Date: 10/27/08 03:01 am Title: When Things Crumble
.....how could you leave it like that!?!?!? *dies* omg...WILL Bill make it back before Andi finishes the job!?!?!? @_@;; if he makes it back and Tom doesn't die..[he better not die!! DX] i think he would be soo pissed at Andi!!! D: maybe try to kill him...i say try because i don't think Bill would have the heart to kill his best friend. maybe not talk to him for a couple of centuries..but not kill.. i think his first thoughts would be "WTF is going here?!?! D
Author's Response: Ahhhh I'm sorrrry! (also faints) I hope he does. I mean yeah he'd be pissed and crap but think about just how deep Bill's emotion are and how deep they run. Would something like friendship stop those feelings or would he just fuckin' go crazy?
Date: 10/26/08 10:43 pm Title: When Things Crumble
GODDAMMIT~~~!!!!!
THAT IS ONE HELLUVA CLIFFHANGER!![for both Bill and Tom's side]
poor Tom...i wonder what he's gunna do???
You do not know how much I NEED updates on this.
I practically CRAVE your updates!
weird,eh? But true.
I really hope you update soon and I hope your updates become longer.
But I'd prefer you update long, amazing chapters later rather than short,crappy chapters sooner.
In my country, you updated yesterday which was Sunday.
Hope there's an update on our Friday.
Haha.
Thanks for updating! It made my day(:
Author's Response: Cravee? Yeeeeahh! XD No it's not weird! Are my short ones crappy?? :( Ok well look for an update hun! <3333 No, thank you!!
Date: 10/26/08 10:40 pm Title: When Things Crumble
i loved it please update soon i like tha banner its brighter i think lolz fits better i guess lolz i hope Andreas gets his ass kicked soon and i hope Tom doesnt die please dont let him die
Author's Response: XD Thank you guhh!
Date: 10/26/08 10:18 pm Title: When Things Crumble
what's he doing w/ his other hand?
You put in those parts about Bill shopping to make me scream didn't you? Gawd that was frustrating! He better get home! NOW!
Author's Response: Hahah! You guys are gunna hate me by the end of this. XD Thank you!
Date: 10/24/08 10:56 pm Title: A New Kind of Fear
omg i forgot i like an update everyday haha im too impatient to wait a whole week i can barely wait for those tokio hotel tv episodes
Author's Response: Well you won't have to wait A WHOLE week :] Maybe twice a week.
Date: 10/24/08 10:52 pm Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
YES!!!! Tom is free!!! love the beating you put in there! haha Bills going to kick some ass! love the chapter!
Author's Response: Haha! You like the beating? Gooood! Thank you girl <3 you rock!!!
Date: 10/22/08 10:12 pm Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
OMGGGG HELP TOMI
Author's Response: Hahahaha >) Evil smile! Don't worryyyy!
Date: 10/22/08 05:40 pm Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
Haha yup! Well, I can't wait to read what you have planned:)
Author's Response: XP Yepp I reaaally hope you like what I got!
Date: 10/22/08 02:43 pm Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
omg omg please update soon idt u should make them tha long ones just maybe another 2 or 300 words make them like atleast 800 or so cus these r a little 2 short lolz but ur tha writer please please please update soon
Author's Response: Yea I think they're short too. Thank you and I will try ;]
Author's Response: Yea I think they're short too. Thank you and I will try ;]
Date: 10/22/08 07:45 am Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
NEW REEADEEEEERRRR!!!
I am srsly in love with this *cough*and*cough*you*cough*.
YOU NEED TO UPDATE MORE, WOMAN!!
THIS IS AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!!!
UPDATE MORE SOON, LOVE???
/end of caps lock abuse
Author's Response: XDDDD Yayyyyy! New readers are awesome! I love ALL my readers to death <3333 Thank you sooo much and I hope you continue to read! :]
Date: 10/22/08 03:34 am Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
Eeeek! I can't wait for the next chapter! Whatever works for you! Update whenever, it doesn't matter to me!
Author's Response: I can't wait to right it haha! XP Ohhhkay.
Date: 10/22/08 01:24 am Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
eeee!!!Suspense is killin me!! Keep it up!!
Author's Response: Ha :) I will!
Date: 10/21/08 11:30 pm Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
I personally like the small chaps, they get me more into the story :)
cant wait for the ass-whoppin'
Author's Response: Really? Hmmm...
Date: 10/21/08 11:25 pm Title: A New Kind of Fear
lmao. he should get caught. then, i'd laugh and be like "ha! in your face tom!" (just in casre your wondering, i DO love tom, but there arent many stories where he's tortured like this, it;s usually bill.) and then i would be oh so happy when (if) Andreas tortures his again and then (if) bill goes and sees him doing that ot his tomi and kicks some major ass! like, beats andreas to a cute lil bloody pulp. and then andreas dies. the end!
yeaahhhh, whatever. like you'd do that...wait, would you? i hope not. i mean, i hope Tom gets caught and Andreas does some damage then Bill punishes him for it, but i dont want andreas to die...not yet at least. lmao.
Author's Response: haha, you planned all that out? Well I've got stuff up my sleeves...maybe not that wonderful plot but it's gunna be good.
Date: 10/21/08 09:56 pm Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
Sorry I'm not the first again. I had college. Harry Potter class rocks. XD
I think that you should do weekly updates because your chapters seem more developed and detailed when you do it that way. That and the suspense keeps the readers coming back. XD
Oh, yes. Becca the Great knows lots of magic tricks. Just ignore the cards that slip out of random places on her person. XD No complaints here. Loved it, of course. When do I not? It was short, but the constant cliffies are always keeping readers on the edge. Probably not good for blood pressure, but you read at your own risk, right? XD
I still haven't gotten your email by the way. Sorry to be a nag, but I'm sitting here, checking every few minutes. "Email yet? Nope. Email yet? Nope." And then the depressing thoughts start coming. "What if something happened? What is she got in an accident? What if she was murdered because she was the daughter of a mafia boss? What if she found out she had a chronic illness that had nearly no chance of survival, and she was too depressed to do anything? What if she got a hot [German] boyfriend and forgot all about us readers?"
Actually I should stop rambling now. That was such a waste of five minutes. XP
So yeah. Email please? Even if it's to say you don't want me to beta or what. I won't take offense of anything, just so you know, if you do decide not give me the chapters to beta.
P.S. Longest review I've ever written. XD
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm gunna to that. It's better for me and you guys I think. It's funny coz I check my e-mail like crazy always checkin' for a message from ya. ;D Dude. I have an illness. Weirddddd...are you spyin on me? :) I wish I had a hot boyfriend. Or Ellen. Hah. NOO, you can beta!!!! Puhlessee beta. Now I'm beggin' :) Hope you send an e-mail or somethin today.
Date: 10/21/08 09:44 pm Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
keep running!! T_______T;;
Author's Response: haha! We hope so, ne?
Date: 10/21/08 09:36 pm Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
O_O! Well, I like the everyday updates, but the chapters are so short. But I guess I like these everyday updates rather than the week-long wait updates.
Author's Response: True true. Ima start doing bigger chapters every other day or three days. I hope that works. :/
Date: 10/21/08 09:32 pm Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
This is the shortest chapter ever. You better update soon! I wan't everything to be ok. Also, shouldn't Tom slowly be becoming paralized?
Author's Response: I'll balance it. An update every other day or every three days. I think that works. Yeah, he is gunna start in the next chapter.
Date: 10/21/08 09:29 pm Title: Part V - 神聖
ABOUT TIME!!! Andi's gonna get it!
Author's Response: I knooo! <33 thankss
Date: 10/21/08 09:20 pm Title: Part VI - Freedom isn't Far
I won't complain and...Im very patient.
you should update how you do now. I like it cuz I get to read it everyday:)
Im happy he got free. (: but I want Andreas to get to him. Wow, aren't I just mean?
omg, I just realised half of my review for ch. 27 is missing. So yeah, that was my fave part. lol. Sorry about that.
Author's Response: Good, thank you for that. Patience is a good virtue :) I aint got NUN. HA rnrnDude, I want him to get caught too.rnrnReally? It is?? Goodd, thank you! :)