Date: 09/18/11 01:44 pm Title: I.
YOU"VE GOT TO CONTINUE! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
Date: 09/18/11 01:30 pm Title: Prologue.
This is so beautifully written, and holds enough suspense that I'm dyin to know more. Great job!
Date: 07/29/08 05:34 pm Title: I.
I didn't find many mistakes. I sorta got lost, but that's because I'm sorta tired myself. That, and for the first half of this chapter, I had no freaking clue what story this was.
I feel like a bad person. *shames herself*
Date: 07/28/08 11:43 am Title: I.
well done... by pure coincidence i am reading this chapter after a shitty day at work and my feelings are so similar to Tom's... well you gave a nice description, draw a great picture i mean... well...
i'm curious what's going to happen next. huh?
and your writing is still the one that can't leave me untouched. it enthrals me...
it's a pity that The Quiet was never finished... I was obsessed with it last August.. nearly dying that i was going away for two weeks and would have had missed the following chapter.. but it never appeared... (( still have the existing pages printed and re-read them sometimes...
Author's Response: Funny you should mention the Quiet. I'm writing the next chapter as we speak :)
Date: 07/28/08 09:09 am Title: I.
i like it...more please? =)
Date: 07/28/08 08:58 am Title: I.
I love how much your writing is similar to CP. Not my CP, though.
Date: 07/28/08 07:33 am Title: I.
this is really good and unique. Hope you update soon :)
Date: 07/27/08 05:20 pm Title: Prologue.
This was amazing. ;-;
We haven't seen stuff from you in a while.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks dear. I'm back :)
Date: 07/27/08 02:56 pm Title: Prologue.
I loved how the words had such an easy flow to them throughout the chapter! And Tom, you portrayed the character very well. You certainly drew me in!
Author's Response: Thank you, love. I really enjoy writing this.
Date: 07/27/08 02:41 pm Title: Prologue.
ooooh...interesting...more please...