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Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/15 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hmmmmmmmm.... This is getting interesting. I love seeing this confused, almost delirious Tom, and you write the ambiguity very well. Can't wait for part 3....... :) :)

Reviewer: efilsiydolem Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/30/10 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Shit... Tom... >.<
Bill, where the HELL are you?!

Author's Response: He'll...maybe come around some time. These stories are just little one-offs in the same universe that hit me out of the blue. I have some ideas for how to connect them but for now, I just wait for a 'trigger' to come to me. :)

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/08 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm very sorry, but I don't get this fic.. what do you mean with: "without either of you for a while"??

Author's Response: If you read Trigger, then it might make a little more sense. But, really, it's supposed to be confusing because I want the readers to feel the way Tom does as he is lost about what's going on with him as well.rnrnMaybe try reading it again, as well as Trigger, and things might click a little more. ;)

Reviewer: DarkWanderer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/08 02:15 am Title: Chapter 1

o...m...g....I think this has to be like, the most amazing thing I've read in a while. I want to know why Tom feels like he can't tell Bill, and I love how you put it on Tom's point of view. That doesn't usually happen! I love it!

Author's Response: O_O The most amazing thing? No way!rnrnAll will be revealed in due time, I promise.rnrnI'm so very happy that you loved the story! XD

Reviewer: cutupdreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/08 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1

a little confused but it was really well written. Great job

Author's Response: Confused is how I like my readers. :D Thanks!

Reviewer: fangurllauren1385 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/08 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww so adorable.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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