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Reviewer: tickeey Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/08 12:02 pm Title: Insatiable.

can i have a tomicookie, please?

you know, i feel like most of all i love how you write the suffering tom..)
is that okay? i feel a bit bad about it.. but you just do it so good.. please, i need the next chapter, i want to know what happened..))

please write..

Author's Response: *Gives tickeey tomicookie*rnrnLol, its perfecly fine, and the next chapter should be up really soon. :)rn

Reviewer: YouCanCallMeZara Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/08 01:59 pm Title: Peace.

wow
heavy...
don't stop writing!! O.O

MORE!
x.x.x

Author's Response: I'm probably going to continue, but I'm not quite sure yet.rnIf I don't I'm going to post a chapter that basically tells the story to the end.

Reviewer: tickeey Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/08 09:59 am Title: Peace.

Tom's hurt, i'm hurt) lol)

Author's Response: Ah, okay I get it now.:P

Reviewer: tickeey Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/08 09:43 am Title: Peace.

finally!)

well, it's not that i am going to hurt you if you stop, i think, it's more like, you will hurt me if you stop.

i feel like everything's happening a little too fast in this chapter, but still i like it)) a lot)

your tom hurts me so nicely.

please don't stop

Author's Response: I don't wanna hurt you.rnEverything's happening too fast so we can get to the good stuff.rnWhy is Tom hurting you?rnAnd I still don't know if I'm continuing it or not, you know why.

Reviewer: YouCanCallMeZara Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/08 04:29 pm Title: Lost.

WAUW

MORE?!

x-x-x

Author's Response: LOl,more should be posted in a day or two.:)

Reviewer: RawLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/08 08:06 am Title: Lost.

Wow, intense. I need to read more *_*

Author's Response: Thx, and the next chapter should be posted soon

Reviewer: Extraho Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/08 06:42 am Title: Lost.

i  like it very much!!!



Author's Response: Thank you very much!!!

Reviewer: tickeey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/08 09:33 am Title: Weak.

hope you'll update soon

and umm wasn't that too much? like, really a way too much about Jorg's hate?
i mean, it was, for me

Author's Response: Jorg hates Tom so much because he's think his son is weak and to him its worse than death. In Jorg's mind Toms the older brother he's supposed to protect his little brother, Bill, but its the other way around Bill protects Tom, anyways I hope that made sense and answered your question.But admittedly it might of been too much.

Reviewer: YouCanCallMeZara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/08 12:27 pm Title: Weak.

wooow o_°
This seems to be a strong story!
(Whiii, I was right, it's Tom *cheers* )
btw, if you still need a girl in this story, let me know, then I'll send you the things you asked for (It would be sooo cool if I could be a part in these story!)
X

Author's Response: Thx! Yes I still need a girl for the story so send me the info if you still want to be her :)

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