Date: 04/26/09 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG!!!
But bravo for Tom for having the balls to face the situation head on, rather than choose to stay in somewhat blissful ignorance!
And I am just about ready to slap Amira.
Just saying.
Date: 04/22/09 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow! this chapter sure moves things along. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more! =)
Date: 04/14/09 12:41 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow! All this going on so young, has to be traumtising at least to Georg.....I do like that you are progessing the chapters 3 years ahead each time, I'm anxious to see what happens when their 17.
Gordon at least seems to geniuenly want Bill part of his family...although Amira seems, someone I would want to hit in the face on a daily basis. Very insecure that is for sure!
Date: 04/12/09 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow, that's heavy...
Date: 04/10/09 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
i love this story and am so glad you are working on it again. keep up the great work!
Date: 04/07/09 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
hmm int4eresting.. update plz
Date: 04/05/09 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hehehe, see, it's not for me cause I have two little boys that are just this cute, so I just giggled the whole way through, lol.
But I love this slice of life moment! <333
Date: 04/04/09 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
askjdhf cute twinss *o* so good.
moaaar D
Date: 04/04/09 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
Cute!! AMAZING!! This is SO great!! :D
Please update soon!!
Date: 04/04/09 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
u didn't force them.. but i find a lot more difficult challence tp work on young twins... it's kind of difficult to describe the way they are
Date: 04/04/09 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
Lol. I can imagine Tom trying to make the "Best number ever." o:
Oh, and I remember my dad saying that when I frowned! XD "If the wind changes direction, your face is gonna look like that forever!" ^-^
LOVE YOU BANANA! :D
Date: 04/04/09 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I'm giving you time D:
I just really can't wait to see about what happens when they actually are together, and how they hide it [since, duh, their parents know they're brothers]
OMG UPDATE AS FAST AS YOU CAN D;
Author's Response: :D ok.
Date: 04/04/09 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
I know you just updated this but...
UPDATE NAU D:
Author's Response: GIRL. I am D: I told you I am updating one fic at a time so I can finish all of my fics soon. I have too many unfinished ones and I would hate to leave a reader unsatisfied, or waiting, but then again I would also not want to rush a fic. Give me some time, love? *o*
Date: 04/04/09 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
You write little kids really well. The best number ever comment was so perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you, though sometimes it feels a little forced when I write little kid stuff. Maybe it's just me, lol. It just seems a little *too* childish, and I would hate to go over the top. Though I think the wiping of the lips after the kiss was the best, because I totally still do that xD And thanks, I keep putting Tom in these situations where he has a best -something- ever. Maybe it can grow to be his own thing *a*
Date: 04/04/09 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
i love older twins too...
Author's Response: It's not that I don't love young twins, I just get paranoid that I am forcibly writing them :O but I hope this is not the case in this chapter. ;X Older twins coming soon. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Date: 03/31/09 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
*0*
Author's Response: <3
Date: 03/31/09 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
OGOD JOST CAME FOR MY PHOTOBUCKET AND IT DIED D: msn me and I'll make another. loveeeee
Author's Response: :OOOO
Date: 03/31/09 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
I DON'T LIKE AMIRA OR SIMONE *moos at them* D< more soon? ;_; love thissssss.
Author's Response: OF COURSE MORE SOON I LOVE YOU. WHATEVER HAPPENED TO THE BANNER YOU MADE FOR THIS THOUGH? IT WAS EATEN?!
Date: 03/31/09 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
i dont like simones sister that much...but i love this story!
Author's Response: (: Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 03/15/09 01:31 am Title: Chapter 1
you should really write more.
that was a serious cliff hanging dissapointment. still amazing though :)
Author's Response: I'm sorry it was a disappointment but I hope you like the new chapter! (: Thanks for the review!
