Date: 07/16/09 03:56 pm Title: The Beginning of the End
Wow, that's a really powerful story. Good job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. ^^ I'm glad the message was received.
Date: 09/18/08 10:36 pm Title: The Beginning of the End
Whoa!
Intense!
Good story, great concept!
Keep up the fab work
Date: 08/05/08 04:25 pm Title: The Beginning of the End
oh god this story was really deep and i feel really sorry for that guy and the girl's family. sometimes parents think their kids are just in a "fase" and eventually theyd come out of it but it can lead to suicide or selfharm and people do this alot and not just becouse of a ban but many other things!!!
i agree too he souldnt blame them cos theyre only doing what they enjoy meaning music but there are many kids thatd found a purpose in life cos of music/tokio hotel!!!!
thanks for sharing this great story=DDD
Date: 08/05/08 08:34 am Title: The Beginning of the End
Okay, that made me cry. So beautifully written and such haunting imagery. I can see this all playing out as if it was real. It's awful that that guy's friend killed herself over Bill, but he shouldn't blame them. I understand where he's coming from, though.
Author's Response: Yes, I don't think he should hate them either. I think there might have been more bothering her than not being able to know her favorite band. Still, you never know.rnrnThanks for reading.
Date: 08/05/08 05:19 am Title: The Beginning of the End
I think you really did a good job of writing this situation. I wish I could tell you in detail exactly what I liked about this, but every time I try to type how I feel about it, I can't find a way to say it. It's sad that this girl decided to commit suicide and I felt awful as I read this because I kept thinking of her friend.
I'm glad that you wrote this from Bill's perspective, to show that it's just not possible to be there in person for each fan, but Bill really does care about everyone, even people he has never met, and would still be upset by their death.
Author's Response: Thank you for your input! I appreciate it, and I'm glad you got my point exactly. I believe Bill cares a lot too, and if I'd seen something like this on TV I'd be upset by it too. Especially knowing what bothered her so much as she made it clear with the sign she held. I thought I was being a bit far-fetched at first, but thanks for assuring me it wasn't.rnrnThank you for your review. <33
Date: 08/05/08 04:52 am Title: The Beginning of the End
*sigh* it's so sad
Author's Response: Indeed it is. Thanks for reading.