Date: 04/27/23 07:29 pm Title: Prologue
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 04/28/19 03:13 am Title: Epilogue
this was a really good story!
Date: 01/31/15 01:54 am Title: Epilogue
This was a very beautifully put together story. I loved it!! Thank you for sharing!
Date: 04/26/13 03:43 pm Title: Epilogue
I absolutely LOVE this! Excellent work!
Date: 07/09/12 06:36 am Title: Kiss And Make Up
hahahahah "telling them that they had a minute to get their asses’ out of the store if they wanted the police to stay out of the matter." looooooool
Date: 11/06/11 01:56 pm Title: Epilogue
Great story! You really are talented =)
Date: 08/28/10 09:05 pm Title: Epilogue
I adore the epilogue!
I really liked this store from the first word to the last. I spent quite some hours reading this all at once, and I don't regret a minute of it.
I put this story in my tracked stories list a long time ago, and I'm glad I finally made the time to have a good read.
Thank you for writing this, it was a pleasure to read and review.
This story definitely gets a place in my favorites.
Author's Response: Ack, sorry it's taken me so long to reply. Thank you so much for all your reviews, I really appreciate you taking the time do that! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it so much, and thank you for the favourite <333
Date: 08/28/10 09:00 pm Title: The Final Scene
That was some sexy love making!
And that last line made my heart melt. :)
Date: 08/28/10 08:41 pm Title: A Day At The Fair
Shy!Tom is adorable :)
Hook-a-duck, oh man, I did that with a friend of mine when we were 15, the fair was pretty much abandoned and we had a great time :D
Bill is so lovely in this one! He’s so happy just because he gets to spend the day at the fair with Tom on his side.
Date: 08/28/10 08:28 pm Title: Kiss And Make Up
This chapter started out kinda sad, with both of them looking for comfort in junk food, but I'm so glad they sorted things out and kissed again. :)
And that last line just made me chuckle.
Date: 08/28/10 08:19 pm Title: The Truth Always Outs
That was...dramatic? And a whole bunch of other things too, I think. But most of all, I found it funny. I don't know if that was the angle you were going for, but it definitely made me laugh.
Date: 08/28/10 08:11 pm Title: Are You Cold?
I think they are slowly but surely falling for each other :)
Ha! I LOVE that Tasha sees them sitting there, being cosy and all.
Date: 08/28/10 08:06 pm Title: Company, Company, Company
I love how Tom's so confused at first, but then decides to go for it, and pulling back when he finds Bill is getting too excited.
I really like your characterization of the twins :)
Date: 08/28/10 07:43 pm Title: The Decorating Date (2)
Ugh, I HATE clingy bf’s / gf’s. And I feel so sorry for Tom that he lost his best friend as well.
Liar, liar! Pants on fire! xD Bill a virgin, yeah right!
Wooh! They already got to the kissing stage :) Nice!
Date: 08/28/10 07:34 pm Title: The Decorating Date (1)
Gross! And that’s why I don’t drink alcohol.
Carrots? xD Weird Bill :P
Oh boy, Bill is being so hyper active, he probably gets stuff done, but I think Tom would rather sleep some more.
Date: 08/28/10 07:26 pm Title: Knock, Knock
Poor Tom, his friend doesn’t even want to hang out with him, but of course, there’s still Bill, that eavesdropper.
I don’t think I’d be very fond of someone sneaking into my house, but it still is a nice gesture of Bill to make him breakfast. :)
Date: 08/28/10 07:19 pm Title: Stood Up, Or Cancelled?
Omg, what a mistake, Bill!
Andreas is acting kinda weird, if you ask me.
Tom, you pussy! He just chickened out!
Date: 08/28/10 07:08 pm Title: Three Way Conversation
Hmmm...interesting.
Looks like things are progressing :)
Date: 08/28/10 06:59 pm Title: Tom, Meet Andreas, Andreas Meet Tom
I think Bill is up for the challenge, I'm excited to know how Bill will try to seduce his way into Tom's pants.
Tom's job sounds like a fun one, I wouldn't mind having a job like that :)
*reads on*