Date: 10/21/08 08:23 pm Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
can't wait!!!!!!
Author's Response: haha :)
Date: 10/21/08 08:21 pm Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
no complaints, I feel horrible for poor Tom and wretched for Bill when he figures everything out... and little updates or big makes no difference to me, whichever is easier for you
Author's Response: Yeah, it's gunna be so heart breaking! :(rnrnOh ok :]
Date: 10/21/08 09:46 am Title: Part V - 神聖
oh good Andi's about to die... Tom's probably going to collapse afterwards, but he's doing what he has to to protect His Bill
Author's Response: Yep, ass whopping :)
Date: 10/20/08 11:36 pm Title: Part V - 神聖
yay! Tom is on the way to saving himself~~ :33 *cheers* I now, wonder if he is going to tell Bill about this.. :/ hmm.. XDD
Author's Response: Yessm I hope so! Thank you :3
Date: 10/20/08 10:57 pm Title: Part V - 神聖
d:)
Author's Response: haha :]
Date: 10/20/08 09:39 pm Title: A New Kind of Fear
No! Never! I'm not disappointed at all! Just pointing something out is all. Actually I've never betaed for someone before, and I usually look over my own stuff (does that count as betaing). But I'm a stickler for proper grammar and stuff. Truthfully, I can't even read a story that has so many spelling/grammar mistakes that I'm up to my ears in them, no matter how good or original the plot is. I don't mean to insult anyone including you, but it's just... *shivers* Can't do it. I guess you can compare it to a homophobe trying to read slash. Not gonna happen. XD But, yeah. Good with grammar and spelling (college level scores, go me!). Love to help you out.
Author's Response: Ahh mmk. I understand! I don't want you to stop readin'! Neverr. Please doo, I'd be honored. So I'll just e-mail you about how to get this thing going.
Date: 10/20/08 09:12 pm Title: Part V - 神聖
D:
What happened to the G's O_O
Author's Response: Oh they will be coming back reeeal soon :)
Date: 10/20/08 09:04 pm Title: Part V - 神聖
YAY! I hope Tom gets out and pummels his ass! I love that he is finally realizing that he LOVES Bill! So stoked for the next!!
Author's Response: Heheh! Yayyy! :] Thank you! <333
Date: 10/20/08 09:01 pm Title: Part V - 神聖
Ah~! *screams* You stopped it!!! Why the HELL did you stop?! No~! I hate you!!! But, no, I love you!!! Grrr! This is definitely a love-hate relationship. Why do you do this to me?! I'm so conflicted! T.T Dedicated to me again?! Gosh, I love you. See?! Love-hate relationship, I tell you! I've actually noticed that in the past few chapters your spelling and grammar has slipped a little. I'm offering to beta for you if you want. I'd love to get the chapters before everyone else, too. Mwahaha! >) But seriously, if you need a human grammar/spell check, I'm your girl! And I'd love give you advice on the plot as well if you'd like. Here's hoping you'll say yes. -Reia
Author's Response: Oh-hoo! Love/hate Reia :( Hahaha! I'm sorry but I'll still love ya! Yes, yes, always dedicated to you :]] It has, hasn't it? I'm sorry, I don't mean to disappoint you or anything :( You beta??!! Oh my! Yes! -I'D- be honored! How can I say no to you! I hate you! Ahh, I see where the love/hate comes in...Yes yes yes yes. Yes. <3
Date: 10/20/08 08:48 pm Title: Part V - 神聖
hey best fwiend I loved this entire chappy it freakn' rocked [teeheee] :)
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad best fwriend! <33
Date: 10/20/08 06:02 pm Title: Part V - 神聖
OMG LOVE finally yay!!!! he is free thats amazing lolz please update soon please
Author's Response: well sorta love? haha I will, thank you!
Date: 10/20/08 05:07 pm Title: Part V - 神聖
Woo! I like the part where Tom is breaking free :3
Author's Response: DUDE~! Ms. Panda you are my 200th reviewer! Thank you for reviewing so often. I hope you are enjoying the story so far <3 Thank you again!
Date: 10/20/08 04:47 pm Title: Part V - 神聖
Omg yay tomi! So its love? And when's Bill coming back?
I never loosened up so every single time he slid into me it felt just as bad, just as excruciating. My fists clawed into themselves also drawing blood from the pressure. He was slamming into my insides carelessly yet with so much power compared to a human I actually felt like my but was being torn in two. And to make things worse, each time Andreas pulled out he would moan a lustful moan and shout some dirty
Author's Response: Really?? Is that your fav? Interesting! XP rnrnYou'll just have to find out eh? ;)
Date: 10/20/08 01:49 pm Title: Part V - 神聖
i liked that he finally admitted to loving bill
Author's Response: Yepp, about time ne?rnrnThank you :)
Date: 10/20/08 01:12 pm Title: Part V - 神聖
Yay! Andi finally uses Tom!! :D Not that I like that but you KNEW he HAD to. Evil 101, remeber? ;) Anyway, I hated the scene, but I loved the last line l3 so I guess that's my favorite part. Oh! Also I LOVE when Tom's all possesive! 'Mine! All Mine!" XD Love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! I wanna see Andi get is ass kicked!! XD ^^v
Author's Response: Finally??? hahaha...eviillll XP I know I hated writing the damn thing :( So much pain ); Yes yes very possesive! Thank youu <3
Date: 10/19/08 07:04 pm Title: Part IV - Macabre
OMG I found this story last night and I read until 5 am. I couldn't keep my eyes open, so I finished it this afternoon after I woke up. I LOVE vampire stories, and this is a tie as favorite with the Twilight series! Pretty much because its TH! Can't wait for an update! *marks as favorite!*
Author's Response: HEHEH >) I loooooove vampires too! (twilight isss awesome!) Aww dont loose sleep over this lil story <3 Thannnk you!
Date: 10/19/08 05:50 pm Title: Part IV - Macabre
Macabre...was wondering when that would come up
Author's Response: Yeppp :)rnrnThank you <3
Date: 10/19/08 05:37 pm Title: Part IV - Macabre
Great chapter!! hmmmmmmm i have so many favorite lines in this one..... hmmmmm i loved the last line. The lust for life; i danced the dance of death, macabrely. Oh and i loved the Bills Pov you should add more of those in the upcoming chapters! This is favorite story!!! i love it and lets face it ive read A LOT of tokio hotel fanfics but none of them described there feelings as well as you do none of them put so much detail in there stories!! keep up the outstanding work!!!!
Author's Response: Duuuuudee, that's one of the best comments that I've gotten so far! I can't thank you enough. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Date: 10/19/08 02:38 pm Title: Part IV - Macabre
Dark :o
I liked the very last sentence,
The lust for life; I danced the dance of death, macabrely.
Author's Response: Yeaaa :/ Dark ne? rnThank you XP
Date: 10/19/08 02:32 pm Title: Part IV - Macabre
My favorite line was the last one. I'm speechless. Even though this was short It was beautifully written. I'm scared for what's going to happen in the next chapter!! SAVE HIM BILL SAVE HIM!!! So Andi IS going to finally have some fun? >:3 Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^v
Author's Response: I was listening to a song called Macabre and I was like, WTF is macabre?? So I looked it up and it kinda fit the chapter :) Thank you!! :D Yes Andi will try too.