Date: 11/22/08 09:36 am Title: The first chapter
Hi Firelucy !
I've read the whole fic and it was just magic !!
So, i want to ask you something...I'm french, and many of my friends don't speak english..So i want, if you agree to traduce your fic for them,and post it in a french forum...I'll tell us that is YOUR fic of course and give them the link if they want to read it in english...
Please, answer me soon...
Kiss.
And thanks for this fic, you write really well...
Author's Response: thank you so, so much! I would be very honored if you'd chooce to tranlate my fic into french, that makes me smile ,) when you've posted it I wold really appreciate it if you could send me a link to the page and if it's not too much of a bother to tell me the general thoughts about the fic sinse I don't understand french ,p so you translating this is absolutely okay, as long as you remember to mention that's I'm the author ,) again, thank you so much for this !!! love
Date: 11/03/08 12:21 am Title: The fifth chapter
this story was absolutely beautiful....i dont even really know what to say besides that. i loved it!!
Author's Response: oh thank you so much, that meant a lot to me <3
Date: 10/02/08 09:24 am Title: The fifth chapter
Okay, so I couldt wait! I read the end before I read the whole story (aa) I just have to *bouncing while smiling like a maniac* This was just perfect! *bouncing more*
Author's Response: lol, you do that too ? that's a bad habit of mines as well xD *bouncing with you* thanskies <3
Date: 10/02/08 08:37 am Title: The second chapter
*bouncing* Enjoying the whole part:D *look at the 'next' button with a smile*
Author's Response: hihi, thanksies girl, so happy you like it ,)
Date: 08/25/08 07:37 am Title: The fifth chapter
PINEAPPLE! ^_^
Lucyyyy I missed reading your stories so much! I was so happy to see that you wrote something new ^^. I need to hurry up, there are so many new stories I want to read before the school starts *___*
I liked this story sooo much! When they were happy, my smile was like from here to berlin, and when Bill cried, I cried with him... You are such a briliant writer *___________________* you know I love you, dont ya?
*dixi transforms into melting puddle*
Now I've got a new reason to build you a temple :P
BUZIIIAKIIIII :*
Author's Response: iza, I want you to know (and this is big so pay attention) I really, truly, utterly do...LOVE YOU !!! God, I've missed you so much, reviews aren't the same without my little pole! jesus, how've I been managing ??? can't wait for you to read my next one as well, love you so so much iza ma less <3 hugs n kisses yours luce
Date: 08/24/08 05:40 pm Title: The fifth chapter
This story just captivated me completely. I cannot find words to describe the feeling this gave me. It was just so intense and full of feelings and love that I could almost feel it myself.
“But now,” Tom’s hand placed itself on Bill’s chest, right over his heart. “Now, this is mine.”
THAT was just the last thing this needed. Something so damn sweet and loving that it made me melt inside. Thank you for this amazing story.
Author's Response: oh lord, this just made me so extreemly happy !!! This story was chalenging to write because of all the emotions and themes and it feels so good to know that someone apreaciates it for what it is. Thank you so much for this wonderful review, it meant a lot to me !
Date: 08/24/08 03:25 am Title: The fifth chapter
I just read the whole story and cant say anything more that it was HOT!!! and a-m-a-z-i-n-g!!! LOVE IT!!!! :)
Author's Response: aw chocolate ,) thanks that means the world to me !!!
Date: 08/19/08 03:58 am Title: The first chapter
lol love the last line in this chapter.
Author's Response: thank you, that comment meant a lot !!!
Date: 08/16/08 04:58 am Title: The fifth chapter
omgomg omg
sooo beautiful
when it started snowing
and the words
the words bb
I love your words
the words Bill used when speaking to Jorg and...oh god
and the sex, so beautiful, so loving...
thank you thank you thank you
for maing my day sunny, evn tho its raining outside :p
( Im never ever gonna stop reading you fics ever again luce, thats a promise)
Author's Response: lol, I'm gonna hold you to that promise darling ,) I am so extreemely happy you liked this fic because it meant a lot to me, it was a fic that I enjoyed writing and I really believe it's one of my better. I am so happy you found your way to it at last, THANK YOU a thousand times girl! much love <3 yours luce
Date: 08/16/08 04:54 am Title: The fourth chapter
okej so now Im crying
because that was the fluffiest most beautiful and adorable chapter I have ever read in my entire life! god why have I been ignring this fic up unil now? I am sooo stupid, please forgive me! *falls down on the floor crying*
Author's Response: you are absolutely forgivven my love ! that is...the sweetest, most beautiful thing you could have ever told me em, it makes my heart sort of tingle ,) love you for this !!!
Date: 08/16/08 04:43 am Title: The third chapter
oh...
Gustav he is so
wow
his words are so beautiful but...not its actually your words
how can you write such beautiful words?
and...and...
gosh
I dont have any words left LOL its just too..no I dont know. I hope that Bill can wait, and that Tom will make it worth the wait in the end...wow.
You know Lucy...I am once again addicted to your writing...there is no way out :p
Author's Response: so happy you like Gustav, it was so much fun writing him in this, this is the Gustav I like ,) and thank you so much for those sweet words about my...well, words ,p means the world to me em <3
Date: 08/16/08 04:30 am Title: The second chapter
omg
that was so beautiful?
I must admit after the first chapter I was a bit...uncomfortable with the whole slave thing, but apperantly so is Tom...and I should have known T&B would make everyhting soo much better...it was just so sweet, I loved every word...you are truly gifted Lucy!
Author's Response: oh thank you so much em, you know how much it means to me! it was a bit wierd writing the whole master/slave business, but I really had a feeling of how I wanted things to turn out and this chapter really became everything I hoped it would !
Date: 08/16/08 04:17 am Title: The first chapter
oh my god
O_O
I can honestly say I have never read anything like it
Im not sure wheter I should like it or be...repulsed by it LOL
but yeah I like it, hm...a lot O_O
Author's Response: lol, happy you're not repulsed by it ,) I was wondering when you'd get back around Em, I've missed you ! love <3 luce
Date: 08/14/08 09:26 pm Title: The fifth chapter
Simply adorable! One of the best quick fics ever. Simply sweet adn darling and cute and lovely...and oh it was just YAY!
And some of those scenes, wow. I thought something was eating my stomach from the inside out!
Author's Response: oh my God, *blushes* that is so extreemely sweet of you ! and lol to the stomach comment ,) thanks for reviewing me, it means a lot !!!
Date: 08/13/08 02:15 am Title: The fifth chapter
I loved iiiittt
Author's Response: thanksies ,)
Date: 08/12/08 11:30 am Title: The first chapter
Alva????
About the quote:
It is said by a guy on the evil team and it is about the French language:
He likes it a lot and especially to swear in. He says that it rolls of his tongue and "It's like wiping your arse with silk!"
A similar feeling to reading your poetic language... :)
Please take the time Lucy, to see the Matrix trilogy!
It is really, really good!
Author's Response: OMG lololol xD okay, so yeah, innapropriate quote ,) and Alva is Alvasonda, she's a writer here, really good work, she loves pinapple ,p I will promise to see the matrix trilogy now ,) lol
Date: 08/12/08 07:47 am Title: The first chapter
Wow, the ending!
*stares at screen for five minutes, debating on what to write*
Uhm, what can I saaay? ..^^
*stares at screen for another five minutes*
To come home from your short holiday, and to find out that one of your favourite stories, if not the best story ever, has been updated, is just sooo.. *word?* .. well, I can't find a word for it, but I can try to get my point through: JoyBringing, HappyMaking, BlissSpreading, SmileForcing.. etc. xD
(Hoping I is clear? xD)
*Re-reads review a million times, and feels like somethings missing? :(*
I would like to give you one of those endless reviews, but my brain feels like jelly. So I guess I'll just end it here, by trying to tell you how amazing you are, and how you and your stories, always brightens my day. :)
Oh, and Luce, before I forget:
PINEAPPLE!
Author's Response: lol, pinapple xD thank you so, so, so much for this review it meant the world to me ! I am just so extreemly grateful and happy that someone feels that way about my story, because I've felt that way with stories as well and I know how hard it is to get out coherent words after ,) so THANK YOU for feeling that way about my story and telling me so! lots of love <3 luce
Date: 08/12/08 06:48 am Title: The fifth chapter
Thank you for this epilogue, totally perfect! *-*
That was so sweet! ^^
Author's Response: lol, gotta take good care of my reviewers now don't I ,) glad it made you happy !
Date: 08/11/08 01:25 pm Title: The fifth chapter
Aww (L) That was so cute :D Gustav rocks :D And tom and bill were really cute !
Author's Response: Gustav is the king ,) thanksies !!!
Date: 08/11/08 04:21 am Title: The fifth chapter
Wonderful, that was exactly the end IŽd imagined... although IŽd expected some complications and your quick quit suprised me, however, I liked it. It was really nice story. Thank you :-)
Author's Response: That was why I brought it to be winter so fast, so that any troubles would have been delt with along the way and I could focus on the good part ,) thank you so much <3