Date: 10/19/08 12:21 pm Title: Part IV - Macabre
I really want Bill to go home, but it doesn't sound like he's going to, and Tom's emotions were so beautiful and raw, but so painful. I don't want him to be hurt! Or die.
Author's Response: Well you never know...Thank you! I hoped to write it that way :) I don't want him to get hurt but...life must go on :/
Date: 10/19/08 11:43 am Title: Part IV - Macabre
Well, more than loved it. Lmao. It really is amazing. Seriously, when you mix vampires with bill, tom & andreas, I'm just....idk how to describe it (its good though). Oh really? Well people are blind. Andreas is so amazing, I mean, just read! There's Tom all tied up, and then there's Andreas, perfect as he is, hurting Tom. We all love Tom, but Andi is so much better atm. It's just....wow.
yes, you do(: I really like that. Oh, well if you have a test this week, you should probably study for it instead. :)
Author's Response: Haha!! :) I'm soooo happy you really enjoy reading it! Yeah I don't really like the kind of vampires who sleep in coffins and don't come out during the day. That's not how I picture them. Thank youuu! Yeah, I'm gunna fail :(
Date: 10/19/08 11:16 am Title: Part IV - Macabre
Everything that was gained! All my wild feelings! All of my lusts and wants and desires were gone! I only lusted for life.
that was my fav. lolz iv known that feeling some what poor Tomi please update soon
Author's Response: Haha Yeah that was a good one <3 Thank you!
Date: 10/19/08 03:06 am Title: Part IV - Macabre
aww...i hope Bill does figure out before it is too late.. :[ my favorite line in this chapter is "The lust for life; I danced the dance of death, macabrely." :33 but i do feel bad for Tom. >>;;
Author's Response: yeahh...Tom really does think hes gunna die. :( Yeah I love cool ending sentences as you know. They pack a punch! Thank you <333
Date: 10/19/08 02:25 am Title: Part IV - Macabre
wow.short...but powerful my fave line was " Could I accept my life at this point?" Such a true thing really. I think it's a question we should ask ourselves everyday :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Truly, from the bottom of my heart <3 Yes you're very right there. :)
Date: 10/19/08 02:01 am Title: Part IV - Macabre
Omg. I loved it. Bill is so cute when he's happy. My favorite line was the last one♥
sorry I haven't reviewed that last few chapters. My phone is acting up:( anyway. I loved those too. And Andreas, I have to admit, he's amazing. Sry Tomi (:
I know you udate fast. But please please please udate soon? This story is like a drug to me and I'm addicted. I need more :D
Author's Response: You loved it, really? Awesome! Haha! I'm sooo happy you really like it :) And that your the only person that realized that Andi is so amazing. XP rnrnI do update fast don't I? It's all for you guys! I'll try but I have a HUGE latin test this week :( Thank you!
Date: 10/19/08 01:33 am Title: Part IV - Macabre
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. This chapter really reached me, you know? This line made me laugh: "This sounded like a cheesy soap opera line, but ni, this was true." Awww! You shouldn't have! ^////^ I really appreciate your dedication. It means alot to me. Love ya!
Author's Response: Yes! Thank you S O O O much! I wrote this from the bottom of my heart, while listenin to the rain of course :) Haha oh yeah, the whole thing was cheesy but I love cheesy stuff XD I guess my heart is cheesy. Yay first review for this chap. Glad it was you! rnrnNahhh like I keep sayin, you deserve it ;) Lurve ya too Reia-chan :D
Date: 10/18/08 04:13 pm Title: Part III - Voices from Heaven
my favorite part was when Tom FINALLY said how he felt about Bill soo sweet.. but omfg sooooo intense!!!! i love it!! update sooooon please pretty please! But huge question... why did Andreas make those guys rape Bill??? He said he loves Bill why would he want to hurt him??? guess i'll find out next chapter? Oh and funniest line was like a fat man eyes a piece of chicken sooooo funny haha...
Author's Response: Hellooo! I know, that was even a freakin load off my mind. 20 somethin chapters and I finally decieded to let the cat outta the bag :) I'm plannin to update realll soon! Uhhhh to tell ya the truth I haven't really thought about that haha. Ermmmm...I think because Bill refused to accept his feelings and actually go out with him. Thanks for bringin that up though XP Thank you for readin hun <3
Date: 10/17/08 11:27 pm Title: Part III - Voices from Heaven
ugh... go to hell Andreas!!!
my favorite line:“I can’t wait to smother you.”-Bill.
Author's Response: Yesss burn in hell :)rnrnAhh I like that one too!
Date: 10/17/08 10:56 am Title: A New Kind of Fear
I don't think you did, given what he's been through. Everyone has a breaking point and I think Tom is edging upon his fast.
Author's Response: Good, good. Coz even though I don't know know Tom Kaulitz, he's a guy and sure some guys are soft and shit but I don't know about Tom... Yeah very good point there.
Date: 10/17/08 02:21 am Title: Part III - Voices from Heaven
eeeekk!!! I hope Bill comes home and kicks some ass!!!
Author's Response: haha yeahhhh! XD Oh man hes gunna be PISSED :)
Date: 10/16/08 10:35 pm Title: Part III - Voices from Heaven
this is pretty fun, even thought it screams Twilight with Bill and Tom as the characters.
Keep writing.
Author's Response: Really? Is that bad? rnrnThank you for the review!
Date: 10/16/08 09:11 pm Title: Part III - Voices from Heaven
oh god...Andreas is soo insane.. 0o;; and i feel so bad for Tom.. T______T;; i hope Andreas didn't plan to rape Tom when Bill is coming back. oh god.. the whole situation would be even worse.... @_______@;;
Author's Response: he's just jealous! but worse makes it more awesomeee!
Date: 10/16/08 08:15 pm Title: Part III - Voices from Heaven
More, please! This is so intense right now; I can't wait to see Bill's reaction!
Author's Response: It's gunna be like the earth movin' under your feet when you read it. I hope. :)
Date: 10/16/08 08:03 pm Title: Part III - Voices from Heaven
OMG when i got loose id kill Andreas he is an evil son of a bitch i feel so bad please make it better soon please
Author's Response: :) I'll will soon! <3
Date: 10/16/08 07:59 pm Title: Part III - Voices from Heaven
My favorite line? I don't know... "Terror, sheer terror is what I remember." is one of them. A nice way to insert a cliffie. ^_^ Lovely. Tom was crying. >) *evil laughter* Can I be your number one fan? XD
Author's Response: Hahaha, just pulled that one outta mah but. Eww. ;D rnrnI hope I didnt make him too soft ya know? rnrnNo you may not because.... I'm YOUR numba 1 fan! XDD No. Really. :P (Japanese voice)
Date: 10/16/08 07:44 pm Title: A New Kind of Fear
at least Tom tried.. and Tom doesn't usually cry for much of anything
Author's Response: Yeah true. I'm worried I made him too soft for that chapter.
Date: 10/16/08 07:39 pm Title: Part III - Voices from Heaven
WTF!!!!! ANDI IS SERIOUSLY MESSED UP!!!!!
d:)LOVE!!!
Author's Response: Sheshh, he's mad! XDrnrnSuch a crazy dudddee!!!
Date: 10/16/08 07:24 pm Title: Part III - Voices from Heaven
gesh... damnit Bill get a clue!
Author's Response: "I would, thank you very much, but he's so weak I'm not gettin' any signals!"
Date: 10/16/08 06:14 pm Title: Part III - Voices from Heaven
Ack! -gag- he's raping him!? x_x
Bill needs to get there like...NOW.
Author's Response: Ick, Andreas + Tom = unhappy readers :)