Date: 08/01/08 01:56 am Title: The third chapter
I looooooooooooooooooooooove it
Author's Response: makes me haaaaaaaapy ,)
Date: 08/01/08 12:32 am Title: The third chapter
This is soo amazing. I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Tom being so mean to Bill hurt my heart. He was just trying to make Tomi happy.
Author's Response: he was, but Tom is being talked into stupid stuff by his father :'( so happy you like it though, means a lot to me!
Date: 07/31/08 10:52 pm Title: The third chapter
Oh, Hello! You did update this before I left. Thank you so much. Ok, I have to say I am super mad at Tom. I can imagine how Bill felt. He loved/loves Tom so much and Tom went from loving him to pushing him away (in his eyes) in less than 12 hours. Gustav's a genious btw. I love him.
I'm also really happy Tom made that I'm gay speech to his dad. At least he got even that way. Can't he just free Bill? It still wouldn't be acceptable but still. He's never conformed w/ society before. Why start now right?
Ok, when I get back this had better have a whole bunch of new chapters. You have unil something like August 16. That's a super long time!
I'll miss you while I'm away. If I can get internet I'll send you an email saying hi.
I'll miss you!
Author's Response: Queenie ,p yes, I updated and I'm really happy you liked it although your super mad at Tom, which you have every right to be by the way! and Gusti ,) he's a cutie isn't he <3 the 'is it possible to free Bill' question will be answered in the next chap. so yeah, by the time you get back this story will be over, but at least that means you get to read all the last chapters in one heap right ,) I'm gonna miss you too girl, won't be the same without an epic novel in my mailbox every now and then ,) gonna mail you though, so that you have one waiting for you when you get back! lots of love and tonns of hugs <3 yours luce
Date: 07/31/08 04:13 pm Title: The second chapter
WOW this is like one of the cuttest and really good fic I ever read.
Author's Response: weeeeee ,p thank you so much <3
Date: 07/31/08 01:05 pm Title: The third chapter
this is a truly amazing story! one of my favourites:D I've probably said this before (if not, then I should have), but you are a really talented writer!!
Author's Response: OO shit...that is so extreemly nice of you, God you have me smiling like a loon here xD thank you so, so much girl !!!
Date: 07/31/08 12:40 pm Title: The third chapter
omfg.
this is just so amazing.
cannot wait til more :]
Author's Response: oh, thank you thank you thank you !!! means a lot
Date: 07/31/08 10:59 am Title: The third chapter
oh i loved this i think gustav is right 2 lolz please update soon please
Author's Response: yeah, bet he is ,) thank you darling <3 I'll update soon !
Date: 07/31/08 10:54 am Title: The third chapter
omg I'm crying in my office...so beautiful!
Author's Response: naw *pets you* so cute of you sweetie ,)
Date: 07/31/08 10:51 am Title: The third chapter
That was a beautiful chapter :) I love that you update so fast, and I looovee getting the email alert that says you updated XD So I'm gonna wait for the next one!
Author's Response: lol well I finally have some time off so I'm updating as much as I can! really glad you like this, makes me smile ,) hugs
Date: 07/31/08 09:46 am Title: The third chapter
Hm, just wanted to add that the fairy undertone of the garden scene was really enchanting. I liked Gustav's talk on flowers. :D
And when Gustav 'escorted' *giggles* Bill back into the house (so cute) with Tom just above them, I don't know which one, but it reminded me of a movie or something.
Well, anyway, it was really a romantic moment, even if Bill and Tom weren't exactly 'together'.
So sweet.
You're gonna kill me with so much cuteness! è_é (... please continue, I wanna die *-*)
Author's Response: naw I'm gonna kill you with the cuteness ,) that's so..in lack of a better word, cute! I really love writing the kind of stories where I get to make the landscape, its so much fun! lol and Gustav escorting Bill ,p he is rather sweet (see, managed not to say cute!) thank you so much Paris <3 love
Date: 07/31/08 09:09 am Title: The third chapter
This was really good, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: weeee, thanks ,) next will be up soon!
Date: 07/31/08 08:44 am Title: The third chapter
Woah! This rock, sis! I love three things about you: 1. Your writing;
2. Your story;
3. And your name. ;)
Author's Response: 1. blushes 2. thank you! 3. really ,) lol thanks. much love <3 luce
Date: 07/31/08 08:32 am Title: The third chapter
Ah gawd, that was so awesome! I love a mean Tom....srsly. XD. I was like "HO SHIT! Bill watch out!" But i was sadistically happy when he yelled at him. XD.
This is sad too, though, knowing that Tom and Bill can never be together because of their status.
I adore Gusti in this, he's so cute. ^^
Author's Response: *head desk* you like the mean Tomi ? oO lol you're the only one I think xD but very happy you do of course ,) naw and Gusti is a sweetie pie isn't he ? ,p thanksies !
Date: 07/31/08 08:25 am Title: The third chapter
And wow, that was a long review! lol. Just shows how much I adore this!! (And how much I love making you blush!) ^_~
Author's Response: hihi, well I couldn't be happier! after all, it is you I'm writing this for!
Date: 07/31/08 08:24 am Title: The third chapter
Awww, Lucy! What a lovely surprise to wake up to!!
You really are amazing, hunnie! And so is this story!
The start of this story was so sweet, Tom was adorable, with his thoughts about Bill.
But then... Poor, poor Bill and Tom. I think Gustav's right, it is painfully obvious they're in love with each other, but of course they wouldn't even conceive of the notion, with their respective positions. Even with the way Tom treats Bill during the night, him being a slave was bound to be an issue. I must admit to being somewhat annoyed with Tom, and his reactions to what Jorg said. But he is a teenager, and he has been brought up to believe certain things. I hope he realises those things are wrong.
I hope they realise their true feelings soon, too; although I have a feeling things will get worse for them before they get better. As much as I tried, I really couldn't dislike Jorg, despite what he did and said to Tom. I know he just wants what's best for his son; he's just blinded by their societies rules. I like that the characters aren't one-dimensional at all; they have a real depth to them.
As you can tell from this review, I am really getting into this story! I adore everything about it, and that's not just because it's written for me! It's simply brilliant, Lucy.
(Oh, did you see I actually posted a one-shot? First one in absolutely ages. Your writing of this really cheered me up and inspired me to write myself. So thank you!)
*hugs and kisses*
Emma
Author's Response: so, I'll give you one guess as to what this review did to me...and as I am sure you managed to get the correct answer; BLUSHING !!! sweet Jesus! I think it's really nice to write these kinds of stories because it gives you the opportunity to tamper with the rules a bit, if you get what I'm saying. It's like, I can write them into a society of my own choosing and have their thoughts on wrong and right based upon that, and so their actions is reflected in whatever power system I choose to give them...and now I'm sounding like a controlling maniac! well, that's nothing new I guess ,) So, so happy you like this darling, and I read your one'shot OO I couldn't move for like ten minutes after in danger of setting the whole house on fire with the temperature I got from it! again, thank you so much girl, you know what it means to me (besides a tomato face) <3
Date: 07/31/08 07:33 am Title: The third chapter
Luce my sweetheart.
i dont know what to say.
i wanna say so many things but i have no words!!
i just lost myself in your beautiful story.
allow me to tell that its one of your best works.
full chapter, a lot of motions between tom-with his father,& tom-bill.
honey, i really love this.
take your time and give us more of that piece of art.
much much love only for you:)
chris
Author's Response: oh chris <3 hearing you say that, it means so much to me! cus you've been with me for so many stories that I trust you when you say that this one is one of the better and that means a lot! I really hope you'll like what comes next! lots of blushing and many thank yous, yours luce <3
Date: 07/31/08 07:24 am Title: The third chapter
I made a ridiculous squeaky sound when I saw you updated. *blush*
Awwww~ I loved the sweetness at the beginning of the chapter, the way Tom is so tender with Bill, and how he reacted when he saw him in his room.
But Jorg *shakes head*... I didn't expect him to say those things to Tom, but what I didn't expect the most was Tom saying that he was homosexual. I hadn't seen it coming. In fact, I feared he would pay attention to what his father was telling him, about the girls and all... So I'm relieved! ^^
That was such an intense moment.
And Gustav *hugs him*, I love him so much in this story! ^^ Especially for telling Bill that he and Tom are in love with each other. 8D
Silly Tom, I hope he'll make it up to Bill in the next chapter! è_é
Great job! I'm so addicted to this story! (btw, have I mentioned I really really REALLY hope for a cute happy ending? ç_ç)
Author's Response: hey Paris (yeah, I'm gonna call you Paris cus you live in france and there's no name in your bio ,) deal with it, lol) thank you so much girl, God, this means a lot to me! haha so you didn't see the homosexual thing coming huh? ,) no I wanted to surprise you with that one ,p happy it worked! Well, Tom might not have listened to his father about the girls, but he did listen to him about Bill :'( hihi glad you like Gustav, I wanted to make him the 'hero on the sidelines' really hope you'll like the next chapter! lots of love <3 luce
Date: 07/31/08 05:45 am Title: The third chapter
Aww WOW! This is just great! I love it!
Author's Response: hihi thanksies ,)
Date: 07/31/08 04:24 am Title: The third chapter
yay, third chapter!
yeah.. maybe I'm a poor baby cos of the study thing, but I'm not that pitiful during I read your fic =) ILY as always! keep writing.
I think you should write a book. =0 If you do it, i'll buy it.
Author's Response: aw, thank you so much darling! you know how much it means to me by now ,) lol you think I should write a book? what, an erotic novel? ,p but seriously, thank you, that meant a lot to me!
Date: 07/30/08 07:47 pm Title: The second chapter
it was amazing.i really enjoyed reading ur story, u're a wonderful writer
Author's Response: oh thank you so much <3 that means a lot !