Date: 12/12/09 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Concert
U should make a sequel
Author's Response: I've been thinking about it but haven't decided where to take the sequel. but thank you for reading.
Date: 03/29/09 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Concert
aww that wass sweet!
Date: 01/13/09 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Concert
"killing me softly"? ilove that song, and i think its that one bnecause of the diary thing. in the song, roberta flack says she felt like the singer had read each of her letters, and then she felt "embarassed by the crowd". then, "i prayed he'd finish but he just kept right on..."
andway, good. i liked it. i just don'tlike the whole "arg!! i'm crushing on a guy" thing because everyone does it. but i guess there's no way around that; its a necessary aspect. anyway, i like the part where georg catches tom's eye and gives him the "i can melt you with one smile" smile.
well done. btw, if i'm right, i like chocolate chip cookies, kay?
Author's Response: *claps* you were the first to guess the song correctly. *hands over fresh chocolate chip cookie* and thanks so much. ^_^rn~Kaeda
Date: 09/07/08 04:55 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Concert
awwww ^_^
no critique needed! it was TOTALLY awsome!!!! i really loved it and can't help but immagine what happens after u so very harshly cut this off.. so yeah, i'm just gonna immagine a REALLY smutty continueing of it all (A)
i really loved it ^_^
Author's Response: Well thank you very much. Andthe ending, yeah. i decided to end it so that the reader would imagine what happened next. But thank you again. *hugs*rnrn~Kaeda
Date: 07/27/08 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Concert
I REALLY LIKE IT (^_^) lol
but make sure to witch the pairings because you have Georg/Bill and Gustav/Tom on there right now...
I really hope you continue though (^_^)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!rnand THANK YOU for telling me i had them switched. i would have never noticed. thank you again!rn~Kaeda
Date: 07/27/08 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Concert
No idea on the song.... sorry...so do I still get a cookie?
Author's Response: *giggles*rn*hands cookie anyways*rnrn
Date: 07/27/08 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Concert
O______O *squeal* XDDDD I NEVER really read one-shots and this one was ._. different lol ^^ I've never read a one-shot like this one before, but in the words of Tom: "uber amazing!" =P For once XD a slash one-shot where it isn't full of dirty sex!!!! lmao XDDD *fling* ^^ lubzes youuuz!!!
Author's Response: Awh fishie thank you!! *shares choclate with fishie and gives cookie* rnrnWhat i really wanted was to imply the beginning of something, an attraction. I wanted it more emotional than physical. Which i hope i got it. :]] merci beacoup for the review!! lubbers you too!!rn~Kaeda
Date: 07/27/08 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Concert
MORE O_O PLEASE
Author's Response: thankss!! i dont know if i'm going to add more. i want mystery, an implied get together. a beginning of something. a realization between the guys, but more implied than anything. But i am debating going off of it. but anways, ranting. thankies! rn~Kaeda
Date: 07/27/08 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Concert
i liked it lolz please like write more 2 it or something
Author's Response: I'm thinking about it! *smiles* thankies for the review