Date: 08/25/08 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG. They are fucking bastards... I hope they BURN in hell for what they did.
Date: 08/25/08 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
*cuddles bill*
AWW BILL!!!
BABE!!
:"(
Date: 08/25/08 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
Lovely writen and brings tears to my eyes every time I read it.
Date: 08/25/08 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
Idiot reporter, you know I really can't believe those rappers think they're getting away with this. Great chapter, love the emotional depth of it.
Date: 08/25/08 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
Amazing. I love how you left the chapter off with the "...". It expresses the sorrow and helplessness that this ordeal seems infinite to Bill. I loved it. Great job and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 08/25/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love your story so much!
Date: 08/25/08 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
I haven't read yet but I saw Kenine Sonne so I just had to say...I love that song for those few lyrics about Bill ;)
Date: 08/22/08 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
You know, I don't think I've ever broke down and cried thanks to a simple fanfiction. So kudos to you for making this the first, lawl.
Date: 08/22/08 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
I have to say it now... When reading your fictions, I can picture every chapter, every paragraph, so perfectly it's.... it's amazing. After reading this chapter I'm about ready to cry, it just feels so real. I haven't found a fiction that I'm able to imagine so well that it feels real in a long while.
Date: 08/22/08 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
YAY, GO DAVID!!!
This is so good! The emotional description was wonderful if not very, very sad and distressing. Great job with it! Poor Bill... I just can't wait to see what David will do; please update soon! :D
Date: 08/22/08 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
*shakes fist at rappers* I hope David makes them pay reeeeeal good.
Date: 08/22/08 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
omgomgomg one.please dont hate me for not reviewing/readdinng sooner. i have noooo internet b/c im moving right now two. OMGG!!!!!!!! I HATE BUSHY NOW COMPLETELY! three. grreat job i love this story i cant wait for more :D
Date: 08/22/08 05:32 am Title: Chapter 5
Intense. Perhaps, unbelievably so.
You are, without a doubt, one of the most talented writers attacking the rape genre I may have ever come across. Honestly, I have never read anything like this. Every glance back to the plot-making scene is almost too much to handle--I feel it all. I feel Bill's frustration, anger, and genuine helplessness as the experience is taking place. It's amazing. It's scary. But not to just get caught up in that scene alone, I also cannot get passed the aftermath of the rape. Bill is doing something I never would have expected in the rape genre, and that's acting like a male rape victim. I don't think I have ever seriously read this.
I wish I had more words to sum up how astounded I am with this story. I almost hate that this sort of writing can get me away from my bias (yep, still there) and keep me interested, but I can't will myself away. I honestly want to know more.
I just... can't form the right words, for some reason. But I hope what I'm trying to say is getting across properly.
Thank you so much for your consistent hard work. I'm looking forward to more from you.
Date: 08/22/08 04:18 am Title: Chapter 5
OH MY GOD!!! This story is graphic. But it was something that I couldn't turn away and stop reading. Its very good writing. Post more soon.
Date: 08/21/08 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
AWWWW!!!!
*cuddles the poor hurt bill*
That absolutly sucks ass!!!!
But your writing Rokks!!
:P
Date: 08/21/08 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
awww so cute! and harsh.....
Date: 08/21/08 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
*gasp*
HOW COULD THEY!?!
Oh well, at least it's Super Jost to the rescue!
Right?
I hope Bushido and his stupid thugs get hung by their toes over a boiling pot of pea soup.
Date: 08/21/08 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love how David calls him his boys and wants to take care of them like a father figure, and how Tom wants to go kill Bushido, but what I love most is the detail and time you put into your chapters, they are absolutely amazing.
Date: 08/21/08 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
amazing chapter. I was so happy when I saw this updated. Wonderful job!