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Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/10 06:23 pm Title: Half Past One

I have a feeling Tom isn't really at ease with Bill in his house, I don't think I'd be either. If only he knew what Bill's up to, I think Tom might freak out :P

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/10 05:41 pm Title: Goodbye and Hello

Bill reminds me of a rabbit. Horny bastard :P

Better watch it Tom, you might have a stalker, and I'm not talking about that Tasha girl.

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/10 05:22 pm Title: Add Tom As A Friend?

Tsk nosy Bill, you can't just read someone else's mail. However, I think Bill would do something like that as well irl, just being curious and snagging Tom's papers or something.

As innocent as the comment is, I already know Bill is trouble!

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/10 05:13 pm Title: Moving In

Nice, nice, redecorating. I wish we were only redecorating instead of breaking down the entire kitchen and bathroom and starting from scratch.

Poor Tom, it must be awful to catch your girlfriend with your best friend in bed.

I guess Bill will distract Tom from the break-up, though.

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/10 05:04 pm Title: Prologue

That pretty much gave me an idea what Bill will be like in this story.
And it makes me want to read on. :)

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/10 01:03 pm Title: The Decorating Date (1)

chapter 10

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Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/10 02:10 am Title: Epilogue

This was a cute story! Glad everything worked out in the end and everyone got a happy ending. :]

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: CarasGaladhon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/10 11:49 pm Title: Kiss And Make Up

Awww... :'D
Happy Ending, YAY!! *squel*
Thank you so much. :D
And then the store manager is standing next to them ^^

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Reviewer: CarasGaladhon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/10 05:21 pm Title: Kiss And Make Up

Awww... :'D
Happy Ending, YAY!! *squel*
Thank you so much. :D
And then the store manager is standing next to them ^^

Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you :D

Reviewer: CarasGaladhon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/10 02:46 am Title: Moving In

Bill says: "Hey." And that's the end of the chapter, brilliant. xD
What a sight musn't that be? Tom swinging on a love seat and Bill talking to him, standing in the window wearing nothing but a towel around his waist.
I wouldn't mind a picture of that. xD
I'll run over to chapter three to check out how this conversation turns out. :D

Author's Response: I would also like a picture of that ;)

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/09 01:24 pm Title: Epilogue

awww, i loved it!! :) x

Author's Response: I'm glad, thank you :)

Reviewer: faux_vive Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/09 09:11 am Title: Epilogue

DUDE OMG WOAH
amazing story but, like, this is the FIRST TIME EVER IN MY ENTIRE LIFE that there has even been a mention of a character with my name (alexia)
okay, yeah, not a major part, but when i say first time, i mean it.
like, no one has ever used my name in short stories, novels, fandom or bandom, so its sorta cool XP

Author's Response: Hahaha, glad I could fulfil that for you! :D

Reviewer: TimeReaper Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 06:12 pm Title: A Day At The Fair

You know, after all the chaos of the previous chapters, the song "Like a Boat" by Rei Fu fits the bliss of this chapter really well.

Author's Response: Hmm, I've not heard that. I'll check it out :)

Reviewer: TimeReaper Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 05:38 pm Title: The Truth Always Outs

"Tom’s body ceased up as he felt Bill’s long fingers..." A quote from the previous chapter. I thought I'd point out that for this context, the word you're looking for isn't ceased (meaning stopped) but seized (like held tight). Just heads up. :) Good story!

Author's Response: Ah, cheers for pointing that out, and thanks! :)

Reviewer: Destiny95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/09 02:36 pm Title: Epilogue

oOo, nice! :D I loved it! Mwahah, No one can resist a sexy Bill.. xDD I'm glad Tom let him.. Er.. Kiss him and stuff, 'coz it ended up pretty good in the end.. xD If he had just pushed Bill away or something, they'd be like.. Not together!! O: And probably not so happy.. And that's sad to think about! O: So I'm glad you wrote this story the way you did.. xD God, I'm so glad I read this story! :D

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: poXina_venom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 01:47 pm Title: Prologue

Good to know little Nena is safe :D

Thanks for the awesome story!

GummyWorms and cake for you :D

Author's Response: haha, yeaah. :) aww, you're welcome, and yay! *gobbles* :):)

Reviewer: poXina_venom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/09 09:28 pm Title: Epilogue

...

And what happened with Nena?!
D:

she's not involved in any kink right ._.

Author's Response: uh, the bear? nothing happened... i'm not one for beastiality in any way shape or form ;)

Reviewer: maikenkris Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/18/08 04:39 pm Title: The Truth Always Outs

I dont want drama NOW! I-WANT-FLUFF! Noooow! I'm hoping the next button will lead me to some more fluff:D

GREAT story btw!!! o.o :D

Author's Response: Loool, i hope you got your fluff :) Thankss :)

Reviewer: XtremeKiwi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/08 02:47 pm Title: Epilogue

Awesome, awesome, AWESOME!! I'm usually used to Tom looking for sex, it's nice to switch it out a bit and i thank you for that wonderful turn-over! xD You ROCK!! :D

Author's Response: yay, yay, yay! Yeah, i thought we needed a change so i did it :) Thankss!

Reviewer: DCB Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/08 03:41 pm Title: Prologue

okay so im not sure how the relationships work between bill and the men. what do you mean when you say he keeps them?
and there are rules, like they have to leave once bill is done with them or something, right?

this story is very interesting! i cant wait to keep reading :-)

Author's Response: right; like, he doesn't keep them like a pet, but he keeps them for sex and stuff whenever he wants. and yeah, i guess they could be called rules; like, once he's had enough of them they have to leave - they don't have any say in the matter.
make sense?

yay, that's awesome :D x

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