Date: 11/19/08 06:50 pm Title: Return of the Rat
1: Hmm, I seriously think Bill would probably loss it. I don't know how, but I see shock, anger, probably crying while kicking Andi's ass, but you could surprise me. 2: “I’ll protect him Mr. Kaulitz, I swear to it.” 'That man meant more to me than my own life. I knew that would kill me one day.' and that 'lets break up.' 'No.' part, those three are my fav lines! So yeah: WOOHOO! I WAS RIGHT SHE WAS PREGO! But why the hell would he do that?! Is it like 'If I can't have Bill no one can! Not even his friend or his friends baby!'? What the fuck is going through Andi's head?! What I don't get is when Bill said he loved Tom and that 'or had I always loved my baby' I assume you mean Tom, but it just seemed a little wierd to me since he hasn't called Tom 'baby' or maybe he has and I forgot. |shrugs| I am like...waiting, and counting down the second until the scene where Bill reaches the hosptial! Oh my gosh! THAT'S GONNA BE INTENSE! X3 If Andi is like, carying that baby-alive or dead-I'm going to freak out. Because obviously he's just physco now, like WAAAAAAY to far gone to even THINK of thinking of helping him! Now, onto the doctors: WTF. Their relationship seems like...so wierd to me, like cuffs!? What!? Dr. aren't supposed to be into cuffs! But it seems like Kurt is kinda like abusing Grant, but then again he IS not a 'normal' human. But it seriously seems like they have a love-hate relationship goin on there. And lastly, I would send you a poem if only I was good at writing them. But I'm pretty sure you'll get one that you'll like. :3 I SOOOOO HOPE! The confrentation is going to happen soon! I'm dying for it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! ^^v
Author's Response: Well once you kill, can you stop can you? :[ Oh yes, baby is referred to Tom. It's gunna be so FUNNNN to writeeee the fight seen. XDD I love the doctors' relationship though. It's not normal like the other couples. They fight and seem real, ya know? So that was just an extra too give you some insight to their lives. Actually I got an E-mail right after that and DANNG I loved it, best vampire poem EVA! XD I <3 my readers.
Date: 11/19/08 08:03 am Title: Return of the Rat
Bill is going to come UNGLUED if that baby is dead by Andi's hands... he's not holding together real well NOW..
and I suck at poetry :(
Author's Response: Truee dat. It's gunna get ugly. :[
Date: 11/19/08 12:49 am Title: Return of the Rat
errm i got hella confused with the last paragraph @.@ the where did you sleep last night one >.<
omg andreas is gonna dir a slow and painful death if he did kill the child
-.- lol
Author's Response: Ok! Sorry :[ I'll change it up a bit. Thank you :]
Date: 11/18/08 11:00 pm Title: Return of the Rat
Kurt and his "lover" are strange xD They have some extreme mood swings.
Author's Response: I knoow! I love it X] Thank ya!
Date: 11/18/08 10:51 pm Title: Return of the Rat
He better kill Andreas im not playing he is a sick bastard I cnt beleave anyone would do that to someone take there child out of them and then leave tha mother dieing seriously thats so fucked up pleasse update soon i need 2 know what Bill does...Andreas is at tha hospital omg NO!!!!! right???
Author's Response: Yepp he's at the hospital nowww :[ Thank youu
Date: 11/15/08 09:23 pm Title: Something About Us
Fav line: ...a vampire's love. I SOOOOO LOVED THAT LINE/PART!!
Josh's reaction....hmmm I think I would've expected like complete shock then a cry fest followed by guilt. But That's just what I think most people would react to such a bloody mess like that of a loved one. And SORRY! OUTTA TOTS! :P But.....I'm going back and reading that section.....Something WAS taken out of her? but her organs were intact......is this what I think it is? Did you just kill two birds with one crazy vampire person? So yes, needless to say I think Becca was prego, hopefully you know what I mean by prego. But, I'm like...O0O in totally 'omg aw' when I found out about Kurt. Yay!! Love them more! :3 But I'm just, happy that Bill finally realized his love!! Yay! love! So are Bill's tears really toxic like that? If so Bill has A LOT of explaining to do to Tom when he wakes up and sees those marks if they're left...But yes! I am sooo happy you updated! I swear though that your banner keeps getting like reder every time you update, and the eyes become more....vibrante. And Bill seems to be all mother like to Silo, it's ADORABLE!!! X3 Can't wait for the next chapter and Andi's ass beating!! ^^v
Author's Response: A vampire's love is different than a human's!! <3 You're the only one who catches on to that (prego=yes) SSSHH! ;) Kurt. Is. Hawt. Yes his tears are toxic, because he has no fluids in his body buttt venom. I lovee when Bill is motherly soo that's why. Thank you mam!!!
Date: 11/15/08 04:57 pm Title: Something About Us
ok so, i just started reading this yesterday and finished what you have done so far just now. yes i have no life. haha
anyways, i your really blowing me away with this story. like...wow.
you probably have heard this alot but HOLY SHIT! Vampire Bill is beyond sexy. haha. Love it.
and your totally pulling at my heart with this.
T.T
i can honestly say that i cried so hard throughout the whole Tom and Andreas bit.
so detailed. really felt like i was seeing it happen. gave me chills.
I really like this chapter. Finally love.
=D
very satisfied with this scene.
I love when Bill is crying and murmuring the 'I love you's'
its really great, i love the whole thing.
sorry for the ramble.
late reader, had to catch up. haha
Author's Response: Really?! :DD Awesome. I always get excited with new readers. No I haven't heard it much!This is a really emotional story-even with me writing it I get all teary. Noooo I'm just glad that you reviewed! I <3 rambling. XD Thank you love.
Date: 11/15/08 03:35 am Title: Something About Us
I'm satisfied with this scene but I DEFINITELY want more.
:))
As on Josh's reaction...
If it were me, I'd be in complete shock just like him. Just like the time when my grandfather died.
I couldn't cry. I didn't want to see his corpse. It hurt to see his face. The tears came years after. But I was in a state of shock and depression for a year based on what my mom told me. She told me I didn't want to talk about my grandfather and I'd change topics when the conversation led to something about him. During that period of time, she said I was always silent and became anti-social. I was only 6 years old then.
It was only when I was 13 years old when I would cry most nights when I would lie awake at night, crying myself to sleep.
So, yeah.
xDD
This chapter was extremely sad with all those deaths. Andreas NEEDS to be TORTURED. I have a feeling Bill is gunna be extremely cold and infuriated when he finds Andreas. :))
I'm excited now.
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I'll marry you, of course! Will YOU marry me? :DDD
Author's Response: Thats crazzyyyy! My experience with my grandma was very similar but not that harsh. That's terrible! :( You will be happy when this is all overr. XP I will marry you. Ok, it's settled. We're married. (weird kuz I just came from a wedding) :D Thank you mam!!rn
Date: 11/15/08 01:53 am Title: Something About Us
But the moment my head touched his chest my eyes went wide with realization. The faint beat of his heart…his smell…his love for touching me and kissing me and everything! But all the more I…loved him
favorite lines T-T so sad make tom better!!!! >.>
though i got a bit confused at the beginning
Author's Response: :'( Well Josh is just looking at the body then he says Dr. Kurt is coming in (he's half vampire.) Bill, Silo and Eir are going back to the hospital to see Tom. :)
Date: 11/15/08 12:05 am Title: Something About Us
I still just want Tom to be ok and to beat the shit out of Andi... is that too much to ask for?
Author's Response: The time will come my friend. And it is coming soon >)
Date: 11/14/08 11:00 pm Title: Something About Us
favorite line is hard... but the doc not being able to bring himself to touch Becca is right up there...
Author's Response: Yeah, she was really in bad shape and Josh was...well a word to describe that is tough. Heartbroken? Terrified? :(
Date: 11/14/08 07:11 pm Title: Something About Us
Finalllyyy Bill realizes he's in love! :) and Dr. Kurt is a half-vampire?! :O
Silo is just too cute...my favorite line was "Do you have a saddy bug Billa?"
Author's Response: Yess! He's soooo hawt in my mind. OK go check out Nirvana's lead singer Kurt Cobain. That's what he looks like. Isn't Silo the bestttt? I love 'em.
Date: 11/14/08 07:05 pm Title: Something About Us
awwww this is beautiful...but i want tom awake!
my favourite line was ..." And I cried for the love I held so fervently in my vacant soul."...
Author's Response: Thank ya! Well I'm hoping he'll wake up. :3
Date: 11/14/08 06:41 pm Title: Something About Us
OMG wuts wrong with Tom,please nothing be wrong idt i could handle that please update soon
Author's Response: :(( aww I knoww! He'll be alright :)
Date: 11/14/08 05:59 pm Title: Discovery.
Silo is a young vampire right..? I can't remember correctly. haha.
Author's Response: Yepps. I couldn't remember his age XP
Date: 11/12/08 09:45 am Title: A New Kind of Fear
hmmm maybe that wont be so bad ^_^ well either way i hope it ends well
Author's Response: Thank ya :)
Date: 11/10/08 09:36 pm Title: Discovery.
ekkk I missed your updates but now their back YAY!!! && if you wish I could 'beta' your stories.. I'm not 'official' but I'm good at it :D
Author's Response: :) Yaya! That would be so awesome. I'm practically scarred that my beta babe left me. I hope she comes back ya know? Losing a reader sucks. I would love if you would beta! I update often :) I'll email the chapter in a few I hope.
Date: 11/10/08 08:02 pm Title: Discovery.
i hope tom is alright . . . . please be alright.
Author's Response: :[ He's hurt
Date: 11/10/08 05:59 pm Title: Discovery.
When did Becca die? Why did Andreas kill her? I missed that entirely. How did Bill know Andi did it? Andi's done this before, he said so, but why did Bill not go after him before?
Thank god for Eri.
Author's Response: Actually no one knows WHO killed her and no one knows that Andi had anything to do with it. And before about the other protectors, Bill just didn't even consider Andi did it. So right now Billa is just wondering where the hell Andi was when this all happened. It will all be answered. :]
Date: 11/10/08 03:22 pm Title: Discovery.
THANK YOU!!! OH, MY GOSH! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH FOR THAT LAST LINE!! FINALLY! THE ASSHOLE'S GOING DOWN! THANK YOU!! Okay, My fav line was when Eir said 'Bill don't give up!' That was just soooo adorable! But onto more important topics: WHY!? WHY BECCA!? DAMN YOU ANDREAS!! YOU WILL GET YOUR JUST DESSERTS!! DAMN YOOOOOOOU!! Poor Becca! My mind went a bit crazy when you described her scene, I felt bad, like I almost wanted to hurl. But why!? Why did you have to take her?! Poor thing! When Andreas gets his ass kicked it better be worth it, I'm telling you right now. He soooo needs to pay for what he did to Tom and Becca! Omg, he didn't rape her did he!? Gosh! I'm still in shock about her, I can't believe it...What an ass, seriously. Andi's an ass. When I first read 'a pale man opend the door' I thought it was Andi and got scared, I was already yelling 'No!! Run away!' in my head. But yeah, didn't need to. :3 Did I mention I am LOVING those two doctors? I'm getting excited just thinking of what's gonna come next! Like, when ALL of this is over, and the 'happy ending' (if there is one) I'm wondering what it's going to be like. ^^ So exciting!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! ^^v
Author's Response: WAIT NOW!!! Just KEEP that line in mind. You just keeeeep readin. Yes, she is sooo cute. :D Oh yes...I'm SORRY! Just wait. This total is ciaos seems like it will never end but it will. Just not anytime soon. I have soooo many cards up my sleeves. >) I love the doctors. Really. I plan to make a little something for them :) After all this shit some other shit happens. Get ready for shit. XD Thank youuu!