Date: 08/23/07 01:33 am Title: Chapter 1
that was a reallie good story!!! it was a little confusing at time but it was still reallie good!!! u have just enough detail to get me into the story..i hate it when people over detail the story...it just gets boring..thank you so much it was a greeat story!! you should add onto it!!
Author's Response: Well thankyou, I'll be careful with the details in the future then, lol...
Date: 08/07/07 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
What do I think????
One word...fabulous!!!
I have no more words...simply fabulous!
Author's Response: Thankyou loads :D Its was my very first twincest and I had a little help from Canni <3<3
Date: 06/24/07 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was a great first fic. I like having both POV and the dom/sub switch is good to.... loved it
Author's Response: Im a sucker for Dom/Sub myself, so thought i'd work that in :P
Date: 06/02/07 04:44 am Title: Chapter 1
It was good, but I think you need a beta reader. I'd be happy to do it. If you wanna chit chat, e - mail me: indienachtx@aol.com
I'd be happy to beta read for you. You just need a little editing, and you're good. (:
Author's Response: Thankyou for the betareading :D