Date: 04/11/12 05:20 am Title: I just want to help you out
I'm in love with your witty and quirky omniscient narration!! So fun to read! And really fucking sexy too. Also, I love your characters. Haha. This was a fab story. Well done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you a lot, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 10/14/11 06:31 pm Title: I just want to help you out
Uh ... YUMMY ;D
When I first started reading I wasn't sure if I was going to like it ... snooty Bill ain't really my thing. But then I kept reading ....
Fuck I love it *.*
Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think we generally all agree on smut ;)
Date: 09/02/11 01:28 am Title: I just want to help you out
I think I've read this a billion times and I love it more every time
Author's Response: Really? Wow, thank you, I feel honored!
Date: 05/03/11 01:02 am Title: I just want to help you out
love it!!!! it was just perfect!!
you should have continued !!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 12/22/10 06:05 am Title: I just want to help you out
You could make one more chapter, right? :D
Author's Response: I wrote this such a long time ago ^^ I never wrote anything more around it, it was a one-shot :)
Date: 11/04/10 04:07 pm Title: I just want to help you out
Should there be more? I'd love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! :3 This was written ages ago and I never wrote anything more about this story so no, no sequel, sorry :)
Date: 10/27/10 07:41 am Title: I just want to help you out
..............I think my brain exploded @__@ So hot! I need to find new undies STAT! Lol sooo hot soooo sexy and so amazing! Love iiit 8D
Author's Response: Lol, thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 02/22/10 06:25 pm Title: I just want to help you out
Whoah. that was awesome! so hot, and then sweet too, if you look deep enough. :3
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 02/16/10 04:55 pm Title: I just want to help you out
I was just checking my account and when I clicked on "Favorite Stories", I came across "Sweet Surrender", my God, I totally remember that. I also remember how I loved it and how I loved to see it updated and how I loved the wait, and how I loved to think about it during lessons...
Then I wondered why I have never read anything else written by you, so I clicked on this. And I'm so glad I did.
It's stories like this one that make me seriously think that those two are meant, supposed, BORN to be together. Bill not caring to fall in love with somebody else, and Tom sharing the bed with some random groupie every once in a while, but then something like this does occur, and they find out how deeply they love each other. It could be one of the earliest twincests I've ever read; now there's pretty much everything around - the fanfic world has developped so much -, it's so lovely to find something like this story, that makes you feel like you're in front of your first twincest ever.
I found myself biting my bottom lip all the time trying to keep myself from smiling, really, but I gave it up, since, hey, why shouldn't I smile. xD.
It does differ from the earlies twincests anyway; it's actually pretty rare to read about a sex crazed Bill, when Tom is so cute and sweet. Usually, Tom would be the sex addicted one, accepting to f**k his brother just out of abstinence--and probably Bill would be hiding great feelings for him. This fiction sounds like a classic, xD. Still, if fictions can have classics among them...
You don't know how I appreciated Bill being the sex crazed one. Come on, he can't be as innocent as he wants us to believe. xD. He's not an angel after all, I'm sure he has his perverted moments. In this sense, this Bill IS OOC... but I really can't tell, who knows, maybe he does have sex adventures just like this. xD. Great Bill, anyways. :)
Oh, and lovely OMCs too. :)
And Joe's in love with him, I liked it that Bill finds it boring and annoying! I know I'm cruel to Joe, but still. xD.
Very nice fic, you're a good writer, I hope I'll get to read some more. :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for this review! It's so long and it put a smile on my face all through my reading. That's funny that you said this fic is like one of the first twincest fics because that's the first one I ever wrote and it was ages ago (sept 07 in French!). I only got to writing after reading for a long time, and I was sick of Bill always being the lovesick puppy trailing after Tom. In my stories, it's more often the other way around (but not particularly in the English ones, so... yeah). Anyway, I'm glad that you enjoyed my fics!
Date: 06/24/09 04:54 pm Title: I just want to help you out
Wow. I really love the style this is written in, I don't think I've ever read anything written like this before. I'm not really sure how to describe it. It's almost... objective. It's really weird to read about an intimate, sexual encounter from an objective standpoint. It's pretty awesome. XD
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comment. I'm glad you found it original :)
Date: 05/13/09 06:53 pm Title: I just want to help you out
HOT! And really well written. Love this one!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 04/15/09 11:59 am Title: I just want to help you out
aaaaw loved it. cute (:
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/10/09 04:50 am Title: I just want to help you out
Loved it :D Tom be cute ^^ And Bill be bossy xP I really think it's like this in real life xP Bill the fucker and Tom the cutiepie xD
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Bill seems really bossy indeed, I wouldn't be surprised if he were that way with sex too ;)
Date: 12/01/08 01:57 pm Title: I just want to help you out
oooh, i liked it a lot!x
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you did.
Date: 08/29/08 12:15 pm Title: I just want to help you out
that was so hot! i love a demanding bill. is there more to this cause damn a sequel would be fucking awesome!!! thanks for writing this morsel :)
Author's Response: Thank you! No, it's nice to ask, but there's no sequel to this. But I'll post something else soon ;-)
Date: 08/01/08 12:01 pm Title: I just want to help you out
Loved it !
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/01/08 06:33 am Title: I just want to help you out
Hot, sexy, yeah. Fuck.
Author's Response: Thanks! That was meant to be ^^
Date: 08/01/08 04:56 am Title: I just want to help you out
That was amazingly hot.
Author's Response: Thank you!I just love what your write. Will you update Analyzed or In Mir soon?
Date: 08/01/08 12:38 am Title: I just want to help you out
I think I read this in LJ before but I don't remember leaving a review...
I just want to say,
THIS IS SO FUCKING HOT AND AWESOME ^_^
Author's Response: You must have read it on Tokiohotelslash a while back. Thanks you very much!
Date: 07/31/08 09:19 pm Title: I just want to help you out
Wow...it's different, like the way it starts out in the beginning, and I like that. It's very good! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!rnYes well it's a bit different.rnMaybe I should have put OOC in the warnings ^^rnThank you very much!