Date: 06/12/09 03:28 pm Title: XV: Phone Calls
I`m so happy that you contiun this sweet fic!! I can`t wait for the next chapt!!!
Author's Response: just posted it (:
Date: 06/12/09 02:47 pm Title: XV: Phone Calls
Omg. I was hoping someone would write about a topic like this. This is a really good story, I'm glad I came across it =]
Author's Response: thanks so much! glad you like it (:
Date: 06/12/09 01:37 pm Title: XV: Phone Calls
MORE!!!!!
SOOOOOOOON!!!
Date: 06/12/09 12:07 pm Title: XV: Phone Calls
Oh god! Please update sooner! I can't take it!
Author's Response: i'll try (:
Date: 03/23/09 09:31 pm Title: XIV: Rules, Rules, Rules
Yaaaaaaaaaaaay
I totally forgot to check up because a lot is going on lately, but it's nice to read the two chapters now! I like the letter-thing, it is nice to read because you add the conversations. I can't wait for you to continue, you write really good about this, it sounds familiar, which is good because it's realistic then. =]
Go on like this! Love, Yamey
Author's Response: thanks so much! i plan on writing like this for another few chapters or so. (not including when tom visits bill) but then i have something else planned, a suprise! :o lol. you guys are gonna love it, i can tell! glad you liked it, && i'm so relieved it's realistic. thanks for the review. -Oli.(:
Date: 03/21/09 11:21 am Title: XIV: Rules, Rules, Rules
yay for another chapter!! and a special thanks for me? I'm honored!!!!! If you need/want any other info let me know. keep up the great work, i can't wait to read more. this chapter was good, Bill sounds like he is describing a real clinic, good job with that. =)
Author's Response: thanks to you! (:
Date: 03/09/09 12:33 am Title: XIV: Rules, Rules, Rules
Hey! This chapter was really nicely done and very informative! I once had a nutritionist, she insisted on reminding me breakfast was the most important meal and that you can eat more during breakfast than during other meals 'coz you burn calories during the day. She said most people eat more at dinner time but in reality since you do not burn a lot of calories when sleeping that's wrong. Looking at it in a different way, for Bill that's the right thing to do (because he's gotta gain weight, duh!). The thing 'bout the snacks is totally true, if you feel hungry during the morning and you had already had breakfast you can eat yogurt, you can also have snacks during the afternoon (like yogurt half an hour after tea). One doesn't eat a lot in each meal(quite the contrary), but you eat kinda frecuently. And yeah, vegetables are important. (I didn't know this but some vegetables even make you gain weight!)
It's really good to know Bill's trying to make some progress. I so wanna see Tom's reply to the letter!
Keep up the good work guys!
Author's Response: thanks so much! you gave me a lot of information. i sorta used my own knowlege on the nutrition part, my family && i are a really healthy family. my dad kinda passed it on to us. but i'm so glad you gave me that little block of info. thanks. (: glad you liked the chapter. there will be more soon, i plan on it. (:
Date: 03/08/09 10:38 pm Title: VI : My Arms are Fat
Wow.... So Bill thinks he is fat. Well, at least he is seeing a psychiatrist now. And his mom knows (another good thing). The title of this chapter makes me laugh, not because of it per se, but more because that's what i say 'bout my arms. When u said u were a little concerned 'bout your weight but not that much ('course not) I kinda felt happier with myself ('coz i have such a self estime). A few days ago I found this picture of my dad when young. You could count his ribs (i mean it, my mom was fatter than him), I felt kinda sad. Today he snapped and said I wouldn't leave the house 'til i finished breakfast. That made me feel even sadder (i was gonna eat breakfast eventually). So when reading this I was also kinda thinking 'poor Tom'. I don't think he had a problem (i mean, 70s were crazy), I just felt a little sad and wanned to tell someone who wouldn't really judge me or anything. I realize I haven't reviewed this chapter properly, sorry.
Author's Response: it;s okay, i could see what you are trying to say. yeah, i suffered from a very low self esteem. it was HORRIBLE around this time of the year, last year. i was depressed...like very badly. idk, like i knew i wasn't fat, but i kept telling myself i was. idk, like anorexics see themselves as fat when they really aren't. so i feared that when i saw myself skinny, i was in reality fat.(kinda like the opposite an anorexic thinks, bahaha.) but yeah, eventually i learned && now i am cheerful. my self esteem still could use some work but i truly know how you feel. thanks for the review. (:
Date: 03/08/09 02:37 pm Title: Prologue
They are very nice and cheery, they try to make the patient's life easier. They take away anything that deals with eating, so all they have to do is work on their mental and social problems, that need repairing.
Author's Response: thanks. that helped out a lot. (:
Date: 03/08/09 06:32 am Title: XIV: Rules, Rules, Rules
More!!
XxX
Date: 03/08/09 12:49 am Title: Prologue
I have lots of information, so just pick a part or section you need and I will send you that.
Author's Response: alright, i'm just curious how doctor's treat their patients. are they very nice && cheery to them or are they just like 'whatever' and dont really care. me && my co-writer weren't really too sure on that one.
Date: 03/07/09 05:34 pm Title: XIV: Rules, Rules, Rules
This is very interesting and original!! You(and violet starr77) gave a very good decription of an eating clinic!!! Poor Bill it could be hard, exspecially that bathroom-rule, and the fact he has to eat vegetables:-( I really hope that he won`t have to eat broccoli!:-) The letters make the fic original, and personal!! Update soon!! I`m looking forward the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: thanks so much! your review made me melt (:
Date: 03/07/09 05:03 pm Title: XIV: Rules, Rules, Rules
This is really good. If you need any help with info with dealing with any part of Eating Disorders just contact me. My Senior Project for school is on Eating Disorders.
Author's Response: thanks, if you wanna email me on anything that you know, that be awesome (: thanks for reading. glad you liked it.
Date: 03/07/09 04:53 pm Title: XIV: Rules, Rules, Rules
Aah, this chapter was written really good, with how it feels to be a anorexic person and how it is to eat, how long it takes for you to eat when you have to and so on.
Author's Response: wow, thanks. glad you liked it. (:
Date: 02/23/09 03:39 am Title: XIII : Baby Steps
Yay for an update! I think it is believable, as long as bill doesnt just go from sick to well. he will have setbacks, thats normal. recovery is not a straight line. a line dr.s and therapists use a lot. baby steps is another good one. i can't wait to read more, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thanks!
&& yes, i'm aware bill will take a while to recover, && do not plan on making him recover just yet. it's gonna be a rocky road, i'll tell you that. i have a lot in mind with this, && i know exactly where this is going...i think [:
Date: 02/21/09 09:35 am Title: XIII : Baby Steps
Lol, Don't worry abotu it not being believable, I truly believe it xD
Keep up the good work ^_^
Elin xxx
Author's Response: thanks, glad you thought so. i was a little bit worried that it wasn't.
p.s. i emailed you back [;
Date: 02/10/09 08:09 am Title: X : I dont wanna kill flowers anymore.
hey, you know, i lovd that violets poem alot!!! and i was wondering if i could write a song based of it? pretty please????????????????? email me! my email is kobrahedo@gmail.com
Author's Response: songs are very difficult for me to write, ive only writen one song, && that was for my boyfriend. you'd think it be the same as a poem, but its not. there's a certain beat && meter patturn you have to follow.
rnbut i guess i can try to write one for you [: if youre going to use it for something, just make sure you give me credit for it. (i hate when people steal my work lol)
Date: 02/09/09 11:38 am Title: XIII : Baby Steps
More!!
xoxox
Date: 02/09/09 07:15 am Title: XIII : Baby Steps
Oh babEYdoll, I'm so glad that you're back with this! I was so afraid that it would go wasted... fantastic story still!
Author's Response: me too! i was worried i wouldnt be able to complete it. but im back... i think [: