Date: 10/06/08 10:44 pm Title: You're My Mantra
Woo! Bill and Tom's relationship isn't so confusing anymore. and what did andreas do!? :O
Author's Response: Oh the cliffies...:)
Date: 10/06/08 10:25 pm Title: You're My Mantra
AHHHHH CLIFFHANGER!
omg dying here!
O.O
Author's Response: Ohhh shit, :#< haha theres Tomi all tied up :) naw the update AND sweet relief is coming soon :)
Date: 10/06/08 10:19 pm Title: You're My Mantra
eeekke Tomi??? -Andreas can go fuck him self.... (grrr); he better ot HURT him
:/
Author's Response: Dude, everyone is gunna hate me! Hehe Thank ya XD
Date: 10/06/08 10:12 pm Title: You're My Mantra
omg Andreas is crazy i think lolz and if I was Tom id ask Bill not to leave me alone with that crazy psycho lolz i liked it im so excited for what happens next
Author's Response: heh, i guess he is a little crazy...but i love andreass! :) I knoww, dont you just love cliffiesss??? Thank for the review :)
Date: 10/06/08 09:33 pm Title: You're My Mantra
evil cliffie... waiting to see what happens to poor Tom...
Author's Response: yeaa, about that... Sorry :( Now it's gunna be easier to write so...I like suspence :) Thank you for reviewing love!
Date: 10/03/08 12:54 pm Title: Confession of Some Sorts
so.....tom doesnt like bill in like the relationship sense? he doesnt love him? well fuck him in the butt hole really hard and deep then. what a douche. hahah just kidding, for the most part. i hope he'll develop those feelings soo, id be so sad if he didnt because i sort of feel like bill already really likes him and i refuse to let andreas take him from tom. i REFUUUUUUUSSSSEEE!!! so be awesome like you are and update soooon!
Author's Response: Eh...you'll understand soon! It's very confusing for Tom ta get used ta liking a boy in that kind of way but for him it is easy to like him in a sexual way. That's what he's trying to get across. Oh no...you are the awesome one my friend XD
Date: 10/02/08 12:50 am Title: Confession of Some Sorts
It's alright:)
It answered the few questions I had :D
Author's Response: Whoo, thats good. I guess it's a set up for the next chapter. :)
Date: 10/01/08 03:35 am Title: Confession of Some Sorts
Updatio, STAT!
Author's Response: Yes, mam! (I say mam 'coz I think all the readers on here are girls. I mean the BillXTom ones...But if you're a boy, I'm sorry) :P
Date: 10/01/08 02:30 am Title: Confession of Some Sorts
aww.. :/ i hope that Bill will open up more.. :o so Tom wouldn't feel as jealous and i hope that Tom will stay with bill. :D they should be together~` no one should stand in the way!! :DD
Author's Response: Dats right. No. One. :P
Date: 10/01/08 01:17 am Title: Confession of Some Sorts
the ending covers Toms ambivalence over the whole situation rather well though... I really just want to lock the two of them in a room with a couple tubes of lube and some bottled water and walk away for two days... silly boys.
Author's Response: Oh ya think? Well if you say it like that I guess so. i wasn't sure if I was gettin' my point across. Oh yes...lots of lube. Maybe their own hotel on a stranded island. ;)
Date: 09/30/08 11:44 pm Title: Confession of Some Sorts
d:)(gangsta smiley)
Author's Response: Oh shit! Dats tiiight. haha
Date: 09/30/08 05:58 pm Title: Desperate for Your Touch
Love ittt!
and Georgasm?!?! HAHAHA thats awesome!
XD
Author's Response: Lmao! I know, I nearly got kicked outta class for laughin so hard!XD XD XDrnThanks for reading :)
Date: 09/29/08 02:40 am Title: Wherever I May Roam
Gah, sorry, but here's a new mistake!
I think you meant to say "Tom" instead of Bill here: “Bill I didn’t put any dreams into your mind last night.”
I know, I'm annoying for that, but little details can go a long way.
Author's Response: Nooo, you're not. I'm horrible at spelling and correcting things. Keep up with this, you really help me out!
Date: 09/29/08 02:31 am Title: Until It Sleeps
Minor mistake, but I couldn't help but point it out.
"I held back a moan when my lips brushed against mine." Just letting you know. :)
Author's Response: Gawshhh, thank you very much! You now rock. Ima go change dat right now. ;) Hope you like it!
Date: 09/29/08 02:20 am Title: A New Kind of Fear
GOOD LORD!
I'm only on the first chapter and I want MOOOOOOOORE!!! :OOOO
Author's Response: haha, yayyyyy ya like it :)
Date: 09/28/08 08:23 pm Title: Desperate for Your Touch
Toms 'control'scene.... and the smut of course :)
Author's Response: Ahh yes. Bill actually thinks Tom has control... ;)
Date: 09/28/08 05:02 pm Title: Desperate for Your Touch
"Well do you have anything for me to do?"
He waited a second before answering huskily,"Come suck me?"
that was hilarious and my fav. part pure amazingness please update soon i feel bad for Bill that he can never be humen and all that and be with Tom for real
Author's Response: Haha, oh the sexiness. :) true true... its too sad eh? Thank yaa
Date: 09/27/08 11:17 pm Title: Desperate for Your Touch
Wow! Yay! You updated! Hmm...my favorite part? Well, when Bill crawled under Toms shirt and Tom said he looked like a little hermit crab. Yeah, I liked that part the most, besides the half smut! :D
Author's Response: :) Yeah that part was my favorite to write! I love when Bill is too cute to handle. Okay...the halfy smut toooo... ;)
Date: 09/27/08 10:15 pm Title: Desperate for Your Touch
well... Gerog is an orgasm to see!! XDDD
Good story and chapter. i really like it, but i feel a little sad for Bill, believe to be a monster looks difficult and painful. What does he need to be warmer like he wants?
God, i'm starting to feel depresed...
Author's Response: :) sooo true...mhhmm. but i'm gustisexual. :) rnrnYes being Bill isn't easy...he has so many problems that he can't let out. I'm sure that it will get better for him. Thanks you :)
Date: 09/27/08 09:27 pm Title: Desperate for Your Touch
love it! d:)(gangsta smiley)
Author's Response: :D