the bet and the article. Anyways, yeah... he's in love. And I'm happy. But, erm, next chapter... I'm kind of really really really nervous and really really really excited.
Not always the greatest mix. :p But I'll live.
So yeah... great chapter. :D I love this story!! It's so adorable. And the water balloons... those evil sneaks! I think I'd be pretty pissed off if I got dive-bombed by a random soapy water balloon in the middle of a city street, to say the least. Poor little blonde girl with the pig tails... all soaked :( Lol. But yay Tom. He has some awesome aim, doesn't he? Hahaa.. Now I guess I know what to do next time we have a leak of any sort... ^.^
Oh, and can a key actually do that to a washing machine?
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the BIG CINEMA review! I'm nervous for day ten too LOL! And yes, Tom has amazing aim. Well, it happened at work. They key broke the tube thing inside of the machine lol...Or so the handy-man said lol. I'll try update soon! x
Date: 09/11/08 11:42 pm Title: Day Nine.
i'll tell him how i fell tomorrow nigth OMG! and Nate is gonna scrub up everything!
Author's Response: Nate is a bastard, we all know that! x
Date: 09/11/08 08:13 pm Title: Day Nine.
oh my goodness!! i hope nothing last minute ruins the tenth day.. @_____@;; i dunno i have this "calm before the storm" feeling.. >>;; i hope you update soon!! >.>;; and i hope that Tom wins the bet..
Author's Response: Hopefully, you wont have to wait too long until you find out! x
Date: 09/11/08 07:00 pm Title: Day Nine.
water balnoonS???hahahaah that was a good one
i rellly like it=DDD
and i can'r believe bills mom is that mean to him=(((
Author's Response: Awh, great! And yes, Bill's mother was awful. I'll try update soon! x
Date: 09/11/08 06:34 pm Title: Day Nine.
D: does that mean the story is going to end at the next chapter?
Author's Response: No! I promise this will NOT finish at Day Ten, please stay with me guys lol! x
Date: 09/11/08 06:09 pm Title: Day Nine.
can't wait
Author's Response: Great! x
Date: 09/11/08 05:02 pm Title: Day Nine.
Aaaaaw, how cute they are ^^
Why can't Bill just quit and we're over with it? D: Bitte D:
Author's Response: Because thats boring lol! x