Date: 12/10/08 07:18 pm Title: What's a criminal without a gun?
plaese update soon. i will die with out this story
Date: 08/24/08 12:53 am Title: Whats's a victim without good intentions?
Great chapter i can't wait to see why bill is in college. Great comebacks between both the boys it was funny i loved it. Oh and i would love to see your vids of the concert.
Date: 08/23/08 11:13 am Title: Whats's a victim without good intentions?
so, the nearly head and right hand of the mafia clan goes to school???? does he have time for this??? he didn't recognize Tom as i get it.. right?
well... will be looking forward to read more...
Author's Response: Lol all will be explained in the next chapter =] Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/28/08 08:38 am Title: What's a criminal without a gun?
i like it very much!!!! im eagerly awayting the next update!!
Author's Response: Thanks! And don't worry update coming soon ;]
Date: 07/28/08 07:31 am Title: What's a criminal without a gun?
Wow this fic is definitely going places. OMG, I knew Cole was evil. I got the whole evil-vibe from him.
Author's Response: Yay thank you...I was trying to get that effect =]
Date: 07/28/08 05:55 am Title: What's a criminal without a gun?
i really like it.. but fuck i hate when Bibi fucking with someone else, but Tom =(
Author's Response: i know me too...but it won't last long! And Bill hates him anyway ;D
Date: 07/28/08 12:53 am Title: What's a criminal without a gun?
Yeah i twisted their personalities before too. LOL
Author's Response: lol i'll check your stories out later =D
Date: 07/28/08 12:19 am Title: What's a criminal without a gun?
You made Bill a criminal?! That's creative, but it's sad that he "killed" Tom, if he comes back to life in the 2nd chappie, I'm gonna be freaked out, but in a good way, awesome job! keep it up
Author's Response: Lol thank you! I thought it might be a little more interesting to twist their personalities around for once =] Update coming sooon!