Date: 09/02/08 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 8
this chapter is .. in my opinion just what this story needed.... i love Bill in this story much more than in any other stories, you write him to be way more real. the feel of this story is awsome. everything about it is perfect!
Date: 09/02/08 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh i hate when they draw blood..i feel like I'm about to die! T_T
the Tom and Bill moment was so beautiful..i loved it!
Date: 09/02/08 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
hee hee I can't wait!!
Date: 09/02/08 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
wow, amazing couple of chapters...not that I've read them over again. LOL! Anyway, amazing new chapter. I loved the interaction between the twins. Just the writing itself was phenomenal and the way the sentences and paragraphs were constructed was wonderful. The flow of the chapter was amazing and I loved how we received an insight into Bill's thinking. Wonderful job!
Date: 09/02/08 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
*le gasp*
OMFG what's gonna happen?!
Date: 08/31/08 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love tom in this chapie !! Good work =p
Date: 08/31/08 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 7
i loved how you did the comments thing. made it more real. this story keeps giving out secrets. lol. hmm.. 14.
Date: 08/31/08 05:03 am Title: Chapter 7
the twinnies affections is so sweet. I love how tom is always protecting bill.
Date: 08/30/08 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow so emotional, I think this might be my favouritest chapter yet. Love the fan comments bit and then ending with Tom being so sweet and older brotherly. :)
Date: 08/30/08 09:44 am Title: Chapter 7
This chapter really makes me smile....
i love how Tom comes in and saves the day, as usual
Date: 08/30/08 12:25 am Title: Chapter 7
I love it, love it, love it. This is such a tender story.
Date: 08/29/08 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
i'm at a loss of words... that's really something. i love every tiny bit of this story! it's so intense but then again so real. bravo!
Date: 08/26/08 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
Bill's being sooo strong. hope this never ever happens to him for real.
Author's Response: You and me both!
Date: 08/26/08 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
so sad,,, :(
Date: 08/26/08 06:12 am Title: Chapter 6
Reading this made my chest hurt. But... quite frankly, I can't remember a time when I did go to read a chapter of thos story, and not leave feeling twisted up. Not out of sadness for the main character and the rest of those involved, but, out of genuine empathy. I feel everything. The conference was frustrating, painful, and embarrassing--Bill's breakdown made me feel sick, it was so genuine and real.
So often people write about pain and decide to throw their characters down into a lame, two-dimensional self-pity party, and they forget about all the other emotions involved other than just 'being sad.' You included anger as being part of Bill's coping process, which is HUGE. Especially when we're talking about males who've been victimized. I love that you did this, I'm amazed that you did this, and I'm sincerely grateful that you did this. Thank you so much.
I wish I could say more, but most of what I want to say has already been said a million times over in my old reviews. So, I'd just like to thank you once again for your hard work, and everything else you're doing to make this story so uniquely real.
Date: 08/26/08 01:41 am Title: Chapter 6
This fic tears my heart into pieces. It made it sound so real. Poor billa, having to cope with this *hugs him*
I that song of Bushido. I can't believe he really put that into lyrics. This guy's really creepy.
Date: 08/25/08 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
wow awsome story :) i'm glad i found it... please keep it up!
Date: 08/25/08 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 6
aw poor bill D=
Date: 08/25/08 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 6
Poor poor Bill I feel so bad for him he feels sorry for the fans when really he should be thinking about himself and just trying to get through it this story is so awesome I can't wait for the next chapter.