Date: 09/28/08 11:10 am Title: IX : A Book Full of Lies
wow....that poem is deep....i loved it!!! more soon please!
Author's Response: thanks, glad you did :D
Date: 09/28/08 11:07 am Title: IX : A Book Full of Lies
i loved the poem!
"As time will pass,
I'll learn to forgive.
But only if you're gone,
So these violets can live ."
does that mean that tom doesn't want bill around him?!
Author's Response: well actually, i wrote this poem for a friend. (I never gave it to him, though) i should have changed it, thought. i guess at the moment, tom doesnt want bill around bc hes frustrated with him.
Date: 09/28/08 09:47 am Title: IX : A Book Full of Lies
Violets arent blue.................Fucking Amazing!!
Who Made That Up?? Was It You?? Its Fucking Class!! Sos Yer Storiee!! :D:D:D Well Done!! I Like The Way Its Wrote, You Have Dun It Very Well!!!
- Sacred!!
Author's Response: thank you so much. that review made my heart melt (: and yes, i wrote that poem, 'violets arent blue.' i wrote it for a friend, of course i never gave it to him lol. but it's from my creation (: glad you enjoyed it so much!
Date: 09/28/08 06:51 am Title: IX : A Book Full of Lies
I love this more more more!!! Very beautiful poem!!
I want more now!!
Author's Response: thank you (: and glad you liked the poem (:
Date: 09/28/08 02:03 am Title: IX : A Book Full of Lies
Awwww *tear* Tomm =[ It really sucks for him. atleast he knows now!
Author's Response: yupp! thanks for reading (:
Date: 09/28/08 01:09 am Title: IX : A Book Full of Lies
AMAZING STORY! and poem i may add! soo creative!:)
Author's Response: thank you (:
Date: 09/27/08 11:46 pm Title: IX : A Book Full of Lies
Can I copy that poem into my journal it really is something that is awesome. I love. This is a great story.
Author's Response: as long as you give me credit for it (:
Date: 09/22/08 11:29 am Title: VIII : Analyze
don't they see he isn't eating but lying in his food diary?
and this means he is still loosing weight, right?
Why don't they notice this,,,
MOOOORE more more!
x.x.x
Author's Response: maybe your questions will be explained in the next chapter.
Date: 09/21/08 11:58 am Title: VIII : Analyze
How does Tom not know Bill is lying in the diary; i mean he's there for at least two of Bill's meals a day, so how is he tricking Tom into thinking he's eating? Anyway, I love this story; I'm such a sucker for angst ;)
Author's Response: okay, i'll give a little away: tom wasn't really thinking logically, because he was so emotional by the last entry. he'll find out in the next chapter. maybe.rn(:
Date: 09/20/08 09:44 pm Title: VIII : Analyze
awwww so sad...
Author's Response: i know /:
Date: 09/20/08 02:43 am Title: VIII : Analyze
Awww Bill's a bad boy, he shouldnt be lying. Someone is gonna catach him soo =/
Author's Response: :o
Date: 09/19/08 07:23 pm Title: VIII : Analyze
WOOOHOO!!! you gave me another reason to LOVE fridays :D
Author's Response: thank you! it means a lot to make someone look forward to fridays. but then again, who doesn't like fridays? lol
Date: 09/19/08 05:58 pm Title: VIII : Analyze
nein!!! mehr bitte!!! ich es geliebt
Author's Response: no, more please? right? idk german lol
Date: 09/13/08 06:16 pm Title: VII : Dear Diary
wooow, update sooooooon!
- I went to the hospital 2 days ago to visit a friend who has anorexia too,,, it was awefull, godd, i hadn't seen her the whole summer and i didn't even know she was already 1.5 months in the hospital,,, i was really shocked when i saw her, it was terrible, god, i couldn't recognize her, all I saw were her bones, never thought she would look like THAT, yeah I thought she would be skinny, but not like,,,that, i could not imagine her like that when i saw her 2 months before,, she almost died of it :( she is so much underweight,, she was forbidden to come out of her bed for more than a month,, can you imagine,, since 2 weeks she is allowed to take a few steps in her room but that's it,,, luckily her mother forced her to go to the hospital,,, and when she hugged me, all i could feel where bones, no flesh,, I was so scared to hurt her,,, -
x.x.x
Author's Response: it is so scary! ive seen pictures like that and i know how you feel. and luckily simone is like your friends mother. she forced bill to get help. its important to have family/friends like simone and tom to support these kinds of people. they do need help, even though they dont realize it.
Date: 09/12/08 09:55 pm Title: VII : Dear Diary
TT One of my freinds kept a food diary only it was to get thinner and it got really bad but we found the diary and yeah he goted better!! Well it took him like 1 year but anyways great story!! Aw poor Bill but I love how your keeping it like going and stuff!
Author's Response: well bill is lying in his food diary, which isn't going to help him much. and im glad your friend is better (:
Date: 09/12/08 08:43 pm Title: VII : Dear Diary
bad little liar!
Author's Response: i know! tsk tsk!
Date: 09/12/08 08:10 pm Title: VII : Dear Diary
Oh no!! Actualy thought he was eating! Damn...him recovering is gonna take a while = but I hope he does.. and Tom helps him.
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response: recovering from anorexia can take a couple years /: fortuantly he has tom to keep him motivated. wont be long til tom's finds out (:
Date: 09/12/08 07:12 pm Title: VII : Dear Diary
*gasps*
How could you, Billa? D:
Author's Response: lol he still thinks he's overweight and doesnt want to recover.
Date: 09/12/08 07:04 pm Title: VII : Dear Diary
very good, can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: thank you (: it'll be up on friday :D
Date: 09/12/08 06:58 pm Title: VII : Dear Diary
OOOOOOOOOO
LIAR!!!!!!!! :D
MORE!!
Author's Response: friday is when i write my stories. so look for it then