Date: 10/16/08 03:25 am Title: Part II - Fading Hope
Bill should call!! D: ...yes..i wonder why no wondered where tom was..poor guy...:[ ah.. Andreas + jealous = torture for tom. :[
Author's Response: Yeah it would be interesting if he did. rnrnIts funny that jealousy can cause a person to do so many awful things. Thank you :)
Date: 10/16/08 12:41 am Title: Part II - Fading Hope
LOVE!!!
Author's Response: haha, I'm gladdd :)
Date: 10/15/08 10:51 pm Title: Part II - Fading Hope
Short, sweet, and to the point. The point being the torture, of course. XD Lovin' it. I am on the edge of my seat and waiting for the next chapter. ^_^
Author's Response: Yeaap. A little beat down is always good :) Ima update soon!rn
Date: 10/15/08 10:48 pm Title: A New Kind of Fear
or get caught in the act by Bill... then Bill would at least maul him a little
Author's Response: True, true. I just cant wait to write that scene :)
Date: 10/15/08 10:39 pm Title: Part II - Fading Hope
boy, poor oblivious Bill... I stand by the statement that Andi need to die...
Author's Response: Shit I know right? So he needs to get punished??
Date: 10/15/08 10:38 pm Title: Part II - Fading Hope
I. HATE. ANDI. AND. YOU.
Tom needs rescuing! Andi's gonna get hell from Bill for this. I'd rather Tom break free and beat up andi a bit.
Author's Response: Aww don't hate mee :( rnrnYeah you don't wanna picture the look in Bill's eyes when and if he finds out. rnrnThank youuu!
Date: 10/15/08 10:25 pm Title: Part II - Fading Hope
Bills really needs to know what's going on D:
Author's Response: I knoww :(
Date: 10/15/08 07:59 pm Title: Part I- Betraying Eyes
I KNEW IT! Why I knew that was going to happen, cus I would've done the same thing, only to Andreas. >:P When I read the first paragraphy I got upset then thought, 'Of course she'd pull this!' XD I can't help but wonder if Andi did something to Tom while he was cleaning him...He just HAD to have done SOMETHING! A touch, a cut, a PAPER CUT! SOMETHING! If he didn't then he's seriously messed up in the head. That's like Evil 101, always take advantage when you have the chance! XD Anyway, Poor Tom! I wanna know what'd he do, when Bill's gonna come home, and If Andi gets his ass kicked BIG TIME! Can't wait for the next chapter! :3 ^^v
Author's Response: Hahhahahah! Wheww. you didnt think I'd let Tom off that easily??? I laughed my ass off! He's really not a bad guy...just a lil crazyy. Haha man! You got me there. You are a smart one! :3
Date: 10/15/08 09:03 am Title: Part I- Betraying Eyes
poor baby... and Andreas needs to die....
Author's Response: Haha aww you guys are way too hard on my baby! Jk :)
Date: 10/15/08 01:50 am Title: Part I- Betraying Eyes
ah.. poor tom 0o;; just wondering is Bill feeling any of this pain..its a sort of vague form?? but Bill needs to come home early.. D:
Author's Response: Thats explained later when I gon into what Bill's thinking. But it is very vague. So vague that he doesnt worry about it. :/
Date: 10/15/08 12:19 am Title: Part I- Betraying Eyes
go and die again andi! no one likes u!!! especially bill! grrrrrrrrrrrr! d:)
Author's Response: haha die again!? Awww poor andi.
Date: 10/14/08 11:58 pm Title: Part I- Betraying Eyes
Oh, and I was just wondering,when Bill comes back, he's gonna be really cruel on Andreas right? Like, really really evil? Cos that'd be so awesome!! Haha...(: I'm kinda dying to know...
Author's Response: It will be beyond evil. So evil you might want to kill me. :)
Date: 10/14/08 11:53 pm Title: Part I- Betraying Eyes
LOVED IT!!! Idk why, but I love torture:)
Ha! I knew Andreas was gonna do something to keep him from getting free! Haha. He's going to puke. Yeah, why IS he calling his name?
Oh sorry, Nearest The Positive is a band that's not even famous yet. They're a christian/screamo band...yeah. You can only hear their music on myspace, btw.
Author's Response: Yeah I love torture too! Its always fun XD Christian screamo eh? Never heard of that combo. ahaha I'll be sure ta look em up
Date: 10/14/08 10:49 pm Title: Part I- Betraying Eyes
O_O! That really sucks...
How long has Tom been tied up for?
Author's Response: Ehhh, couple days actually. Even though Bill's only going to be gone for one week.
Date: 10/14/08 10:09 pm Title: Part I- Betraying Eyes
Wai~! So wonderful!!! Better than anything I could ever hope to write. ^_^ Very well written and detailed. The chapter has a tense and suspicious air about it, and it just makes me tingle with excitement! You were just leading me on by the nose, and then this cliffhanger made me trip and fall flat on my face. XD Still lovin' it! ^_^
Author's Response: Ohhh really! I'm blushing red right now! :D Goshhh thank you Reiaa! I took some of your advice but I really am trying to use most of it. Dudee, totally forgot to write something else on the chap. notes...maybe you wanna go read it? Hope ya got my e-mail. :)
Date: 10/14/08 10:04 pm Title: Part I- Betraying Eyes
Andreas is fucked up seriously i loved it please update soon
Author's Response: I wanna strangle him ! ahaa thank youu!
Date: 10/12/08 11:36 pm Title: Something In the Way
wooooooow!!
I need to say: wow!! XD i don't think that sounds like Writers block, but only u know ^^
I like a lot the story and these chapters are wonderful, and tha end of this was amazing!! I'm very excited about what'll happen?
Good luck, and thanks for this story.
Author's Response: :))))! I'm happy! Well I wouldnt call it writers block but it takes longer to write short little chapters. :(rnrnNo...thank you! You guys make it possible for me to keep going!
Date: 10/12/08 06:39 pm Title: Something In the Way
writers block sucks... will wait as long as I have to...
and Andi ought to know better than to taunt a bound Tom like that.
Author's Response: It sure does! rnrnHah yeah but he's also stubborn. X)
Date: 10/12/08 04:51 pm Title: Something In the Way
go tomi!!!! d:)
Author's Response: X) Ohh yeah!
Date: 10/12/08 04:48 pm Title: Day One
poor tomi...
Author's Response: Everyone is saying that! XD