Date: 08/06/08 12:48 pm Title: Ladybug
This was like ten thousand times more beautiful that I could have ever imagined
Normally, I'd be cursing and what not to emphasize my point, but I just can't, they're too harsh for how beautiful this was.
I simply adored how protective Tom was, even when he was raped, in a strange sense it was beautiful, because it was for Bill
Bill being the big brother is normally something that I don't agree with, I like him to be how you portrayed him in all the other parts of the story, cute, adorable bubbly, but the way you wrote it was perfect, to say the least.
I feel these few words aren't enough to say how much I adored this.
It didn't even seem to take forever to read either, I just managed to get completely wrapped up in it, and I love that.
You're actually amazing.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you, really. :) ♥
Date: 08/06/08 11:59 am Title: Ladybug
Awww, i'm melting.
That was just soooo good.
^_^
Date: 08/06/08 08:09 am Title: Ladybug
Aww! I loved it Haylz! It was absolutely amazing.
Date: 08/06/08 07:04 am Title: Ladybug
...Oh my god.
That was just gorgeous.
Everything about this...I just can't form words!
Beautiful, sad, emotional, expressive...
Date: 08/06/08 06:32 am Title: Ladybug
Awww that was amazing! (: I've added you to my favourite authors list so i won't miss out when you post something new ;D
I KNEW it was isaak, that dirty prick grrrrrr
But yes, beautiful (: I'm glad how you kept skipping through ages because one-shots when they start as brothers and then in one night, are fucking, is just too unrealistic for me to read. Thanks yeh (:
Date: 08/06/08 04:53 am Title: Ladybug
Amazing, as always :3
Date: 08/06/08 04:00 am Title: Ladybug
Ohhhhhhh my God!!
That was just...
I dont even know what to say...
PERFECT!!!
P.S. I so wanna KILL the cousin right now!
Date: 08/06/08 03:16 am Title: Ladybug
pure L.O.V.E.
it was pure sweetness
it's already one of my favorites stories
Date: 08/06/08 03:03 am Title: Ladybug
That was such a beautiful story. I am so in love with this version of Tom. I love protective Tom, but I really love strong Bill too. You did an amazing job weaving it all together.
Author's Response: I'm such a sucker for protective Tom *__* But I thought it was important for him to reach a point where he couldn't take any more and lets himself be looked after by Bill.
Date: 08/06/08 01:59 am Title: Ladybug
UGH, you make life worth living. Is that too dramatic? Can I be a fan via category Tokio Hotel, subcategory Haylzee? *__*
Author's Response: lololol ♥ You'll have to talk to the higher ups about that ;)rnrnWHERE IS YOUR FIC? :O
Date: 08/06/08 01:25 am Title: Ladybug
AWWW! this was beautiful *sniff sniff*
Date: 08/06/08 01:10 am Title: Ladybug
1. this is the longest one-shot i've ever read. i'm so... satisfied.XD
2. your fics never fail to amaze me. oh you and your magic touch. :3
Date: 08/06/08 12:56 am Title: Ladybug
I do love bigbrother!Tom, but when Bill punched Isaak I gave a cheer. The story was adorable and hot and kinda sad and back to sweet again, and I'm sure emseviltwin must have adored it because who wouldn't?
Date: 08/06/08 12:38 am Title: Ladybug
That was way too fucking cute. I love you!!!
And it was so long!!! *nuzzles the length* lol
Date: 08/05/08 11:26 pm Title: Ladybug
too fucking cute!! ^_^
this story was so amazing.
every part of it made emotions stir in me...
seriously, i got so emotional reading it, i'm actually tearing up a bit :D
i loved how everything ft so real and in place, every detail and emotion was just perfect and perfectly described.
this is definatly a work of art, i'm so happy you shared this with us :D
keep it up love, you got tallent ^_^
Date: 08/05/08 11:23 pm Title: Ladybug
*melts*
That was simply adorable. Just... and then... and when....
Gah. I am speechless. Yet another wonderful gem for you.
Date: 08/05/08 11:19 pm Title: Ladybug
Lovely theme. I loved it. =3
Date: 08/05/08 11:13 pm Title: Ladybug
awwww that was sooo sweet i love it so much your a great writer!!!=DDD