Date: 09/21/08 04:37 am Title: Chapter 11
I love the foreshadowing =]
Date: 09/18/08 12:31 am Title: Chapter 11
that chapter was the most powerful i ever read in my whole life. really you're an amazing writer. wonderful. thank you for your update... you made my day
Date: 09/17/08 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
I'm glad he's beginning to be able to deal w/ this. I hope Tom can protect him, and not get hurt.
Date: 09/17/08 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 11
GO BIll! Yay for him! Now he just has to talk to Tom! =] Such a good chapter!
Date: 09/17/08 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
I am so proud of Bill. He's really handling it good.
I'd love to be his lawyer and make those BASTARDS pay for what they did! I hope and pray that Tom WON'T do anything that will have him jail even if they do deserve it.
Date: 09/17/08 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 11
I've read everything and sorry that I didn't write any reviews before... I liked it and I still like it. We can notice Bill's progess and that pleases me. He's becoming so much stronger ! The thing I also liked in your story is that you actually described very precisely how Bill was raped and I find it better taht way... Not that I am sadistic and love watching people in pain or something...but I think it has more effect on the reader when it's really detailed... so, it has touched me. Thanks for writing !
Date: 09/17/08 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oohhhhh Crap, NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!
Date: 09/17/08 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
*sobs loudly*
And there I go. I hate crying. You made me cry. (Yet I don't hate you.) Oh my god, this fic is like... I didn't think I'd be able to hate Bushido more but that's clearly not the case. Dammit.
Bill's reactions and feelings are written very well, I think; Tom is very sweet in this and David makes a really great father figure. I'm still not terribly happy about the Bill/Jost pairing, but I can certainly deal with it. I'll be honest and say that I skimmed through some of the really horrible parts, cuz otherwise I'd be suicidal by now (I take fanficion way too much to heart). And I really, really hope Tom doesn't do anything stupid. He'll only end up hurt, and Bill doesn't need that at the moment.
You need to update ASAP, because, like I mentioned before, I hate to be left hanging.
Date: 09/17/08 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Right, I haven't started reading this yet, but I'm gonna now, and, um... I'm going to cry and be heartbroken and want to kill myself cuz I hate Bushido more than anyone else in the world. And I'm not a fan of Bill/Jost either, but what can you do. Right, I'll review once again when I've finished reading, and you had better update fast cuz I hate to be left hanging. -_-
Wish me luck... *gulps*
Date: 09/17/08 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
yaay an update!!
good chapter!
Date: 09/15/08 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 10
wow. this story is great. i'm a little concerned about the bill/jost pairing i like where their relationship is now, i dont want it to get creepy. tom is so sweet in this. i think bill handles tings really realistically as well. please keep up the great work!
Date: 09/12/08 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
I like how you portrayed tom's thoughts in this chapter. Anger is really eating him.
Date: 09/12/08 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
NO! TOM!!! OMG DONT YOU DARE! Bill would be crushed!! Now I have to wait and see what Tom does -_- greattt
Date: 09/12/08 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
I cant blame Tom at all..
Date: 09/12/08 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh yeah! I'm with Tom. if anything Bushido is the sick and twisted bastard that deserves to get death threats.
Date: 09/12/08 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 10
Don't make him do anything stupid. It will be alot worse.