I have left a review on another story of yours, but wanted to say that I very much so enjoyed this one too!

Really enjoyed this! I love the characters already, and very well written, good work! ^_^

this was so beautiful :) you are a very passionate writer ^_^

Aww I really liked this story! So sweet!

Oh, this was so sweet and lovely.

That was a pleasant read. Very lighthearted and romantic.

Amazing story ! so truly original and beautiful.. wow

its really good, keep writing!

omg this was so wonderful
i cried at the part when bill went to talk with jorg
gustav was so sweet

Author's Response: *hugs you* thank you so much, it makes me so happy that you liked this fic!

oh...god...this...it was...*wipes her eyes* ok, chiara, you can do this. *gets her brain to work again* when i read that this was a songfic for the song standing by vnv nation i was like okay, it cannot be. then i read again and again with my eyes getting wider each time and i was like oh god it really is! i love that song, it's so beautiful it makes me cry every time i listen to it D°: and i mean you writing a songfic out of it? i couldn't ask for more ;D
i must admit at first i was like...sex slave? wtf? i couldn't figure out what that had to do with the song itself, but then i remembered it was you writing so i went on - god was i right trusting you :D georg was hilarious in the first chapter “can I have gustav’s then?” that sounded just sooo like him xD i loved the way you described the world through bill's eyes in the second chapter for the first time, though it was a bit sad D: i actually didn't expect real sex so soon, sure i'm not complaining but i thought tom would have been more shy seeing that bill was his first and everything, but then again bill indeed was his sex slave and well, tom is tom, so i guess i should have known better xD i sort of hated tom - oh god did i just use the verb hate riferred to tom? see, lucy, you totally freak me out x3 - for telling bill to call him my lord or master or whatever, i was there screaming "tom, ding ding, wake up, he's bill, your bill you're meant to be with each other how could you fucking want him to call you master?!" but i guess tom was used to having servants to call him that so... - if you are wondering, nope i dont ussually scream at objects...well, not usually :D “i want you…to want me” that's my tom *cheers* “i’m homosexual, father, live with it!” wow! you know in the other fics tom's always like no i'm not gay, it's bill, he's too feminine or it's only bill, he's an exception cuz he's my twin brother and so on so i totally loved that line and also i've always sort of disliked jorg i dont exactly know why and that was like a slap in his face: YAAAAY tom, give him what he deserves xD gustav was too cute! i loved how he made bill see things the right way, his wise advices and their conversation about flowers ;) i have to thank him for getting tom all jealous and making him declare his love to bill ”bill, there is no me without you. there is no tom without bill, just like there is no day without night. i need you, bill” oh my, i think i just melted *o* the wedding scene was way too perfect "the clear stars of wintertime blinked on the midnight-blue sky above them" that's exactly how i picture my own wedding: a starry winter evening, me stepping out of a white carriage into the soft snow and walking down the aisle to take tom's hand... *gets lost in her dreams* "tom’s hand placed itself on bill’s chest, right over his heart. “now, this is mine”" remember in shrek 2 when the cat tries to charm the soldiers by putting on that cute face? while reading mine was pretty much like that xD the last line was definitely the best of this story, the one that had me crying while smiling "and one of those snowflakes fell onto a rose. but the rose didn’t wilt, the snowflake melted"
i liked so much the univese you settled this story in. i love ancient settings and i guess it has to be hard to write this with things like bill's tattoo or tom's dreadlocks, which has absolutely nothing to do with it, but - as always - you managed to make it perfectly real :D
this is definitely the longest review i've ever written. it almost scares me xD i used to have a life before i found out about you and your stories, you know? though i don't want it back, you can have it if that means keeping you writing. x3
ah! before i forget: pineapple! very healthy fruit *nods* i eat them everyday since a friend of mine told me it helps you burn calories. can you imagine it? burning calories while eating, just perfect xD
so much love, chiara

Author's Response: OO oh shit...loooooong review OO HAPPY LUCY !!! I'm so happy you liked the story as a soing fic. I did this for el_gardner who loves that song, too and I was so worried I wouldn't be able to do the song justice, I'm so happy that you liked what it turned out as! awww, darling, the fic is freakin you out ,p hating Tom and screaming at objects ,) I'm so sorry, love, it makes me smile though, I think it's very nice when readers get into my stories like that! I'm also glad you liked Tom as a homosexual, I've been wanting to write him as one for some time now ,) and yes, I sorta hate Jorg for unknown reasons, too, but you know a real blow to his face? Tom and Bill are Rock Stars making millions, he's a truck driver in hamburg xD and I LOVE that cat...he's got Bill's eyes, I swear! and you have no idea how much it means to me that you liked the last line, I always try to make that one count and it makes me so amazingly happy when someone notices !!! lol, I used to have a life before I found this site and started writing ,p but I'm not complaining, this place is great! love ya chiara, thank you so much for this <3