Date: 02/14/25 12:35 am Title: Please and Thank Yous
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 06/22/15 10:17 am Title: Please and Thank Yous
Oh I can't believe it's taken me this long to read this wonderful one shot! It feels so real, all the awkwardness and embarrassment but it is still so deliciously sexy. Absolutely gorgeous piece of writing!
Date: 03/11/11 02:15 pm Title: Please and Thank Yous
Loved it! :D And I hate the word butt-plug too -cringe-
Date: 01/22/11 09:51 pm Title: Please and Thank Yous
This brings back somewhat fond memories lol. Only difference is that i'm a girl ;-) I enjoyed this fic thoroughly :-)
Date: 10/16/10 02:39 pm Title: Please and Thank Yous
I`m really surprised this only has 26 reviews! D: Well, it was very lovely. Really cute, and patient Tom was amazing. XD I loved how brotherly they were, too! It was well written, and very well thought out. Butt plugs aren't so bad... there are worse things, I think. @__@ Haha~ Well done, I enjoyed it so! ^---^
Date: 04/13/10 10:30 am Title: Please and Thank Yous
oh my! That was amazing! Ridiculously hot and just wow!
Date: 03/25/10 05:42 pm Title: Please and Thank Yous
Very great. I love your detailed writing!
Date: 02/23/10 11:04 pm Title: Please and Thank Yous
I do the same exact Bill-Bed-Cocoon thing. :) this is awesome!!! Never though butt-plugs could be so sexxxxyyyy!!!!!! Fantastic. :)))
Date: 09/17/09 10:34 pm Title: Please and Thank Yous
Oh this was amazing! I can't believe I haven't read this before--so, so good!
Date: 04/04/09 08:04 pm Title: Please and Thank Yous
you made my evening! that was hot. really. i enjoyed every single line of it. awesome! i used to not only hate the word but also the thing itself but reading this fic i kinda changed my mind about it. thanks!
Date: 03/10/09 01:16 pm Title: Please and Thank Yous
haha. wow. this was hot. and kindof funny at the end. and sweet. and hot:)
haha, thanks!
Date: 12/17/08 06:07 am Title: Please and Thank Yous
wow. now i completely understand why this story is in everyone's favorites. absolutely fabulous. sweet, tender, endearing, dirty and hot. wonderful!
Date: 12/12/08 03:00 pm Title: Please and Thank Yous
So he’d just said it, presented the butt plugs in the side-table, and Bill’s face had gone a pretty shade of pink. His vocabulary had been reduced to scandalized noises and that in turn had made Tom wriggle around in self-conscious embarrassment. – I like this line a lolt it’s perfect and funny and made me wriggle in my seat a bit for them.
“Tom,” Bill said, insistently. Gingerly, he rolled over and flung one leg over Tom’s hips, crawling to kneel over his hips and pressing him down into the mattress. He ground down and Tom rocked his hips up, too stunned to do anything but react. “I need….” Bill’s face was damp with sweat and red from effort already. His fingernails were digging into Tom’s shoulders, scraping as he rolled his hips down at a frantic pace. “All night, I’ve been….” – OMG so hot! Makes me shudder and pant, *grins*
This time, when Bill made disgruntled faces and tried to sleep, he didn’t bother going into the bathroom to get off. – *giggle*
“I’m ready for you,” Bill replied in a whisper. “I want you inside me. So badly” – tummy flutters!
“No more waiting,” Bill breathed out, voice lower and huskier than it usually – *groan!*
every nerve singing – great word choice!
It was really sweet and I feel odd now that it's finished like I needed just a few more words to help me out of this world. I like how you had them take time to get used to it and get Bill preped. It was nice.
Date: 11/04/08 11:58 am Title: Please and Thank Yous
you write the hottest smut ever, you know that?
Author's Response: Oh my, thank you.
Date: 10/14/08 09:53 am Title: Please and Thank Yous
*wiping sweat*
that was HOT!!
Date: 09/28/08 06:52 am Title: Please and Thank Yous
I think Ive read this fic at least 10 times allready
but ive never commented
until now
I think its amazing...
I usually sit with my mouth open staring at the screen
yeah, you are good
hanks for an amazing fic
Date: 09/24/08 03:37 am Title: Please and Thank Yous
haha this story was awesome!!! absolutely an awesome ending
Date: 08/31/08 08:23 pm Title: Please and Thank Yous
crikey moses. uhm, that was long, mega detailed, time-consuming, but fucking fantastic. kinda different to other PWP's, as in you had lots more description, as well as the build up to it. i liked that element. it was frickin' hot, dude.
Date: 08/20/08 10:47 pm Title: Please and Thank Yous
Sweet Lord! *-*
Don't know why it took me so long to read that! I loved the tension between them, even more I loved that you kept them twins. Poor Tomi, though. XD But it was so worth it!
Deffo a fave.
Let's see how I'll manage to sleep now.
XD
Thanks for sharing. *-*