Date: 09/27/08 10:26 am Title: A Day At The Fair
One chapter?? Ah well its been a good story! *giggles* i love Nena the teddy bear. So cute!
Author's Response: Yeah :(
heh, i added some literal fluff XD
Date: 09/27/08 09:45 am Title: A Day At The Fair
Oooo!
That was such a cute chapter!
Do I sense alittle sexy time on the sofa LOL!?
I'm gonna be sad when this finishes!!
xxx
Author's Response: Yay, thanks :)
LOL, ummm, perhaps :D idk about the sofa, though :D hehe
me too! :( xx
Date: 09/27/08 09:27 am Title: A Day At The Fair
What? Just one chappie left? Are you really trying to kill me? D:
Author's Response: aww, i'm sorry.
i'll be sad to see it go too! :(
Date: 09/27/08 08:35 am Title: The Truth Always Outs
:L:L:L why the hell did i laugh through most of that :S
I just imagined it in my head, what with the arguement about hair.
but i was shut up at the end...That was a tad cold, coming from tom.
ily xx
Author's Response: idk, why DID you laugh? *evils* heh
tom? you mean Bill... :S
ilyt, x
Date: 09/27/08 07:48 am Title: A Day At The Fair
lovely!)))
Author's Response: teehee, :)
Date: 09/27/08 07:03 am Title: A Day At The Fair
Giant Teddy Bear!
I had one, but gave him away to charity.
Good chapter.
Author's Response: yeaaah (Y)
aww, thanks.
Date: 09/27/08 06:42 am Title: A Day At The Fair
aww, that was so sweet
only one chapter left? =(
better make it a happy ending then :D
xxx
Author's Response: yep, that's all.
awh, it will be; it's inevitable with me :P
Date: 09/27/08 06:21 am Title: A Day At The Fair
awwww *melts*
this was just ADORABLE!!!! and i can totally picture bill going crazy like that at the fair =P
but only one chap left? )= oh noooooo!!!!
i wan't more than just one more chap...
*sight*
i guess i can't though, right? but would u atleast try to update as soon as possible? (A) i REALLY wanna read the rest x3
Author's Response: Heh, i was going for that, so yay :)
Yeah, just one, and then maybe an epilogue if i think it needs one.
nope, no more after that, though. I'll try get it up quickly, for you, though, :)
Date: 09/26/08 06:35 pm Title: Kiss And Make Up
i cant wait for the next chapter! please update soon! :)
Author's Response: ima tryy :)
Date: 09/26/08 12:29 pm Title: Kiss And Make Up
amazing!! i love their little reconciliation they both sounded so depressed
please update soon i only started reading this very recently and ive been flying through it
Author's Response: Aww, that's awesome. I'm gunna try update tonight or tomorrow :)
Date: 09/25/08 05:18 pm Title: Kiss And Make Up
Great chapter I have been laughing a lot with the plan that Tom create to catch Bill´s atention, i can´t wait for the next one and see what are they going to do.
Hope that you´re better, take care bye
Author's Response: thank you so much :)
Date: 09/25/08 01:19 pm Title: Kiss And Make Up
So sorry for the late review!
I bloody loved this chappie, I was laughing my head off at Tomi just randomly throwing his trolley around lol...Whatta goon!
So glad they kissed and made up...Does this mean is the end soon? Oh, I'm might just bloody cry!
Hope my review cheerd you up, darlin!
xxx
Author's Response: It's fiiiine, chuck. You gotta keep your social life :D heh
Lol, like i said, no idea where that came from, but no, not 'cause i have a supermarket fetish, lol
it does mean an end soon, 2 more chapters and then maybe, possibly and epilogue :( I'm gunna miss this one :(
of course it did :) x
Date: 09/24/08 05:51 pm Title: Kiss And Make Up
This is an amazing chapter! I esspecially loved the part at the end in the supermarket! Very good job. (and I hope things get better for you!)
Author's Response: Heh, i'm happy you did :)
and thank you.
Date: 09/24/08 04:48 pm Title: Kiss And Make Up
Can they go home now. For what I want them to do???
PLEASE!?!?!?!?!?!
If they do, you'll get the biggest hug imaginable. (Is that even a real word)
Oh well, you know what i mean.
Axxx
Author's Response: soon, soon, soon. one more chapter 'til that. save the smut for last :)
and yes, it is a word. :P x
Date: 09/24/08 02:38 pm Title: Kiss And Make Up
Sorry you're having a bad time, I was going to review anyway, just as always when I like something. And right now this is something I definitely like. So gimme a smile and I give you a big chocolate cake, or the other way round if you want, I give you the cake, you give me the smile. Deal??
Staying away from the comforting part, I have to say that the end of the chapter had me smiling so badly, grinning, I guess. I just hope Bill will realize that this is what we humans call love. And Tomi was so brave...So hey, cheer up, and give us more of this.
Author's Response: *smiles and takes chocolate cake* thank you x
i'm glad you like this, anyway. Bill will come round soon enough, and Tom will continue his bravery :)
more coming soon.
Date: 09/24/08 01:55 pm Title: Kiss And Make Up
awwww ^_^
that was SOOO adorable!! (even if maybe tom should have thought his plan through a little better XP)
i actually almost expected bill to retort with some sort of "i'll do what ever the fuck i like, unless u want me to tell ur wife about what happened last year" (A) but i guess i was just.. i don't know =P teehee x)
please update soon? (A)(A)(A)(A)(A)(A)(A)(A)
Author's Response: heh, thanks.
yeah, his plan wasn't the best.
lol, i think i get you ;S
i'll try to.
Date: 09/24/08 11:49 am Title: Kiss And Make Up
aw, so sweet :D they made up ^^ now I can review again :D
i love your story! and your fast updates!
xxx
Author's Response: you sure can :)
thanks; i don't like to keep you waiting too long.
Date: 09/24/08 10:41 am Title: Kiss And Make Up
I hope things get better for you :D I loved your update my favorate part is the kiss and how they were knocking stuff down ;) keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thank you
awesome, heh, it was jammy :3
i'll try not to dissappoint you :)
Date: 09/24/08 12:37 am Title: Kiss And Make Up
AWWWWWWWW!!!YAYYY! THEY ARE TOGETHERRRR!
Author's Response: they are indeed. :]
Date: 09/23/08 11:19 pm Title: Kiss And Make Up
I loved it, this was a great chapter believe it or not this cheered me up great story, i giggle like a school girl everytime you update it.
Author's Response: i'm glad it cheered you up; you're review cheered ME up :)
aww, bless ya.