Date: 08/06/08 11:08 pm Title: Day Two, part one
Awww, this is so cute and sad.
I really like it (:
Date: 08/06/08 09:50 pm Title: Day Two, part one
AAHHHHHHH..Noooo...dude this better have a happy ending *sobs*
Date: 08/06/08 09:30 pm Title: Day Two, part one
OH MAN.... I REALY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS. THIS STORY IS ALIKE ADDICTING. ANY WAY IF YOU DONT MIND ME ASKING ABOUT HOW MANY CHAPPIES WILL THERE BE?
Author's Response: I don't. From eight to ten, I guess. Depends on will I post the chapters in parts or as one piece.
Date: 08/06/08 09:20 pm Title: Day Two, part one
OMG this is so awesome. so sweet how Bill is writing stuff to read to Tom. he can hear it, i know he can. he'll wake up. when he does i'll be crying so much.
MORE PLEASE!
Date: 08/06/08 08:57 pm Title: Day One
Omg this sounds like its going to be a really sad fic. But it does sound interesting. I really hope he wakes up in the end. I think I will end up crying if he doesn't.
Date: 08/06/08 08:06 pm Title: Day Two, part one
oh i hope Tom wakes up 'cause Bill needs him. i can't wait until the next update.
Date: 08/06/08 07:57 pm Title: Day Two, part one
Oooh... This story made me cry... :O
I really hope Bill will wake tom up!
Please continue soon!
- Linni
Date: 08/06/08 07:29 pm Title: Day Two, part one
Cute. :D You gotta love a protective Bill.
Date: 08/06/08 07:24 pm Title: Day Two, part one
Bill makes me sad :'(
Date: 08/06/08 07:06 pm Title: Day Two, part one
yay!!! good as ever! ^^
moreeeeeeee
Date: 08/06/08 04:00 pm Title: Day One
Ohh, great plot! :O I really like it! And although I think it will be a short story, I think I will enjoy it :) so please post soon!
About the chapter; the jumps between flashbacks and present weren't too confusing, but the last flashback was a bit confusing for me, yes... what was it, the accident that left Tom in a coma?
Please post soon! :D
Date: 08/06/08 07:00 am Title: Day One
The thing with the driver must be how Tom got into a coma, right?
I like the plot :D
Date: 08/06/08 03:01 am Title: Day One
It wasn't confusing at all.
I can't wait to read more, I already feel so sad for Bill in this story.
I really liked the first chapter (:
Date: 08/05/08 10:08 pm Title: Day One
this fic is so beautiful T___T, I'm really sad, Tomi has to wake up ._.! ;D continue...
Date: 08/05/08 09:22 pm Title: Day One
i liked it...lol..continue=)
Date: 08/05/08 07:59 pm Title: Day One
Amazing story! i totally like the idea of it.
Keep going :)
Date: 08/05/08 07:01 pm Title: Day One
Aww, this is sad but sweet at the same time.
Wake up, Tomi.. :(
Date: 08/05/08 07:00 pm Title: Day One
it was a lil confusing, but oh so worth it. luv it.
Date: 08/05/08 05:59 pm Title: Day One
That was cute, and I can't wait for another dose. :D
Date: 08/05/08 05:52 pm Title: Day One
great chappie i would recomend writing *flashback* in the appropriate areas tho
:)