Date: 09/11/08 08:42 pm Title: The Decorating Date (2)
Yes!!!! We got something here =D
Author's Response: we do ;)
Date: 09/11/08 08:27 pm Title: The Decorating Date (2)
yes!! I have been waiting for this!! It made my night :D thanks
Author's Response: awesome (:
Date: 09/11/08 08:09 pm Title: Prologue
i am definitely liking this so far!!! Sexy and intriguing!!! Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: awesome
Date: 09/11/08 07:58 pm Title: The Decorating Date (2)
OMG!! I love this story soo much, well you already know I do. HEHE I'm waiting for more!!
Author's Response: thanks, chuck :)
Date: 09/11/08 07:35 pm Title: The Decorating Date (2)
I need more of this.. like.. now....
Author's Response: Soon!
Date: 09/11/08 07:10 pm Title: The Decorating Date (2)
*big grin* Tehehehe. yey.
Author's Response: :D
Date: 09/11/08 06:49 pm Title: The Decorating Date (2)
VERY VERY GOOD!! Keep on writing! i cant wait to read the next chapter *excited*
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 09/11/08 06:28 pm Title: The Decorating Date (2)
Awww! That was so sweet! =] I love how Bill is starting to grow on Tom, and he's starting to enjoy his company. And that kiss! *sigh* So cute! I love how Bill wasn't being too insistent, and Tom was reluctant, but decided to give in to it. Score one for Bill, eh? *lol* Sucks that he lied and told Tom he was a virgin, though. But, I guess he's gotta do what he's gotta do =] Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yep, one to Bill. Yep, but Tom will find out he's not soon ;)
Date: 09/11/08 06:22 pm Title: The Decorating Date (2)
This is not what I was expecting but... I still liked it.
Though I noticed a mistake. In the first chapter you wrote that Tom and Tasha broke up because he found her in the bed with his best friend but now you're saying she was driving him crazy... or it was Tom who didn't want to tell the real true to Bill?
Author's Response: Oh? what were you expecting?
That was on purpose, don't worry. Tom didn't want Bill to know the real reason why he broke up with him; he didn't want to be seen as 'weak' or whatever to Bill, because he got cheated on, if that makes sense? It'll all be cleared up in future chapters :)
Date: 09/11/08 06:05 pm Title: The Decorating Date (2)
Wow...I loved this chapter. The kiss was so good, just the right amount of flirting, Bill not pushing too far, Tom not meeting him too much. Nice.
I HATE that Bill is lying to him, but I guess we should expect it. Still, it never bodes well.
I will definitely look forward to another chapter. :)
Author's Response: :) Mhm, Bill is just being his usual self, but all the truth will come out... eventually ;) keep your eyes open for that.
Date: 09/11/08 06:01 pm Title: The Decorating Date (2)
That was such an awesome written kiss. Especially since Tom didn't run screaming.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 09/10/08 10:58 pm Title: The Decorating Date (1)
hahaha. I love this and you!
Author's Response: i love you too! :D
Date: 09/10/08 03:43 pm Title: The Decorating Date (1)
I loved it!
Update update!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I'll try, i have a bit written already :)
Date: 09/10/08 11:03 am Title: The Decorating Date (1)
wahahahaha xD
omg at the carrots xD
nice chappie, update please
xxx
Author's Response: I actually got told by my friend who read this somewhere below, that it's not carrots but part of you stomach! I was like, "ewwwwwww" but didn't change it; it can look like carrots to Billaa.
thanks, i'll do my best to :D
Date: 09/10/08 10:52 am Title: The Decorating Date (1)
I loved it!
Oh, Bill's little ''oops'' was so cute LOL!
And Tom...Why does he freak so fucking much! God, its not like Bill is ugly lol...
Is Bill gonna tell Tom that he knows he lied??
Update soon please!!
Author's Response: Goood :D
Yeah, i only changed that about a minute before posting it, so i'm glad i made that change ;)
Tom's just a stick in the mud, who think's he's straight as a ruler; i'm sure Bill will convince him otherwise eventually.
I'm not sure, it'll most likely come out in the future.
i'll try to :D
Date: 09/10/08 09:39 am Title: The Decorating Date (1)
good chapter!! I'm lookin' foward to the next part :D
Author's Response: Yay :D
Date: 09/09/08 10:26 pm Title: The Decorating Date (1)
I feel bad for poor Tom cause Bill is so manipulative and yummy.
Author's Response: but we love him for it ;)
Date: 09/09/08 09:44 pm Title: The Decorating Date (1)
hahaha, bill is so funny. i really like his personality in this story. it cracks me up. i dont know why tom is acting so rude to bill. i mean damn bill is being really helpful and nice, and yes though initially it was a tad creepy that he wa sin the house, tom should be thankful. not to mention tom full out lied to bill, which i thought was funny as well. bill is an insanely good actor. i really wish i had the ability to hide and mask my emotions like he can. its a pretty awesome ability. i cannot wait for the next chapter, i have a feeling(correct me if im wrong) that maybe some progressio will be made in their "relationship" i hope at least.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, i tried to build them both up in this story, so i'm happy that it's paying off :)
Tom is still slightly weirded out by what Andi told him at work, it'll wear off soon enough, i assure you
Bill is all used to hiding his feelings, his "showers" them away, see
Some may be, some may not. I'm desperately trying not to rush anything, but i'm figuring after ten chapters SOMETHING has to happen ;)
Date: 09/09/08 09:20 pm Title: The Decorating Date (1)
:}
Author's Response: :)
Date: 09/09/08 08:17 pm Title: The Decorating Date (1)
Bill is behaving! Tom is stunned :P
Author's Response: Yerp.