Date: 10/02/11 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
this is a really good story!!!
i cant wait tell u post the rest!!
Date: 03/23/09 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
*gasp* daamn... Dude! Took you such a
long time to update!! I love this story.
I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Hah! Thanks! Unfortunately... I probably won't update this ever again... ^_^; Sorry... It became too forced to write it for me...
Date: 03/16/09 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
wowwwwwww
I love it, I just wish there was more details, that would be nice.
I don't think Tom should give in yet; that would be too early.
Otherwise, you are doing great.
x].
Author's Response: Okay! Thanks!! I was debating if Tom would give in...
Date: 03/16/09 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
im liking it a lot ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! ^_^
Date: 03/15/09 08:19 am Title: The beginning
Why is it that I have a feeling that it will take you a long time to update?
Author's Response: You made me giggle because I just realized I've become that which I hate: A Non-updating Author XDD
Date: 03/15/09 08:18 am Title: The beginning
DUDE! This story is tight man.
Hmmm... Let's see. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE
NEXT CHAPTER! Omg! Bill might find some erotic way to make Tom horny on public or other places! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!1
Author's Response: *blinks owlishly* You liked it? Well, since someone still likes it, I'll work on it this week and try to post something before Friday. Of course, there is no guarantee but I will try my hardest! ^_^
Date: 08/12/08 11:32 pm Title: The beginning
This is a great start. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!
Date: 08/09/08 04:35 am Title: The beginning
Lulz.
*sian lafses too*
That thing with the stars was so adorable! I think you should definately keep refering to it in passing or something.
And I demand tour bunk sex. Or sex in their parents room. Or sex under the stars.
Yesss! Let them fuck under the stars ^-^
That's be good.
*waits fer moar*
Author's Response: Nyah! Thank you! I could feel my eyes sparkle as i wrote this because it was so Fluffy ^_^. Thanks, i think i will now... like an recurring theme... hmm... i don't think i'm going to involve their parents much simply because i don't know much about them, so alas, there probably won't be parent's-bed sex. As for the other two... i'll try and drop them in somewhere... Thanks again!!!
Date: 08/08/08 11:45 pm Title: The beginning
When's the next chapter comming up??
Author's Response: To be honest, i hadn't written it yet. I wanted to see if people thought this would be a waste of time or not.
Date: 08/08/08 11:33 pm Title: The beginning
Hah. Awesome. I'm glad it didnt turn out like the others, where Tom watches Bill, and Bill freaks out. -.-'
Its written well, but as you said yourself, it lacks direction, even in this chapter, i felt like some things happened suddenly, and not in the good way. But, its interesting, so i'd like to see where you take it. xD.
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for reviewing my story first!!!! I try to write a used story plot with a twist for the most part. As the for the direction thing, this was originally supposed to be a one shot, but then i was like 'i could so take them down an angsty path of Doom and fluffiness...'. Can you clarify what you mean by 'i felt like some things happened suddenly, and not in the good way' so i can try to make it better?