Date: 02/08/10 02:32 pm Title: One Step Forward
I'm very glad to see that they are mending and things are coming to peace. Hopefully they can be okay now, not too many more problems.
Date: 02/08/10 10:43 am Title: Breaking Point
I really love how Andreas looks in the illustrations, it's amazing. I feel this chapter is a great step, forward, hopefully. You're expressing such an important matter and describing it very well. I feel Bill is bordering on Anorexia, hopefully he does not fall to it.
Date: 02/08/10 09:09 am Title: Prostration
I feel sorry for Tom as much as I feel sorry for Bill only because I think he wants to be sorry now. I love the title and quote of this story because it's one of my favorite songs of all time.
Date: 02/08/10 06:09 am Title: Shades of Sin
Damn! The whole family is breaking down. Poor, poor Bill, he's been through so much in such short time. I believe everyone is allowed time to wallow and all but Tom's is beginning to drive me mad. Also, I support Andreas, one hundred percent.
Date: 02/08/10 05:53 am Title: What's Done In The Dark...
Maybe now Tom will pull his head from his ass and realize Bill does love him, even if he laid with another. Maybe if someone would take the time to listen to Bill they would understand it was by the God's will. I can understand Tom's sorrow and hurt because he's now been cheated on twice but honestly, if he paid attention he would see how hard Bill was trying.
Date: 02/08/10 05:40 am Title: Celebration
I can't even yell at you I'm in such shock. ...Like wow...
Date: 02/08/10 12:40 am Title: Labors of Love
Wow, Bill is VERY determined. Hopefully Tom is not disappointed and Jorg doesn't cause too many more problems.
Date: 02/08/10 12:14 am Title: Contrition
I cannot express how glad I am that I don't have to wait for an update on this because I SO badly wish to continue right now, thank the gods I can. I really like how you're taking things so slow and realistically between Tom and Bill.
Date: 02/07/10 11:46 pm Title: Patience Is a Virtue
A very interesting crest at that. Now, this definitely getting to be emotionally whelming for the readers too. Perhaps I connect to the characters too well or something but I almost constantly feel the way the characters do (whoever I'm reading about at that moment) Sometimes I find myself snapping at the people around me even though I shouldn't. So needless to say you're both doing an immaculate job of conveying their emotions an feelings on subjects.
Date: 02/07/10 11:13 pm Title: No Words
And it begins. So much is going to be said and more feelings will undoubtedly be hurt. I do hope things can be worked out between the two of them though, since Bushido is no longer a possibility. Ya know something I thought of that's never been mentioned is the concubine that bared Tom. Who is Tom's technical "mother" anyway?
Date: 02/07/10 10:41 pm Title: Divine Intervention
Well, it wasn't as I thought it would be, but they were still brought together. Whatever was that vision Bill seen?!?! It aggravates me when I do not know things, as it does everyone. I love how anything I think I have something right and I guess I am wrong.
Date: 02/07/10 10:10 pm Title: Acclimation
I love the illustrations you guys have, it's so cool, and new. Now, I wonder what's wrong. Rather it's Tom or his father is what I'm curious about. I'm betting it's Tom though and this is what will bring them back together.
Date: 02/07/10 08:32 pm Title: To Everything There Is A Season
That was very pleasant, very tastefully done. I rather enjoy how you two make everything fall into place perfectly and still manage to keep your readers at bay. You both have a very skillful talent everyone needs to learn. The letter wasn't what I was expecting but it was still very nice. I have a question though, about the women within the story. If a girl is born, how is raised? Is it still raised by the two males or the female? Are women ONLY concubines in this world? Nothing more?
Date: 02/07/10 06:48 pm Title: Fragrant Memories
I wonder if that letter is Bushido's will. AWWW! Andi and Michael are in love, that's so very cute. I wonder what it will be that brings Tom and Bill together once again. You both do an amazing job of keeping everything secretive, and only small hints to those who pay very, very close attention.
Date: 02/07/10 06:05 pm Title: Reaping
*sigh* I'm very unsure at this point how they will work things out, as I'm sure everyone who read the story as it was updated was. I enjoy how much drama and problems you can put into this. The way you describe the emotion and power coming from the characters is also stupendous, just pure stunning.
Date: 02/07/10 05:41 pm Title: Let These Shoulders Be Unburdened
Ouch. I forgot to mention this when I should have but I'm glad you guys brought Saki in ^_^ Now, for the matter at hand, this will be quite the hill to get over.
Date: 02/07/10 08:23 am Title: Confess and Live, Confess and Love
Sorry no, I didn't recognize the title for the Shakespeare reference it was. Now, this is going to be something that I have been wanting to happen for forever. I always wanted Bill to admit what he had done, even if he and Bushido had stayed together in the end. I have to say though, I don't think I seen it coming at this time. I believe Bill will feel much better once the truth is out though because everyone always feels relieved once they tell the truth.
Date: 02/07/10 07:48 am Title: Because I Could Not Stop For Death...
Amazing. I bet the gods will send Bill's too scrawny ass back to Earth because it's his path, but I bet they allow him to be with Bushido for a while and make peace.
Date: 02/07/10 07:01 am Title: Prologue
This is all so heart breaking. Whatever the god said to Bill I don't believe it was enough to convince him. I sympathize greatly for Bill. I wonder sometimes if this is all best for Bill, it seems so unright.
Date: 01/19/10 04:34 pm Title: Epilogue
Ah man, it was awhile before I could bring myself to read this story after This Hour's Duty for many reasons.
The point is that I cannot sum up into words how happy I am I read, enjoyed, and finished this story.
I can honestly say (disappointedly) that I will find few, if any more, stories that measure up to the amazing stature of this story.
Touche and thanks for the brilliant read :D It was amazin'