Date: 11/10/08 01:17 pm Title: Discovery.
I have seen this story many times but I thought it's not for me so I didn't read it. Today I saw it again with the new chapter and just thought why not. So I started to read it and good thing I did because I like it! I know, I really shouldn't think too much before actually reading the story.
I like the way the story is developing, I mean slowly. Bill and Tom didn't jump to bed right away and you didn't tell everything at the first chapter.
Oh Andi what you did... Can't wait for next chapter! :)
xx
Author's Response: Wow! That's awesome. Nahhh, sometimes I look at a story and it has a butt load of reviews but just doesn't seem to say 'Read me bitch!' I'm really happy you like it. When I started the whole vampire thing I knew it wasn't going to be easy and really didn't want to make them fall in love in a heart beat. So making as real as possible AND adding the ridiculous idea of vampires is really hard. :) Glad to have you readin' mah story mam.
Date: 11/10/08 09:25 am Title: Discovery.
eep... well at least we know that Bill knows the score... oh boy is Andi gonna get it...
Author's Response: Oh yes. Ohhhhhh yessssss. XD
Author's Response: Oh yes. Ohhhhhh yessssss. XD
Date: 11/10/08 06:07 am Title: Discovery.
mistakes. yes :) epic cliffhanger. yes DX hurrrrry!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'll tryyyyy! :]
Date: 11/10/08 06:03 am Title: Torrid Life
i almost cried man T.T and that never happens to me when i read a fic
Author's Response: Ahhhh I'm sorry :[ Hope that's a good thing!
Date: 11/10/08 05:54 am Title: When Things Crumble
bill...is gonna kill someone :D
Date: 11/10/08 05:47 am Title: Part V - 神聖
ohhh andrea is so gonna get it lol >=D
Date: 11/10/08 05:30 am Title: Day One
actually i've read some worse stuff then this, but it's still good....except that tom is getting hurt :( woot! i dont like miley either :D
Author's Response: I love the horror and gore. I actually wanted to go into more detail with everything but I think most of the readers aren't into it. So maybe when this is all over I'll add an additional chapter that explores what Tom really went through. :/
Date: 11/10/08 05:12 am Title: Desperate for Your Touch
yeah it did seem a bit desperate lol but bill's nickname for tom was cute...nugget HAH :)
Date: 11/10/08 05:00 am Title: All the Small Things
andreas seems like ajerk :/ but nice pictures
Date: 11/10/08 04:51 am Title: You'll let me what....?
wow O-O that was pretty hot lol
i really liked the ending :D
Date: 11/10/08 04:15 am Title: Happy Birthday Bill and Tom!
Fuck...! I fucking dreamed that fucking dream by my fucking self!
FAVORITE sentence EVER!! hahahah and the ending was making me crack up hella hard hahahah omg hahaha T-T thats my face right now
Date: 11/10/08 03:51 am Title: As Each Day Passes
hahaha wow bill watches tom in his sleep a bit disturbing XD
Author's Response: Isn't it? P:
Date: 11/10/08 12:01 am Title: Discovery.
i dont mind mistakes. now, when are they all gonna gang up on andi?......d:)
Author's Response: Haha, you'll just haveta wait now wontcha? XD
Date: 11/09/08 11:08 pm Title: Discovery.
OMG thats so sad i cnt beleve he killed her wut an ass if i found him id kill him in an instant please update soon i hope Toms ok I hope they tell each other
Author's Response: Yay first revieww! I knoow :( She was cool too. It's gunna be really hard on the family now.
Date: 11/08/08 02:11 pm Title: Torrid Life
d:)........will billa kill andi pleze!!
Date: 11/07/08 11:56 pm Title: A New Kind of Fear
lol the chapter was a bit confusing >.> but it was mostly the grammar heh
Author's Response: Gosh I'm soo friggin' sorry. I think my betaer quit so...I'm stuck and my grammer sucks. rnrn:[ I feel terrible! I'll be sure to do better. :/ Sorry again.
Date: 11/07/08 07:55 pm Title: Torrid Life
1. I honestly don't know what the fuck I would do in Tom or Bill's situation. O.O 2. For me love is like....I guess when you want what's best for your beloved but at the same time you want yourself to be the best for them. 3. Omg, I LOVED Eir's line!! 'It’s your will, god. Save him! Please!' and the the other line! I think it's kinda cute when like light religion is put into stories, and the way she cares for Tom-both of them strangers-, I think that is like incredibly sweet and adorable! ^^ Kinda weird but yeah...And then the doctors! That was just love right there! XD I just thought of them all like 'This kid is dying! but your so hot the way you're worring!' XD I kinda want Andi to go like crazy and confess to Bill, and then have Bill be like 'forget you' and then Andi have a mental break down....Sadistic? Perhaps, but you know Andi deserves worse. :P oh! and does your banner keep changin everytime you update? Cus it looks that way to me. I sooooooo can't wait for the next chapter! ^^v
Author's Response: Ahh I love your review! It's packed with goodness XP Love is...confusing to me. I mean I guess when you knowknow you love someone you can tell but for someone like Tom and Bill, love hasn't been kind to them. Yeah...that part was actually from experience because of this damn religion and stuff. I REALLY wanna write a story with Tom and Bill in a hospital setting. I think I could do wonders with that. Andi will get what is coming to him. I mean you guys are gunna read it and be like, 'Damnnnnnnnn. Shesh!' No, I love sadistic shit. Well my banner is soooo gay and I'm trying to fix it up so it is not so much gay. :[ You can't wait for the next chapter...I can't wait to get a long review from you! XD
Date: 11/06/08 08:24 pm Title: Torrid Life
omg . . . BILL HURRY!
Author's Response: XD Yess. Hurry.
Date: 11/06/08 06:14 pm Title: Torrid Life
What does it mean at the end when it says Bill smells the fresh rain..?
Author's Response: Well Tom's scent is rain. (I have a candle that's named 'Rain Drop.' It smells like heaven.) That's what attracted him to Tom in the first place. So if he smells FRESH rain then either Tom is here and in trouble or he's bleeding. I guess I should make that clear. Sorryyyy :[
Date: 11/06/08 04:47 pm Title: Torrid Life
1. What would you do in a situation like Tom's or Bill's?
Id freak and just give up =(
2. What is love to you? Is their a certain definition? Love to me is compassion,special,dramatic and hard and there isnt a real definition everyone has there own basically
3. Favorite line...?
Bill…Bill…Bill…my only Bill. Where were you? Was this a test? Was this even real? A normal guy like me in a situation like this? With a stunning man and living in a beautiful house, kissing him and holding him to me…was this real? Could this just be…fake? Fake or not, if Bill didn’t come out now, I was dead.
please update soon i loved it i wanna know what happens to Tom i really need 2 kno