Date: 07/28/08 04:53 am Title: The first chapter
Oh my favorite author came back.
with a new so different story.
the fact is that you hooked me from the first sigh.
i love the way you describe Bill.
i am sure that your new work will be my addiction.
LU for that.
More sweetie
Author's Response: chris <3 hey girl, God I've been away for too long *grumbles* but now I'm back and I get to read your wonderful reviews and life is smiling to me again ,) I'm so happy you like this story because it means a lot to me ! much love, luce
Date: 07/27/08 09:35 pm Title: The first chapter
omg, omg your new story !
sobs, I have to go to studdy now, I'll put it into my mp4 and read when I'm in running bus. XDXD so I couldn't sleep.....:D anyway, your fic is just LOVE!
Author's Response: naw, poor baby *pets you* hihi I really love that you love my fic ,) *hugs* <3
Date: 07/27/08 09:07 pm Title: The first chapter
oh, i like this one a lot! I hope you'll update soon
Author's Response: I have the new chap ready and I'll update soon, promise ,) thanksies !
Date: 07/27/08 08:40 pm Title: The first chapter
wow. i love how everything you write is so beautifully described. its amazing. :)
Author's Response: oh thank you *heart eyes* I was really anxious that my descriptions got a little boring, very happy you liked them !
Date: 07/27/08 07:39 pm Title: The first chapter
*reads reviews*
Oh no please, I don't want any Biorg! ç_ç
Author's Response: not to worry my love, this girl does not write Biorg !
Date: 07/27/08 07:24 pm Title: The first chapter
I really like how you've started this! I'm definitely going to be waiting for more, and I've always wondered about a Bill-being-a-feisty-slave story but I've never actually read one x3 Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: 'a Bill-being-a-feisty-slave story ' lol ,) that was one way to describe it I guess ,p really hope you're gonna like this one ! thanks
Date: 07/27/08 06:40 pm Title: The first chapter
wow, really like this one:D the plot seems quite intriguing!
Author's Response: so happy bout that, hope you'll like the way it evolves ,)
Date: 07/27/08 06:30 pm Title: The first chapter
WOW! Awesome. Srsly. You're writing more right? I LOVE fics like this, sex slaves and the like....
I love the Georg way looking at him too...If you added Biorg i would be so very happy. XD. Of course, it would have to end in twincest though....XD.
*SQUEE* I love fics from you Lucy! ^^
Author's Response: I realized as well that Georg was looking at Bill a little creepy oO but no, no Biorg in this, I really don't write anything other than twincest (how sick am I) xD God I'm so happy you like this, lol I have a kink for slaves and such as well, just really fun to write ,) *hugs*
Date: 07/27/08 06:03 pm Title: The first chapter
I'm already in love with this =)
Author's Response: so happy ,)
Date: 07/27/08 05:54 pm Title: The first chapter
That was great I loved it.
Author's Response: thank you <3
Date: 07/27/08 05:36 pm Title: The first chapter
My bad, I just realized you said Tom was 18, and Bil was a little younger, looked hardly legal, but all the same, is probably 17 or 18.
I also took a little more time to see how you described Georg and Gustav. It was really quite funny. Glad Jorg respects them lol! I know he does in his own way, but still...
Tom like the gypsies huh? Any chance Bill's got a connection to them? That would be kinda fun.
Argh! I want an update!
Oh, and btw, guess what! I'm on the top ten list for most prolific reviewers. I take it to mean that I truly have no life, but I'm still fairly pleased. ;)
Author's Response: you know, you should get a job as an interrogator, or a journalist or something because girl, you ask more questions than them anyways xD but I have to tell you how deeply, extreemly, humongously grateful I am for that because it gives me the chance to check if there's something I should mention, after all not everyone can read minds, and those who trie to read my mind will probably get lost in all the random stuff in there ,) lol, no, Bill has no connection to the gypsies, that was a mere way to make Tom a little bit more...uninterested in slavery ,p *hands you golden ribon saying 'Miss Reviewer'* congratulations Queen ,) and you have just as much a life as I do girl...which means practically none oO anyways, lots of love <3
Date: 07/27/08 05:13 pm Title: The first chapter
Horray!!!!! Lucy's back! And I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this first chapter! You better devote a ton of time to it! Even though I'm sure you've already got a zillion other ideas.
I love the idea of slave-master fics. This is gonna sound weird coming from me but it makes it even kinkier!
I also loved Bill! Whan and entrance! He's a spit fire huh? He's not going to give into Tom too easily I hope. Tom already seems to be falling for him.
I want ages btw. How old is Bill? Tom? Georg? Gustav?
What does Jorg do? How does he make money? Are his son's already in the buisness?
And I want Bill's backround story. Has he always been a slave? Honestly w/ that much energy it doesn't sound like it. Did his parents sell him? Was he kiddnaped?
By the sound of things Tom's a virgin. How about Bill? Kinda hope so.
As a slave is Bill allowed to love Tom. Actually I guess the better question is can Tom love Bill and it be acceptable? He's the youngest so there isn't as much pressure on him right?
What about Jorg's wife? I'm assuming he has a fair number of concubines, is his wife jelous? Or is she dead any way?
He didn't seem upset by Tom's choice, far from it in fact. Does that mean it's acceptable to take male lovers as well as female? Was Tom the first in the family (maybe besides Jorg) to do so?
I'm love you so much!!!!
Hope the wilderness didn't eat you alive.
Update super soon and make my life!!!
-Your Queen
Author's Response: *head desk...HARD* QUEEN !!! oh God. okay so this is how things are at the moment, I've written three chapters to this and you just pretty much summed up everything that's coming in the next chap OO what are you, a mind reader ? because your questions seriously hit close to home ten out of nine times ! so, what can I answer? Jorg's the typical landlord type, makes money on people renting his land and his houses and stuff and then the people living on his land can farm and such and he makes profit of it, a good landlord though, dosn't cheat people! none of the sons are in the business yet. Tom's a virgin, yes! Tom is the youngest, but don't you think that with brothers like the Gs a lot of the preasure actually befalls him ,) Jorg does not have cocubines, he's married (she'll be in the next chap) it's acceptable to have male lovers, Georg bought one too! lol and no, the wilderness didn't eat you alive although the moose and the sheeps tried, they really did oO I'll update soon, but not so soon that you won't be aggrivated and frustrated that I'm sitting on a new chap, but won't post just yet...you know, just to be mean ,p love, luce <3
Date: 07/27/08 05:10 pm Title: The first chapter
*read it a second time*
Okay, I'm addicted.
I love how Tom reacts. Gustav made me smile. Georg made me laugh. And Jorg... *shakes head* XD (and I just want to hug Bill ^^)
Please update soon! ç_ç
Author's Response: hihi so not so disturbing anymore ? ,) I love that you liked my characterizations, that meant a lot to me ! lots of love, luce <3
Date: 07/27/08 05:01 pm Title: The first chapter
O: Lucy! This is, oh meine gott, amazing! It's soo different, i love it already!
I loved how at the beginning you talked about these 'toys', but in a way that you wouldn't think them to be people, and i was so confused as to what they were. I was not even expecting them to be anything like this!
And Tom, your description of him is so sexy, dominant and a little bit concieded, and yet he seems so, for lack of a better word, polite. The way he's all possesive over Bill, and Bill attaches himself to him, sooo hot!=P
This is soo ingenious. How do you come up with these ideas luce? ;D
I can't wait to see how this story develops. I can tell its going to be a favourite already.
Can't wait for the next chapter! =)
Yours,
Andi
Author's Response: Andi <3 *squeals* hey girl ,) God, you have no idea how much it means to me that you liked this one, it's such an important story for me ! lol and you know me, had to keep you confused for a while as to what the 'toys' were ,p ooh, and you like my Tom huh? I do to, it's so much fun to write him this way! now how I come up with these rules...well, you see there are these little creatures inside my head that just keep on making my fingers write the wierdest of things and this is their new creation oO I just let them get on with their business and it seems it's paying off xD hope you'll like how the story developes, much love, yours luce <3
Date: 07/27/08 04:52 pm Title: The first chapter
THIS .... IS ... AMAZING!
I need more of it ! *gasps*
Author's Response: aww ,) there will be more really soon love, promise !
Date: 07/27/08 04:45 pm Title: The first chapter
Can I tell you for a third time how much I love this? This story distracts me, no end. This first chapter has such a sunny, airy feeling when Tom is shopping. I really enjoyed the detail in the slaves and their surroundings, and Tom's feelings about them. And how the prose corresponds so well to the lyrics is wonderful. I'm really excited about this one, Luce, I know it's going to be fantastic!
Author's Response: yea you may hun ,p it just makes me blush real badly and then I walk around smiling for the rest of the day ! how you manage to get such a poetic description out of this fic is beyond me, but I really enjoy reading reviews like this that tell me what I've done right, so I know which way to write some other time. I really do hope it's gonna be good Mel, I'm just so thrilled that people are actually liking this ,) thank you girl, much love <3
Date: 07/27/08 04:42 pm Title: The first chapter
Oh my god! *squeals* (And I really did squeal when I saw your email! lmao) Thank you, thank you! That's it, you've done it now, lol, you're stuck with me!! I really will love you forever for writing this!!
And it's a really interesting story, too! Definitely got my interest! *faves* Can't wait for more ^_^
Author's Response: see, now this is how the circle goes; lucy makes emma happy by writing fic, emma makes lucy happy by being happy about it, because lucy is so happy she writes next chapter, which hopefully will make emma happy <3 thank you girl, I just wanted to let you know how much I appreciate the way you take care of us newcomers and make us believe in ourselves enough to do this stuff! and this is my way of saying thanks ,) much love <3 luce
Date: 07/27/08 04:41 pm Title: The first chapter
Hey, a little disturbing, but I like it. In fact, I love it! ^^
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: lol you thought it was disturbing ? ,p glad you liked it love, thanks !
Date: 07/27/08 04:31 pm Title: The first chapter
ok!!
fucking love this!!
man, i can't wait for the next chapter, this idea is genius!!
Author's Response: weeeeeeeee thank you so so much, God, you have no idea how much that means to me !!!
Date: 07/27/08 04:10 pm Title: The first chapter
A wonderful start, I am gripped by the story so far and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: aw ,) my first reviewer <3 thank you so much, and I do hope you will enjoy the story as it proceeds !