Date: 08/19/08 02:51 am Title: Shadow of the Day
I loved it and I can't wait for more.
Date: 08/19/08 12:14 am Title: Shadow of the Day
O___O what? what? what??!?!?!?!!? what's option C??????!!!! DDDD"X *cries* you sure do know how torture me, ya know that? >.>
Date: 08/17/08 06:07 pm Title: Bulletproof
O________O omg... that bastard D=< he better not've done anything to her or I'mma come through the computer screen and kill him!!!! And one thing ._. about half of the story is in italics X__x kinda messed with my eyes lol... and another thing that was confused on ._. you said "deposit" instead of "withdrawal" unddd... you also put “Did you talk to Emma that night she- you know.” O.o wouldn't it be Violet? ._. sorry... I notice more things than a normal person should lol XD
Date: 08/17/08 03:06 pm Title: Bulletproof
Keith has something to do with it. I can tell. Emma might, too. :|
By the way, you like Kerli?! Most people find her creapy or don't like her.
Date: 08/17/08 01:26 pm Title: Bulletproof
AAAYYEEEEE!
-new reader-
This is intense...
I need more.
Like, now.
NOWNOWNOW!
Bitte?
Date: 08/17/08 12:39 pm Title: Bulletproof
I knew it was either Emma or Keith. Or I think it's one of them. But this is good, continue, please...=)
Date: 08/17/08 10:57 am Title: Bulletproof
I love that film!!
If Bill can't hurt him can I?
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 08/17/08 01:02 am Title: Bulletproof
who did it?!?!?!?!??!?!
Date: 08/17/08 12:43 am Title: Bulletproof
oooo!
suspense is my enemy!
update nao!
like right nao!
Date: 08/16/08 01:21 am Title: Unraveling
....that last sentence was just plain disturbing.
(Not in a bad way, I don't mean that as criticism.) What I mean is that ...well...you know how in horror movies, everything is all happy one moment, and then, within 30 seconds, everything turns to nothing but pure terror? This chapter was like that. It went from bad to completely suspenseful. Nice job! I hope you update soon, I'm dying to know what's going to happen!
Date: 08/15/08 11:38 pm Title: Unraveling
OMMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SHIT!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE NAO!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08/15/08 11:03 pm Title: Unraveling
O____O OMFG!!!!! That has to not be her ear X__x homg... frickin' TH haters >.> damn bastards... even in FF I totally completely hate them because they're wasting their damn time!!! DDDD=<
._. *cough* sorry... got caught up there for a moment lol ^.^
;__; I hope that they find her soon... I want Bill and her to be happieee... and Vi's mom really needs to take a damn chill pill >.>
Date: 08/15/08 10:49 pm Title: Don't Pull Off My Wings
*gasp* DDDD:
Date: 08/15/08 10:03 pm Title: Unraveling
Oooo its getting interesting now!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 08/15/08 09:57 pm Title: Unraveling
um, yeah i know this is my first review....
but ew...
to the ear i mean..
Date: 08/15/08 09:48 pm Title: Unraveling
Eww, that was interesting, I can't wait to find out who did it. Keep it up!
Date: 08/15/08 09:41 pm Title: Unraveling
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08/15/08 09:33 pm Title: Unraveling
okay, ewwww.
that's gross.
was her ear cut off?
EEEEEEEEEPPPP!
that would hurt.
poor vi.
*cries*
i hope they find her!
Author's Response: For a light of hope, take notice at one of Violet's comments in chapter seven.
Date: 08/15/08 05:53 pm Title: Fiddle With the Volume
OMG! Some crazy jealous fan girls took her and killed her, didn't they?!?!?!?!